it's neither of those, MWA HA HA HA HA :evilgrin:

 

well, dear rachel, hopefully i can finish writing it sometime tonight, in which case it will be up within the next few days. :cheesy:

^yes!! New fiction! I need the extra days it will take to post, to get work done anyways. I can't wait!

Anywho, I got to go for the night. Hope to see some new fics tomorrow! (I have one on the way by the way!) I think it's C/G actually, though I don't really like the pairing... Night guys!:kiss:

The Body!!

:heart::heart::heart:

But whoever is the lovely and sweet author with a poetic soul?

And I'm about to read Pages and Chapters:awesome:

 

MONDAY??!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:freak::freak::freak:

Well, we're like a day ahead of you, so that gives me some time, at least...

 

Edit: toodleloo, Rachel!:hug:

So busy with school lately! I've had no time to read any new chapters today:( I'll try and get to that tomorrow morning and review(praise:P)them:)

 

Katie----put down the whip very slowly and just walk away.

I've left it alone for nearly a whole day now......it's killing me already!:bigcry:

and you don't have to vote for every category, but if you're having trouble voting for best writer...

 

VOTE FOR DIANNA!!!!

:dance:

 

OI! I am in full agreement of this statement! No offense to you of course:kiss: But it's alright, we have discussed this before:)

Voting?:uhoh:

*disappears*

Don't make me go back to that whip Hahna!

Doing research for my latest story, I found this.

Should we all be worried?:thinking::o

 

 

However, in October 2008, a man was charged, but later cleared, under the Obscene Publications Act for allegedly posting fictional written material to the Internet describing kidnap, rape and murder of pop group Girls Aloud.

 

Hmmm....I shouldn't be scared quite yet. But there is a death in a recently written story of mine:uhoh:..........

 

 

 

who wants to read/praise my english essay?

 

 

“Liberty Leading the People,” a Eugene Delacroix painting from 1830, is a brilliant example of a Romanticist work. Romanticism is generally classified by its use of color and subject to evoke deep emotions and a sort of revolutionary feeling. Delacroix's usage of both subject and color, along with lighting, is what constitutes this piece as Romanticist.

 

Subject is one of the most important things about this painting. While the revolutionaries are significant, their leader is even more so. That these men are being led by a woman during a time when women were not viewed as highly as men would seem a little odd at first, and maybe even absurd. Really, though, the woman is symbolic of liberty, hence the title of the painting. Liberty is holding onto the French flag, standing on top of a pile of dead bodies- presumably enemy soldiers- and all of the standing men are looking to her for guidance. With such a subject, Delacroix is giving a sense of togetherness, and a feeling of imminent change.

 

Color is also a crucial part. The color pallet that Delacroix has chosen is made of mostly warm colors. There is the obvious use of red, white, and blue on the French flag, but these colors are also spread throughout the painting. The clouds in the background are tinted blue and red. The bodies laying on the ground, as well as the revolutionaries, are clothed in mostly white fabrics, but there are some articles of clothing that are blue. Even Liberty herself is dressed in white. These colors are meant to symbolize justice, peace, and revolution, which go along very nicely with the Romantic ideals of emotion and passion.

 

It seems that most of the painting is rather dark as far as lighting goes. The ground and men around Liberty are visible, but in most cases just barely. Liberty, on the other hand, is lit with a big, white cloud in the sky behind her. This is to express hope and the idea that the revolutionaries' fight for freedom will be successful.

 

Emotion is a big part of Romanticist works, evoked by aspects such as subject, color, and lighting. Delacroix's “Liberty Leading the People” is a prime example of a Romanticist painting because it uses all three in order to awaken a passion in its viewers.

 

 

 

or critique it, that would be helpful. :P

 

the conclusion is horrible, i know. :cheesy:

 

Okay, I have just a couple things. I think that Delacroix is giving a sense of togetherness should be Delacroix is creating a sense of togetherness. And I also think that which go along very nicely might sound better like this, which go along quite nicely. Oh, and you might want to consider adding at least one more line to the conclusion:P

 

I'm sorry this critque is so annoyingly nitpicky. I think the wording sounds great as you have it, I was just trying to think of a couple words that might sound snazier:charming:. But if those lines still sound better to you as they are, feel free to ignore me:P. I mean that. I could quite likely be wrong.

So busy with school lately! I've had no time to read any new chapters today:( I'll try and get to that tomorrow morning and review(praise:P)them:)

 

 

I've left it alone for nearly a whole day now......it's killing me already!:bigcry:

 

OI! I am in full agreement of this statement! No offense to you of course:kiss: But it's alright, we have discussed this before:)

 

Don't make me go back to that whip Hahna!

 

Hmmm....I shouldn't be scared quite yet. But there is a death in a recently written story of mine:uhoh:..........

 

Okay, I have just a couple things. I think that Delacroix is giving a sense of togetherness should be Delacroix is creating a sense of togetherness. And I also think that which go along very nicely might sound better like this, which go along quite nicely. Oh, and you might want to consider adding at least one more line to the conclusion:P

 

I'm sorry this critque is so annoyingly nitpicky. I think the wording sounds great as you have it, I was just trying to think of a couple words that might sound snazier:charming:. But if those lines still sound better to you as they are, feel free to ignore me:P. I mean that. I could quite likely be wrong.

 

no, no, this is good stuff! thank you, katie. :wacky:

and i think i might want to consider rewriting the conclusion altogether. :P

You're welcome:nice:

 

I don't think you need to completely rewrite the conclusion, just state your thoughts in a way that will produce a minimum of three sentences. Like, you could just have short sentences:P

The Body!!

:heart::heart::heart:

But whoever is the lovely and sweet author with a poetic soul?

And I'm about to read Pages and Chapters:awesome:

 

MONDAY??!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:freak::freak::freak:

Well, we're like a day ahead of you, so that gives me some time, at least...

 

Edit: toodleloo, Rachel!:hug:

 

She didn't want her name on the chapter. But she is a frequent contributor here.

Wasn't her chapter amazing????

Brooke--

 

Your essay is good. If you want my opinion.......the sentences are a little too complicated. They might need to be split up a little. Sorry......

That's what I think about the conclusion.

I'm not really sure about the Romanticism movement in art, but I know quite about it in literature. :P

 

I LOVE Romantic poets. Keats, Byron, Wordsworth...:wacky:

Kyra----New Chapter?????? Waiting???

 

Brooke--Super fantastic story??? Have you been holding out on me???:cry::cry:

^no, actually, i haven't been holding out on you at all. :P

(you shall be receiving an email sometime in the near future, possibly tonight)

 

Brooke--

 

Your essay is good. If you want my opinion.......the sentences are a little too complicated. They might need to be split up a little. Sorry......

 

don't be sorry, you're helping me. :D

 

 

AND KYRA, YOU CAN'T JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!! :bomb:

Kyra----New chapter......OMG.....so sorry.....

Off to read it.!!

 

EDIT:

 

Kyra....I just want you to know that if I DIE of a heart attack it will be your fault!!!

That was amazing, incredible and frustrating as hell!!!

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND KYRA, YOU CAN'T JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!! :bomb:

 

 

Hahahahaha, Brooke, yes I CAN! :devil:

 

And don't you go dying on me, Dianna!

She didn't want her name on the chapter. But she is a frequent contributor here.

Wasn't her chapter amazing????

 

It was all amazing:cheesy:

 

Spring & Winter: I was literally like this :shocked2: the whole time and like this :D and then, towards the end, I was like...well, there's not really a smiley to describe it, but anyway:P I wish they would have went further:wink3::wink3:

 

*trying to vote*

WAIT!!!!!

 

When is the voting over? :thinking:

I had totally forgotten about it. :bigcry: I started but never finished my list.... :uhoh:

*goes and tries to finish*

(oh and I'll comment on all the neeeew fanfics after I finish btw.)

2nd stage voting ends Monday. :)

 

dianna, check your email!! :wacky:

 

 

Bury My Lovely- awwww :blush:

Anna---Bury My Lovely is so wonderful. Jonny is so adorable. Will is so reasonable. Guy is such the drunk and Chris-----completely oblivious and living in his chocolate covered world. I love it!!

Brooke--I hope you feel bad again.

100,000 Eyes was truly brilliant!!

why, thank you. :blush:

maybe i'll feel bad again later. :P

Bury My Lovely: I don't even know what to say about this, besides :wacky::heart::cheesy:. Oh, and I love when Will is all fatherly and whatnot.:D

Spring and Winter: You always describe these more intimate scenes so beautifuly Kyra:heart:

The Body: Oh my god Dianna/other mysterious chapter 5 writer, that was just.....amazing. Completely and utterly.

Pages and Chapters: Very good storyline so far.:) Any chance of Mrs. Joiner, oh I don't know, getting pushed in front of a bus or something?:P

100,000 Eyes: The whole C/J relationship can be such a dilema!:bigcry: But this story was very sweet:wacky:.

Anna, I'm glad you finally posted the next chapter of A Rush of Blood. I had been missing it terribbly. This was a lovely chapter. Marriage?:cheesy: Chris is so sweet:heart:.

Bury My Lovely: Tell Chris, Jonny!!:P:D:lol:

100,000 Eyes: "But never in the same way as before.":heart::heart::heart:Quite a dilemma, indeed:laugh3:

A Rush of Blood: :wacky::wacky::wacky: I love when Elizabeth escapes from the hospital:lol:

Oh Brooke, how adorable!:blush::wacky:

 

Someday we shall make it to coldplayland, where c/j will be a compelete reality!:smug: