If you could just lay with me

If only I could sing to you

right here right now

all the things that i could say

but at the end of the day

i will always love you

 

standing under summer sky

watching all the planes go by

and the clouds, they take on shapes

while we sit and dream of our escape (touch of the escapist, but it does fit hmm) :P

aw go on someone (:

in desperate need of a chorus now.

our song is dying :\

anybody? its too far now to forget it, i already like the melody i've got too much

:P

If you could just lay with me

If only I could sing to you

right here right now

all the things that i could say

but at the end of the day

i will always love you

 

standing under summer sky

watching all the planes go by

and the clouds, they take on shapes

while we sit and dream of our escape

from this architectured world we are about to live

 

[Massive guitar solo]

from this architectured world we are about to live

 

architectured by... a carnival of idiots? :wink3:

architectured by... a carnival of idiots? :wink3:

 

well coldplay say they plagiarize other peoples work so why cant we :P

:laugh3: I s'pose. Subtlety is key.

 

anyway anyway.

 

If you could just lay with me

If only I could sing to you

right here right now

all the things that i could say

but at the end of the day

i will always love you

 

standing under summer sky

watching all the planes go by

and the clouds, they take on shapes

while we sit and dream of our escape

 

from this architectured world we are about to live

something to gain and something to give

LETS START A NEW ONE! :dance:

 

"I lay awake and touch myself over thoughts of anne robinson...."

 

YOUR TURN! :P

If you could just lay with me

If only I could sing to you

right here right now

all the things that i could say

but at the end of the day

i will always love you

 

standing under summer sky

watching all the planes go by

and the clouds, they take on shapes

while we sit and dream of our escape

 

from this architectured world we are about to live

[theres?]something to gain and something to give

but all in all, i just wanna break free...wanna break free

LETS START A NEW ONE! :dance:

 

"I lay awake and touch myself over thoughts of anne robinson...."

 

YOUR TURN! :P

I lay awake and touch myself over thoughts of anne robinson.

i like it when she does the weakest link whatever time it's on

but all in all, i just wanna break free...wanna break free

 

that sounds a bit lik freddy mercury:lol:

If you could just lay with me

If only I could sing to you

right here right now

all the things that i could say

but at the end of the day

i will always love you

 

standing under summer sky

watching all the planes go by

and the clouds, they take on shapes

while we sit and dream of our escape

 

from this architectured world we are about to live

theres something to gain and something to give

but at the end...we just want to give in

dreaming dreams we won't live

^ oh i really like that, well done you :P

 

let me know when its finished and i'll do a little dodgy recording if you like.

 

M.

well, its recorded :anxious: so.

 

a) how should I put it up? and

b) would anyone even like to hear it? :laugh3:

that sounds a bit lik freddy mercury:lol:

 

hahaha i didnt noticed that until then..ur version sounds better..is sone1 actually gonna record this then?

New one:

 

 

If you could only see the...

well, its recorded :anxious: so.

 

a) how should I put it up? and

b) would anyone even like to hear it? :laugh3:

 

i wanna hear it...link it up on sendshare and then post it

freddy mercury *grin*

 

it turned out quite dylanesque actually :confused:

i actually really wanna here it now...does it sound good or cheezy?

you can be the judge of that :P

 

http://www.sendspace.com/file/s03t7p

 

M.

*bites fingers*

now I understand how nerve-wracking it is for bands to release their albums :nice:

i wanna hear it too!!!:thumbsup:

Oh wow, that's FANTASTIC! :stunned:

 

I'm speechless! :nice:

you can be the judge of that :P

 

http://www.sendspace.com/file/s03t7p

 

M.

 

:shocked2::shocked2:

 

that sounds well gud....you took out most of my lyrics....im glad u did that would have made it sound cheezy....well done!!!!!

 

P.S. how did u come up with every so quick

you can be the judge of that :P

 

http://www.sendspace.com/file/s03t7p

 

M.

 

HOLY SHIT!!THATS AWESOME!!