Ahh transformers... :wacko:

 

This song:

 

:wacky:

I love that song :dazzled:

 

Trying to write another song right now.. hmm..wanna help out James? :P

 

I have a chorus. Just need one verse and bridge. Because I plan to sing that part twice.

 

One man alone

Betrayed by the one he love's

Now her last hope in the final hour of need

Well she's his creed and for her he'd bleed

Okay! :awesome:

 

I take it that's he chorus?

Yes it is. :nod:

 

Trying to write an "Oasis type song"

You can't watch this without gaping in awe.

 

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*literally gapes in awe*

 

:dazzled:

*literally gapes in awe*

 

:dazzled:

 

IKR!!

 

Omg..I just found lyrics to a song I wrote a while back(2 years ago). And it's not too bad. I like the title, Enemy Of The State. :wacko: I'll edit this thread and post the lyrics.

 

Enemy Of The State

 

The fire started a spark

We ran incognito in the dark

Sirens went off with sound

Echoing through the underground

There's nothing left to fear

But fear itself

There's nothing left to lose

But ourselves

Memories like a flood gate

Getting washed away by a clean slate

To them you're nothing more than an enemy of the state

 

Oh you!

Oh you...

 

The lightening striking in your eyes

As they speak out full of lies

The fire rises in the sky

Wishing you to say goodbye

And shouting out, "I never wanna die!"

 

All isn't what it appears

'Cause you're poisoned with fear

Locked up in chains and

Walking to the stocks

Leaving you in the pouring rain

Without a key or door to unlock

Memories like a flood gate

Getting washed away by a clean slate

To them you're nothing more than an enemy of the state

 

The lightening striking in your eyes

As they speak out full of lies

The fire rises in the sky

Wishing you to say goodbye

And shouting out, "I never wanna die!"

 

Oh you!

Oh you...

Enemy of the state.. Sounds mysterious..

 

I have these lines for a song

 

He drives all night to save himself

To clear his mind

Then he'll be fine

 

He drives all night to think

What is love

Does is come from above

^^Thats amazing! :awesome:

Wow...that is amazing..better than the chorus! Wow..just...wow. I applaud you. :clap:

 

Edited the above post, check out the lyrics. :wacko:

 

We need to play together. Just our vocals, an acoustic guitar and a piano. It's all we need. Molly will be our manager, Anthony will be our tech guy. Laurel will be our tour manager. :p

Thanks :nice:

 

I will try to make a full song out of that let's see how it goes... :P

^^YES!!!!:awesome:

I love it when we combine our lyrics. Makes for one hell of a song. Honestly now, for this album, or set of songs, it shouldn't matter how it sounds. Just deep lyrics and a guitar to accompany it. Doesn't matter if it sounds similar. Cause it won't.

He drives all night to save himself

To clear his mind

Then he'll be fine

 

He drives all night to think

What is love

Does is come from above?

 

When the light comes on

He pulls back time

There's still no reason or rhyme

 

He can't face her

No he can't face her

He can't face her so,

 

He just drives forever

 

Good? bad? How is it so far?

He drives all night to save himself

To clear his mind

Then he'll be fine

 

He drives all night to think

What is love

Does is come from above?

 

When the light comes on

He pulls back time

There's still no reason or rhyme

 

He can't face her

No he can't face her

He can't face her so,

 

He just drives forever

 

Good? bad? How is it so far?

 

It's amazing!!

Thanks!

 

Any ideas for a second verse? :D

I just used most of it. I think that's all. A short simple song, if that's okay with you.

 

One Man (Alone Betrayed By The One He Love's)

 

He drives all night to save himself

and to clear his mind

Then he'll be fine

He drives all night to think

What is love

Does it come from above?

What is love

Does it come from above?

 

When the lights come on

He pulls back time

Without reason or rhyme

He pulls back time

Without reason or rhyme

 

One man alone

Betrayed by the one he love's

Now her last hope in the final hour of need

He'd still save her if she bleeds

 

He drives all night to save himself

and to clear his mind

Then he'll be fine

He drives all night to think

What is love

Does it come from above?

What is love

Does it come from above?

 

When the lights come on

He pulls back time

Without reason or rhyme

He pulls back time

Without reason or rhyme

 

One man alone

Betrayed by the one he love's

Now her last hope in the final hour of need

He'd still save her if she bleeds..

Ahh.... Perfect!!! :awesome:

 

Now i need to write some sort of piano line! :D

Thanks, I need to write a guitar part.

 

Okay..I'll tell you that story about earlier today. It's just really sensitive and private. I'd rather pm you if thats okay.

Okay. :nod:

Thank you James. I need to let it out. It's been gripping me around the heart all day.

 

The guitar part sounds amazing with the lyrics for One Man. But I wanna change the name of the song. One Man sounds silly.

It does sound a little cheesy... :nod:

New name needed :nod:

 

Sorry for the delayed response.

It's okay. Makes sense since we were PM img at the time :P

Renegade

 

You've been going the distance

But its still gripping my heart

Its been tearing me apart till the morning light

I've been running afraid

Our love's a renegade

There's no meaning to the fight

It's been playing along alright

I've been looking across the bay

Watching your green light

Illuminating the night

I've been running out of fear

Hoping it doesn't ignite a tear

I've been running afraid

Our love's become a renegade

Our love's a renegade

 

I've been looking across the bay

Watching your green light

Illuminating the night

I've been running out of fear

Hoping it doesn't ignite a tear

I've been running afraid

Our love's become a renegade

Our love's a renegade

I've been running afraid

Our love's become a renegade

Our love's a renegade

 

I've been looking across the bay

Watching your green light

Illuminating the night

I've been running out of fear

Hoping it doesn't ignite a tear

I've been running afraid

Our love's become a renegade

Our love's a renegade

I've been running afraid

Our love's become a renegade

Our love's a renegade