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Reilly

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This is a song I wrote a couple hours ago about my ex girlfriend, I still love her, but jeesus, what a bitch. Notice my particular nastiness in the 2nd verse.

 

It looks short, its about 3 mins long, so it is fairly short. Here goes...

 

 

 

Its Growing

 

 

Of all the things, you hold close to your skin

Im a breath away, but Im still nothing

And I heard, the screaming

And I heard, the passer-by

 

If you keep acting this way, there will be no-one at your grave

And I cant think of one thing, that makes you a human being

And I heard, the screaming

And I heard, the passer-by

 

Its growing

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*thumbs up* very good Reilly!

 

I haven't written anything good for ages, but here's my latest crap:

 

Down On Me

It's raining down again

This time it's raining on me

I'm sitting here in silence

Thinking what happened

To what we used to be

 

I've said my sorry's

And I've expressed my pain

But she won't listen

So I'm sitting down

Watching the rain

 

Take a good look at me

Tell me, what do you see?

Is it the man you used to know?

Is it the man I used to be?

Take a look at me now

Before you turn the lights

Down on me

 

I showed up at her doorstep

Brought some roses too

Talked about the countless

Nights and days

I'd spend "thinking of you"

 

I've said my sorry's

And I've expressed my pain

But she won't listen

So I'm sitting down

Bleeding with the rain

 

Take a good look at me

Tell me, what do you see?

Is it the man you used to know?

Is it the man I used to be?

Take a look at me now

Before you turn the lights

Down on me

 

You know I never meant to make you cry

I never meant for it to end this way

I am lost on my own

I'm so cold, soaked to the bone

Instead on falling on my feet

I've fallen on my back

Now I can't seem to find

The right track...

 

Take a good look at me

Tell me, what do you see?

Is it the man you used to know?

Is it the man I used to be?

Take a look at me now

Before you turn the lights

Down on me

 

Take a good look at me

Tell me, what do you see?

Is it the man you used to know?

Is it the man I used to be?

Take a look at me now

Before you turn the lights

Down on me...

 

 

(Yup, I know it sounds a lot like the Stereophonics' 'Since I Told You It's Over', that was my inspiration :))

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