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okay I think I have to breath life into my thread again...here's a song I wrote...don't worry it's a bit depressive...

 

[verse 1]

Hey you

Tell me what to do

And what the hell have I done wrong

Now I don't know where I belong

[verse 2]

Sunshine

But I don't feel the warmth at all

Within me it is so cold

I wish you were the one to hold

 

[bridge]

Could you wait a minute?

Please, don't pass me by

I am caught

In my thoughts

Someone

Must come

Pay me some

Attention

And I know

What I want

What I need

It's you

Indeed

 

[chorus]

I'm alone here in the crowd

Screaming out loud

Words go down in this noise

And noone hears my voice

Superficiality

Everyone swims above you see

I sink a hundred metres deep

And you're not there to rescue me

 

[verse 3]

Pictures

Dusty memories

That was me - I can't believe

I wish it could be retrieved

 

[verse 4]

Loneliness

My only true friend

Love is a legend

That I've read in a book, dusty like my memories

Of a happy life

 

[bridge 2]

Now they're round me but however far away

I wonder if I'm from another star, okay

They were my friends but here it all ends

 

[chorus]

 

...to be continued :)

 

hey you are really talented! I'd be very proud of myself if I was you!

 

oh and Hi Theresa! Long time no see!

 

Hope you are well :)

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okay I think I have to breath life into my thread again...here's a song I wrote...don't worry it's a bit depressive...

 

[verse 1]

Hey you

Tell me what to do

And what the hell have I done wrong

Now I don't know where I belong

[verse 2]

Sunshine

But I don't feel the warmth at all

Within me it is so cold

I wish you were the one to hold

 

[bridge]

Could you wait a minute?

Please, don't pass me by

I am caught

In my thoughts

Someone

Must come

Pay me some

Attention

And I know

What I want

What I need

It's you

Indeed

 

[chorus]

I'm alone here in the crowd

Screaming out loud

Words go down in this noise

And noone hears my voice

Superficiality

Everyone swims above you see

I sink a hundred metres deep

And you're not there to rescue me

 

[verse 3]

Pictures

Dusty memories

That was me - I can't believe

I wish it could be retrieved

 

[verse 4]

Loneliness

My only true friend

Love is a legend

That I've read in a book, dusty like my memories

Of a happy life

 

[bridge 2]

Now they're round me but however far away

I wonder if I'm from another star, okay

They were my friends but here it all ends

 

[chorus]

 

...to be continued :)

 

is very nice There :nice: :cool:

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okay I think I have to breath life into my thread again...here's a song I wrote...don't worry it's a bit depressive...

 

[verse 1]

Hey you

Tell me what to do

And what the hell have I done wrong

Now I don't know where I belong

[verse 2]

Sunshine

But I don't feel the warmth at all

Within me it is so cold

I wish you were the one to hold

 

[bridge]

Could you wait a minute?

Please, don't pass me by

I am caught

In my thoughts

Someone

Must come

Pay me some

Attention

And I know

What I want

What I need

It's you

Indeed

 

[chorus]

I'm alone here in the crowd

Screaming out loud

Words go down in this noise

And noone hears my voice

Superficiality

Everyone swims above you see

I sink a hundred metres deep

And you're not there to rescue me

 

[verse 3]

Pictures

Dusty memories

That was me - I can't believe

I wish it could be retrieved

 

[verse 4]

Loneliness

My only true friend

Love is a legend

That I've read in a book, dusty like my memories

Of a happy life

 

[bridge 2]

Now they're round me but however far away

I wonder if I'm from another star, okay

They were my friends but here it all ends

 

[chorus]

 

...to be continued :)

 

that's a good therapy you know

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hehe,

 

I am fine thank you!

 

just chillin out! kinda cut my foot open last night so that hurts a bit but you know, enjoying life and all :cool:

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Loneliness

My only true friend

Love is a legend

That I've read in a book, dusty like my memories

Of a happy life

My fave line, i can relate it to myself , its so good ..i said it before and i say it again , keep it up There! you're going up high :cool:

 

*bump btw :P

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