Lera Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 kid you are so emo so evil comb your hair kitty cry your purple hair hug the sky and cry Ooo I love this so much^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted May 2, 2006 Author Share Posted May 2, 2006 thanks for the replies, I just edited that last one. ah, crap I'm going to have to edit again... I just used up twice in two lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Man...I need more creativity....I haven't written a poem for ages..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 We had to join in groups and write a dramatic poem in literature today... and I went on and wrote this, and my group didn't use it, heh. A dramatic poem is when one or more people are speaking that clearly isn't the author or sum'n, right? So... this is all I could come up with, heh. unjust wrongly accused I thought I was appealing constantly for an empty cause this penalty wasn't mine to pay with every minute i dreaded that day someone else should have been in my place this punishment was theirs to face but I instead was put through this pain I hoped to escape it but it was all in vain on that day my life was taken by judges who were so surely mistaken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted May 5, 2006 Author Share Posted May 5, 2006 good rhyming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 I wrote this two ways, I liked the first way better but I was told the second is better... here they are glass human I walk through walls to follow you I magically wander but am seen right through happenstance of glance will transform my chance of happiness with her, my opaque wonder _________________ glass human I walk through walls to follow you I magically wander but am seen right through one glance will be my chance of happiness with her my opaque wonder your eyes are seen by an invisible being Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 uh, i don't know why I wrote this... :uhoh: go ahead let's write a song i'll sing along go ahead what can go wrong? pluck a string start to sing go ahead i'll be listening set me ablaze with your firey gaze go ahead it makes me craze look up above all things we're free of go ahead i've fallen in love let's sail the blue just us two go ahead i'll be loving you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted May 15, 2006 Share Posted May 15, 2006 some people some people are too hypocritical some people love to be adored some people are too sentimental some people hate it when they're bored some people like to bask in spotlight some people always shy away some people wear their clothes too tight some people sing and dance all day some people are lazy and ignorant some people like to drink green tea some people are harmless and innocent some people are just like me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 uh, i don't know why I wrote this... :uhoh: go ahead let's write a song i'll sing along go ahead what can go wrong? pluck a string start to sing go ahead i'll be listening set me ablaze with your firey gaze go ahead it makes me craze look up above all things we're free of go ahead i've fallen in love let's sail the blue just us two go ahead i'll be loving you I really like this one 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted May 18, 2006 Author Share Posted May 18, 2006 tragic lie I insist upon joy I insist that at the present I exist in happiness a wonderous love resounds you were found to repress my sadness romanticizing self praises of me I insist that I am perfect poetry without impressing tragedy why should I ask pity? a glowing spectacle of youth she is to me the angelic creature, her symmetry inspired by writings of Shakespeare Edgar Allan Poe men and women alike who have worshipped their creation a repetition for you my heroine injection my inexpressible expression to her angelic majesty to the worshipped symmetry I secretly cry to live with her wondering upon my perfect wonder bubu hollow head bumps my leg heavenly purring sounds in it an incessant reprocussion attempt on discussion meow me love meow me love and hit me up baby love kitty food pretty mix leave it for me... prick kiss kiss hiss 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lore Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 I used to write some "poetry" but not anymore... and I feel sad now and I feel like I want to write something but I can't :( 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 why did you stop, lore? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted June 2, 2006 Share Posted June 2, 2006 finals go to class you are 10 minutes late hurry up and eat breakfast hold on--don't go too fast now, go put down your plate and your glass oh, take these you will need them, I bet good luck on your final tests look at you, you are a mess oh yeah, and don't forget your car keys make sure you don't get caught and if he asks, "I just studied a lot" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted June 2, 2006 Share Posted June 2, 2006 stupidest poem ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted June 2, 2006 Author Share Posted June 2, 2006 finals go to class you are 10 minutes late hurry up and eat breakfast hold on--don't go too fast now, go put down your plate and your glass oh, take these you will need them, I bet good luck on your final tests look at you, you are a mess oh yeah, and don't forget your car keys make sure you don't get caught and if he asks, "I just studied a lot" I think it's funny. but I think that's a good thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted June 2, 2006 Author Share Posted June 2, 2006 viking HAR! HAIL without avail, make sail for the leader of all future tense has promise for us what we cannot see we can still trust if there is a doubt what lives within let us go back to them question how can I grasp your beauty and put it in a glass jar hold the lid on it tightly and not lose the air and from my mind what I truly perceive at an instant in time let you know you are lovely so my angelic curly hair girl do you believe, when it's said you are the light of this world can a man put the sun into a lense but know that God has put in my eyes the heavens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted June 2, 2006 Author Share Posted June 2, 2006 Black Pen Writes I'm a pen I write for this guy guess what I'm writing again oh yea wasn't that what I did yesterday if I was in control I would tell you or would I just sit there pens don't make jokes or sing songs or dance or read or say "that's all folks" I'm just a pen I sit there sometimes I am the greatest invention something redundant wookie woo for you strangled at an angle dead on April 31st on planet tatu a princess is a princess but she was hairy oowew beautiful curly hair all over her body lala I'm bored like a board that is bored sitting on a deck with a bunch of other boards that are bored and playing tic tac toe because tic tac toe is a game for bored... people if boards could play games they would play tic tac toe all day cuz it's boring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 the first i've done...i'm a beginner in english poetries...:D .all your poetries are soooo good... this one is called Ring I was flying so high Just thinking about you I'm wondering why Near me, I don't see you Then my head starts to ring Oh no! I'm awaking Reality begins to sing The end of this bad dream At the corner of the street I see you, so far, turning, I try to call you, you're not hearing And again you disappear Then my head starts to ring Oh no! I'm awaking Reality begins to sing The end of this bad dream I awake during the night Looking besides me Seeing you're not near me Oh no! My nightmare is true... i've got an other one but i still write it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 ^^ when it's finished...post it here Eric...what can I say...? Nothin except...what a lucky curly-haired girl. (curly-haired girl...you know who you are... lucky you! ) :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 2 others... This one is Sunset My head is lost And my senses so frost When I think about you I want to see you 'Cos i don't want to be hold In a jail so cold I want to see the sunset And see you next to me I'm thinking about you, honey Everytime I see ghosts They make me so frost The touch of your cheeks The taste of your lips Me in your arms Will make us so warm I want to see the sunset And see you next to me I'm thinking about you, honey And this one is Be mine A thought about you And everything is rumbled My senses are paralysed Then I'm losing my head too I want you to be mine As long as the sun'll shine A thought about you And everything is rumbled When I get lost too Hopefully by you I'm loved I want you to be mine As long as the sun'll shine And all what I need Is you next to me 'Coz I want you to be mine As long as the sun'll shine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bright Posted June 6, 2006 Share Posted June 6, 2006 flapper I opened up a safe I'm gonna take some cash for feathas and wigs and skinny kids the police are comin after me aknockin down my door cash is short mister officer it ain't worth a revolver so let me run 'fo I let out my machine gun don't be too rash 'fo you get my blast I just want some cash fo' feathas and wigs and skinny kids this is a shootout chief, I'll bail out but you's dead your men are blushing no reason for a rushing I'll bail you out free if ya let me be 'fo tragedy fo' feathas and wigs and skinny kids fo' 1920s fo' readin the funnies on sunday mornin with a mug and a lady and you know me hunnie this is a shootout chief, I'll bail out but you's dead ________________ The Fox running around lightly prancing some might say she is dancing trotting, trotting, trotting along she dances to the beat of her own song came upon the edge of the wood don't know what to do for her own good dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song she fell off the world into ours wondering what to do with all the hours she scared the livestock off a farm don't know what to do she heard an alarm something's coming it is tall it spoke with a threatening call she goes next door and hides in the trees "alas, it hurts a trap has caught me" after hours of howling she almost dies but another man heard the cries he takes her away to live another day lucky she's here a while longer to stay so they take her back to live in the wood they know what to do for her own good and she's dancing, dancing, dancing along she dances to the beat of her own song I just read this thread from the beginning and I like these two very muchie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 6, 2006 Share Posted June 6, 2006 the last I've done... called light Under my hands your skin Is shivering of pleasure Like you do through the wind I know you love it for sure I see everyday The light in your eyes It makes me realize Forever you will stay Your lips against mines Yeah! It's so fine! I lean next to you You know I love it too! I see everyday The light in your eyes It makes me realize Forever you will stay When the sun comes out I see it touching your face You are lighting the place Peaceful, beautiful, yeah, that's you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 the last I've done... called light Under my hands your skin Is shivering of pleasure Like you do through the wind I know you love it for sure I see everyday The light in your eyes It makes me realize Forever you will stay Your lips against mines Yeah! It's so fine! I lean next to you You know I love it too! I see everyday The light in your eyes It makes me realize Forever you will stay When the sun comes out I see it touching your face You are lighting the place Peaceful, beautiful, yeah, that's you! this is my favorite so far :nice: well done! specially the last stanza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 i just wrote this poem that's like a poem some depressed emo kid/wannabe poet would write.. blind standing here, in front of this barrier brick by brick, it towers above i cannot see past it's impressive height the bricks offer no mercy for passage defeated, i turn around in silence, i stare at the ground but an unfailing curiosity strikes me "what's beyond this barrier, this wall?" my defeat no longer emcompasses me i give in to curiosity's beck and call i turn around to face my barrier so tall instead, I look down at a fence so small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 Thanks clearascrystal!! :D :kiss: Well i've got 2 others...Coldplay is a great source of insipiration... called in my arms It's a bright day The summer sun warms us Both are far away Leaning in a field of flowers. I hold you in my arms here Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams. I awake in the night Seeing you breathing peacefully I kiss you tenderly As we met at the first sight! I hold you in my arms here Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams. The only thing I want Is to be with you I'll tell I can't Help me to think about you! And this one is called The one I think about green spaces You, sitting in front where the sun faces Me, coming from the darkest shadows I see you, I just want to know How you feel, now, here, With me, in front of you when you look at me? I want to be the one The only one who loves you I want to put my hands in yours But love isn't a race I used to win Then our lips meet tenderly What a soft, deep kiss, and slowly My arms around you, yours around me Now your tasted lips are missing You're so cute darling, enjoying That you tell me you love me I want to be the one The only one who loves you I want to put my hands in yours But love isn't a race I used to win Today you're always here I won't lose you I swear 'Cos I love you my dear... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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