Best u Can Posted June 9, 2006 Author Share Posted June 9, 2006 poem 1 unwoowoo peakaboo I see you unscrewing the shoe of a late kangaroo is dressing so fine to recite rhythmical rhymes at the last line a winner wakes to time undressing a kangaroo dressed to the nines poem 2 purposely perceive a painted pointing in nightmares alight a three headed rat wearing his three headed rat hat eating babies with a black cat that broke the curfew in old middle hell where you are you cannot tell until a ticking bomb explodes and alive you're sitting on a knife when you try to leave the devil pulls up a chair and says that he cares Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 I've got an other one, finished yesterday evening... Called Be your Looking at the moon I know you'll coming soon I hope to see you everyday Next to me when I awake Oh! I need you more than the air I breathe Please darling, let me be your To dive with you into the night's depth To show you I love you for sure Then I kiss you, slowly To taste your lips, deeply Seeing your eyes on me You really make me happy Oh! I need you more than the air I breathe Please darling, let me be your To dive with you into the night's depth To show you I love you for sure Your eyes are going through me You can read what I'm thinking I say " How are you doing?" You just say " It's in me..." Oh! I need you more than the air I breathe Please darling, let me be your To dive with you into the night's depth To show you I love you for sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 11, 2006 Share Posted June 11, 2006 my very last one.finished now. Called Lie The sky burns this evening All I was wondering Is where are we going, Us, poor human beings. Yes, we shouldn't lie, Everyone is going to die Well, don't be so shy And look where birds fly. If you're not afraid to be hurted I want you to see the truth Yes, everyone knows it's tough So, do it without a thought. Yes, we shouldn't lie, Everyone is going to die Well, don't be so shy And look where birds fly. Truth is a prey We run after it everyday When we get it, we just say It's now an empty shell. Yes, we shouldn't lie, Everyone is going to die Well, don't be so shy And look where birds fly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 Thanks clearascrystal!! :D :kiss: Well i've got 2 others...Coldplay is a great source of insipiration... called in my arms It's a bright day The summer sun warms us Both are far away Leaning in a field of flowers. I hold you in my arms here Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams. I awake in the night Seeing you breathing peacefully I kiss you tenderly As we met at the first sight! I hold you in my arms here Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams. The only thing I want Is to be with you I'll tell I can't Help me to think about you! And this one is called The one I think about green spaces You, sitting in front where the sun faces Me, coming from the darkest shadows I see you, I just want to know How you feel, now, here, With me, in front of you when you look at me? I want to be the one The only one who loves you I want to put my hands in yours But love isn't a race I used to win Then our lips meet tenderly What a soft, deep kiss, and slowly My arms around you, yours around me Now your tasted lips are missing You're so cute darling, enjoying That you tell me you love me I want to be the one The only one who loves you I want to put my hands in yours But love isn't a race I used to win Today you're always here I won't lose you I swear 'Cos I love you my dear... i like these :nice: !!! sounds like there is some lucky girl in your arms :wink3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 I really would like there is one...maybe I've got someone in my mind... I have to try with her.... "How can you know it when you don't try" I've finished this one this morning... Called Thieves... Earth is so tired And human beings so weird Always destroy to create. So we are all taking a step Closer to death Without being at peace. We're all thieves We all steal our own lives We're lying to ourselves And the problems won't be solve. As Earth feeds us We could have a thought We could have thanked her. Now we can't be sorrier Cos she gets angry Cos she doesn't want to see us. We're all thieves We all steal our own lives We're lying to ourselves And the problems won't be solve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 Hey, thats great. Is it just me or does that poem curve on the left-hand side? I think it's just me :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 ^Maybe...even if I'm right handed...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
music_fr33k Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 i really think they are great!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 ^oh!!! thx !!:) well I've an other one... Called Control... A new day smiles Lots of birds fly I just don't wanna This day to be hard. I feel so good today But everyone says Life is hard, life is tough For me, life is a rough Always changing We can't control this kind of thing. When my vision swims I look at the sun, asking him Which way do I turn To put one feet in the future. I can do it for sure Everything, behind me, will burn. Life is hard, life is tough For me, life is a rough Always changing We can't control this kind of thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 omg, my creative way is endless... thx everyone...thx to Coldplay too...they are my creative energy! the last called Time Time is running so fast And life doesn't last Sometimes, we're looking in the past But we have no time to waste. We're here to live We're here 'cos of one reason We're all alive To see the rythm of the seasons. We have to run As fast as he has always done We don't know where he was gone So, behind us, we're letting bones. We're here to live We're here 'cos of a reason We're all alive To see the rythm of the seasons. Then our lives will be slowier And the time carries on faster His speed is getting upper... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 Again, my mind makes me write...:D This one is called Something to Hide We see nothing in the full light We don't know against who we fight We just know we can't win Cos it's like trying to catch wind. Truth regains our sight, thus We're afraid, just Cos we've something to hide Yeah! We're all so shy! Don't live in the shadows We have so much of us to show We shouldn't have to lie We should let our mind fly. Truth regains our sight, thus We're afraid, just Cos we've something to hide Yeah! We're all so shy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emilien88 Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 I'm too bad in English to write poems! Oh...I can try but you'll laugh when you'll read my English!:smug: ( I'm stupid, you're reading it! ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 you can post it and we (the english speakers/writers..) can help you edit it.. this would be an excellent way for you to practice your English ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 14, 2006 Share Posted June 14, 2006 I can't help me to write!!!!!!!! My last...called Like a Child I look at the waves of clouds And I just ask them loud Why are we there? No answer, they carry on their way... I'm like a child Always asking questions I just want to see the side Which goes in every direction. Sometimes I stare at the lake It just makes me shake With my lost mind in the water And it never gives answers. I'm like a child Always asking questions I just want to see the side Which goes in every direction. Now I just wonder Who could give me answers It just makes me worrier... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 14, 2006 Share Posted June 14, 2006 I think it would be my last one...coz I'm sick of this fucking life....unfair!!!I don't want to suicide, but I'm so depressed....My creative way is leaving...My energy is leaving....:( :cry: called This Side I' d like to be an other one I'd like to be gone I'd like here'd be there And there'd be here I'm just sad I feel so bad I can't hide This side of me. I just want to go I want to show I really want to grow I just want to know... I'm just sad I feel so bad I can't hide This side of me. I'm hurted I fade Every day My mind is dead... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 and...no!!!!an other one...I'm back Called Clearly seen I see the night coming The shadows are dancing They are playing with the lightnings They are all enjoying. When the light is here They all disappear The light brings them the fear The fear to be clearly seen. Clouds go here and there In the middle of nowhere They strech, lying on the air And they release their pearls. When the light is here They all disappear The light brings them the fear The fear to be clearly seen. Lies are everywhere, peacefully And truth is hidden, shamefully Will the light make us see On which way we gonna live? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oenona Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 nice poem, Mickael. :nice: Especially the end of it, I didn't expect you were talking about the truth and the lies. Anyway, I prefer the poems that are about :heart: I've read several of them which were about this topic... really beaufitul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 ^Thx sweetie!!!:kiss: Well an other one!!!! Called Lose Here there is no noise In my head, I hear voices They speak so loudly They're talking to me, they say to me Be brave, be yourself, Don't lose your beliefs I feel the tears coming Cos I'm always thinking Thinking about you darling You're an angel and I just see one of your wings... Be brave, be yourself, Don't lose your beliefs I'd like to show you How much I love you I hope you do too I just don't want to lose someone like you Be brave, be yourself, Don't lose your beliefs But when you can't hope, When you fall from the top Don't think you have to stop... Cos life is a cycle of hope... see you soon for a new one!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oenona Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 This one is incredibly beautiful but so sad... :cry: I don't know why, but sad poems always touches me much more than the cheerful ones. good luck! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Here is a poem i wrote a while ago...I wrote it while I was listening to Coldplay-Gravity..... Why is it me who is sitting here alone? Why is it me who has to live on her own? Nobody close by my side, nobody there who gives me love and pride, just sitting here and crying about that song, wondering what did I do wrong? Can't stop crying right now, because my feelings won't allow. The song is going to start again, and no,no I won't complain. I won't turn it off, because it reminds me of things like love. This song shows my real feelings.... I'm always joking and always happy, but now my feelings are expressed deeply. My soul is crying behind a locked door, it still hasn't found what it was looking for. Surely it will stop someday, and then the sad feeling will be away. But for now I just can listen to the song, and think about where I belong! Hahha...I wrote this maybe 8 months ago.... and it's interesting if you read it again after a while...to see if you are still in tis situation or if something has changed..hehe.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 ^oh yeah!!!!that's my current mood! MMh i like your poem!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
music_fr33k Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 This one is incredibly beautiful but so sad... :cry: I don't know why, but sad poems always touches me much more than the cheerful ones. good luck! :) that poem is soooo beautiful!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 ohh thx!!! EDIT: thx to everyone!!!!really! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 i like ur poem, mickael :nice: :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Thx!!!!!!^ Ohhhh! My god...I'M IN LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVE:heart: :heart: :heart: So there is an other one...called Burning Love is in the air Love is everywhere Love is all you can share So I'll tell you if I dare My heart is burning 'Cos you're playing With my heart's strings The way you looked at me Your eyes were reading me I felt like leaving where I live Please do that again! Please! My heart is burning 'Cos you're playing With my heart's strings I wish to find you I really want to tell you How I feel when I think about you I hear a noise, an opening door Oh! Dear! Can it be you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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