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So if anybody has a few minutes, I'd appreciate any kind of feedback. Not the best vocals so I do apologize. Kinda improvised before the 2nd chorus haha. Yes you will hear bad notes and probably cringe. Thanks! :D

I'm pretty impressed :) I really like the extended chorus at the end and that is where your vocals really soar IMO. Keep it up ;)

Thank you!

Nice one ! I like it, but if I may present one word of criticism, the lyrics of the chorus were repeated very often. Maybe you can put in a little variation in wording there ?

Thanks for taking the time to listen! It means a lot. I see what you mean, I'm sure it can it get annoying. I will remember that for future use. :P

If I could say, I think it could be a great acoustic version for a rock ballad. I like the chords progression, vocals are not that bad, they're only a little rough (in a good way). Just a suggestion: lyrics could be improved.

It's a good song, keep it up and try to sharpen it ;)

Thank you very much! I appreciate your advice and you taking the time to listen!