Gitta Rensolo Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 Poems in french?No way for me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 I done this just know. I know no name for it yet. Thinking of calling it Elf song. For the beauty of the woman it is written for is like that of some magical being. The sun blossoms now in your hair Sitting on a chair looking really fair I cant help but wonder if you ever ponder The things you do to me Just sitting there looking really fair. As you turn the wheel of a boat With the wind flapping about your coat I cant help but wopnder if you ever ponder The way you make me feel When you stand there turning the wheel of a boat. Now you stand in a field of flowers I cant help gazing upon you for hours Always in wonder if you ever ponder The way my heart is constantly showered With loving thoughts, just staring at you I guess it will cease to matter I guess my heart will just have to shatter When you pull up the rope and sail away Into some unknown and carefree day Back to the sunset whench you came Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 hey silverion this is a nice poem.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 27, 2005 Share Posted August 27, 2005 that's a very nice poem silverion :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Thanks guys. It just kinda came to me. Had to do it straight away :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Cmon guys. No one else got some poetry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted September 2, 2005 Share Posted September 2, 2005 Well I thought about writing again...but I wasn't in the right mood!When I've got a new one I'll post it....unfortunately all my poems are in german... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted September 7, 2005 Share Posted September 7, 2005 Got a new song. What you think? Beware the sea Passing away amongst the trees Skin tickled by the leaves This my last journey Going over the sea, to be free Away from sorrow and pain Away from sweet summer rain No longer see the rolling plain No longer will i feel the same In the distance i here it call As it hits the sundering shore Told by the wisest of the fair Beware the sea, Dont stray there But i strayed, i became caught No longer to think other thought Goodby dear friend i know so well Goodby Gonders white tower bell So i pass to a fair land Of many great and beautiful things My destiny is close to hand When i find my long lost kin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted September 7, 2005 Share Posted September 7, 2005 my sis wrote one about me something about me being a pig :rolleyes: it was actually quite good though not very flattering- i'll see if i can find it. I know for a fact its not as good as Ari's or silverion's stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sienna Posted September 7, 2005 Share Posted September 7, 2005 can we post stuff we wrote???? :embarrased: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 my sis wrote one about me something about me being a pig :rolleyes: it was actually quite good though not very flattering- i'll see if i can find it. I know for a fact its not as good as Ari's or silverion's stuff. Well i do intend to do this sort of thing for a living oneday. Become a singer-songwriter that is. Just takes practice :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted September 10, 2005 Share Posted September 10, 2005 wow that'll be cool, you're definitly on your way. :D we'll get first notice of your first gig here at coldplaying right? maybe even some free tickets ;) ...sill trying to find pig poem... here's a limmerick i like in the mean while (which i did not write- from book) There was an old man from Peru Who dreamt he was eating his shoe He woke in a fright, in the middle of the night And found it was perfectly true. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 11, 2005 Share Posted September 11, 2005 oh i want to do the same silverion, be a songwriter. :D that's cool ;) i want to be a writer but i don't mind be a songwriter too. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted September 12, 2005 Author Share Posted September 12, 2005 wow this is awesome, I've been gone for a long time in California because my grandmother died and this is a great thing to see. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted September 12, 2005 Author Share Posted September 12, 2005 Survival Set the earth upon the sea Set the living in a desert land build their sand huts wearing animal skin washed away wash them away living in peace sheltered by trees the furry animal knows earthly peace it takes its babies out to the road but now the raccoon she's all alone who will cry out for me when someone takes my baby we make the ground and we're swept off our feet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 Welcome back wow that's a beautiful poem. love the last verse :cool: have you put those lyrics into song? cause for some reason while reading i was hearing music :) love your avatar too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted September 16, 2005 Author Share Posted September 16, 2005 Welcome back wow that's a beautiful poem. love the last verse :cool: have you put those lyrics into song? cause for some reason while reading i was hearing music :) love your avatar too! :/ I wish I knew how. I've never made a real song before. I mean, I've sort of made some short ones, but I don't know how to make a real one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 no worries, you'll become a famous poet one day , have heaps of books published, ;) some band will read it maybe even name themselves after one of your poems or most likely put your lyrics to song :D ....lets just hope its a good band and not some one like Britney Spears son or somefin :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sienna Posted September 16, 2005 Share Posted September 16, 2005 i wrote this about three months ago, (ihave more, i'll post later)its in spanish, but here it goes:(i;ll try to translate it, but it wont be the same) El Silencio de Ayer Las noches mi sueño ha perdido, mis ojos ya no cierran mas. Amargo y Agrio mi sabor se ha vuelto, dulce miel jamas ya no vuleve, mi universo perdio sus estrellas, frio sol perdio el brillo ayer. Las niñas lloran al contemplar mis noches, luces mis noches necesitan con prisa. Mi musica en paciencia camina. Ayer, bailaba, cantaba, gozaba, en silencio susurra llantos que jamas se oiran. en silencio todo esta en calma, congelado todo esta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted September 17, 2005 Author Share Posted September 17, 2005 Thanks for the encouragement :) The Fox running around lightly prancing some might say she is dancing trotting, trotting, trotting along she dances to the beat of her own song came upon the edge of the wood don't know what to do for her own good dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song she fell off the world into ours wondering what to do with all the hours she scared the livestock off a farm don't know what to do she heard an alarm something's coming it is tall it spoke with a threatening call she goes next door and hides in the trees "alas, it hurts a trap has caught me" after hours of howling she almost dies but another man heard the cries he takes her away to live another day lucky she's here a while longer to stay so they take her back to live in the wood they know what to do for her own good and she's dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*andrea* Posted September 17, 2005 Share Posted September 17, 2005 i wrote this about three months ago, (ihave more, i'll post later)its in spanish, but here it goes:(i;ll try to translate it, but it wont be the same) El Silencio de Ayer Las noches mi sueño ha perdido, mis ojos ya no cierran mas. Amargo y Agrio mi sabor se ha vuelto, dulce miel jamas ya no vuleve, mi universo perdio sus estrellas, frio sol perdio el brillo ayer. Las niñas lloran al contemplar mis noches, luces mis noches necesitan con prisa. Mi musica en paciencia camina. Ayer, bailaba, cantaba, gozaba, en silencio susurra llantos que jamas se oiran. en silencio todo esta en calma, congelado todo esta. awn! great! :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted September 17, 2005 Share Posted September 17, 2005 I find poetry boring... ...I don't really like paintings or fine arts... ...but yet I love art, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kekita Posted September 18, 2005 Share Posted September 18, 2005 ^ :thinking: :huh: oh wait i think i know what u mean- i like the Graffiti around Melbourne they are really beautiful and there are a lot of stencile images around the city too- i love it, its like a free gallery. Sienna, que lindo! tenes un talento (no se si asi se dice en espanol en inglese: talent) mi universo perdio sus estrellas, frio sol perdio el brillo ayer y mi musica en paciencia camina. - WOW :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sienna Posted September 18, 2005 Share Posted September 18, 2005 aww, gracias kekita....i actually want to be a writer...maybe i do have a shot at it.. here's the translation: Yesterday's Silence my nights have lost sleep, my eyes no longer close. bitter and sour my taste has become, sweet honey is not coming back. yesterday,my universe lost its stars and the cold sun lost its shine. my eyes cry whenever they gaze upon my silent nights, in a hurry, my nights need light. my music in quiet paces it walks, yestetday, it danced, sang joyfully. in silence it whispers my crying that will never be heard, in silence all is calm, frozen everything is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverion Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 Thanks for the encouragement :) The Fox running around lightly prancing some might say she is dancing trotting, trotting, trotting along she dances to the beat of her own song came upon the edge of the wood don't know what to do for her own good dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song she fell off the world into ours wondering what to do with all the hours she scared the livestock off a farm don't know what to do she heard an alarm something's coming it is tall it spoke with a threatening call she goes next door and hides in the trees "alas, it hurts a trap has caught me" after hours of howling she almost dies but another man heard the cries he takes her away to live another day lucky she's here a while longer to stay so they take her back to live in the wood they know what to do for her own good and she's dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song Not sure about the translation of your other song. It could be worded better. But this is really good. You should seek about getting it published. I am sure it would look great with some flowing script in bold and the picture of a fox in the background and a border. Try it. This poem desearves it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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