Spider-Man Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 [video=youtube;vxn8kKspkPI] So if anybody has a few minutes, I'd appreciate any kind of feedback. Not the best vocals so I do apologize. Kinda improvised before the 2nd chorus haha. Yes you will hear bad notes and probably cringe. Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
42Escapist Posted August 23, 2015 Share Posted August 23, 2015 I'm pretty impressed :) I really like the extended chorus at the end and that is where your vocals really soar IMO. Keep it up ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted August 23, 2015 Author Share Posted August 23, 2015 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I ran away Posted August 24, 2015 Share Posted August 24, 2015 Nice one ! I like it, but if I may present one word of criticism, the lyrics of the chorus were repeated very often. Maybe you can put in a little variation in wording there ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted August 24, 2015 Author Share Posted August 24, 2015 Thanks for taking the time to listen! It means a lot. I see what you mean, I'm sure it can it get annoying. I will remember that for future use. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beastwars Posted August 24, 2015 Share Posted August 24, 2015 If I could say, I think it could be a great acoustic version for a rock ballad. I like the chords progression, vocals are not that bad, they're only a little rough (in a good way). Just a suggestion: lyrics could be improved. It's a good song, keep it up and try to sharpen it ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted August 26, 2015 Author Share Posted August 26, 2015 Thank you very much! I appreciate your advice and you taking the time to listen! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now