Hey guys,

I've already create a thread in the Coldplay section but since I haven't got too much answers I'm posting here!

You'll have the entire version soon (christmas maybe! :D)

 

Here we go:

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Hope you'll enoy this!

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You can ear a preview of wedding bells which will be posted next week at the end of our video clip cover:

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These videos both make me very thankful that Chris Martin is the lead singer for Coldplay.

Not very kind to say that... What do you mean by this???

that guy isnt nice...but i love the singing especially because of the accents

thank you very much jackz! ^^

Tu vas trop vite donc tu n'es pas en rythme durant tout le preview.

Et ta voix est loin d'avoir le même impact que celle de Chris...

encore une fois c'est une preview ce n'est pas la version finale!

Et je ne veux en aucun cas avoir la meme vois que chris, je ne suis pas la pour ca! :D

Oui mais une preview c'est bien un extrait de ce que tu as fait non ?:thinking:

c'est pour voir si ca plait et ds ce cas je vais plus lon mais comme visiblement y'a UNE personne qu m'a dit que c'était bien, ba je ne mettrais pas la suite ici!

The instrumental is great but I didn't like the voice at all!

Beh corrige tes problèmes de rythme et on pourra aimer. :P

thank you very much jackz! ^^

 

no problem...and dont worry about what these people say, i'll bet a bunch of people told coldplay they sucked too before they were famous...heck people still do!

I always love Coldplay. And people have the right to like and dislike.:thinking:

Yes, but I assume that you posted it to get our honest opinions, and you didn't expect only to hear/read compliments. Well, my opinion is that I think it's bad and I didn't like it.

Yes, but I assume that you posted it to get our honest opinions, and you didn't expect only to hear/read compliments. Well, my opinion is that I think it's bad and I didn't like it.

 

quite true but I didn't expect that people could be very rude!

Just so you know I'm going to be a professional musician and have my stuff! I just did this in 5 minutes so this isn't the final version. There isn't a cover of it on youtube with lyrics and all instruments yet, I just wanted to make one...

And please people don't say "I don't like" if you don't say why!

Well I always try to give an explanation, advice, but I just came back from school, so I was to tired to do that., but if you want that so much. Firstly I think that strings at the begining were unnecessary. Then, the riff , all the notes are good but there's something that makes me feel that it doesn't sound right. Also my opinion is that I just don't like your voice. What's good. Is that the vocal line remained the same, and that you sing low, as it of course should be sung. And I don't like how you sang "I'm still waiting for the snow to fall..." I love this part, so it just wasn't what I was expected. Oh besides, there's a clear lack of C on the base.

That's why I don't like it, maybe some people do, but I just don't I saw a lot of better ones, and you can always try in a different song.

YOu should put more attention to intonation.

 

Lowest notes are quite good, highest sounds like you're using throat and not diaphragm.

You're also often out of tune.

Ex. in Christmas lights:

 

"When you're still waiting for the snow to fall".....listen carefully to "waiting".

Do you also hear what I hear?

 

Ex. In don't panic:

 

"Yeah we do yhea we do"....out of tune and throatily.

 

In the and, I suggest you to do a lot of vocalise exercises.