oh god! i hope for your sake that when you open the door it's her! :laugh2: ^^

I really wish she'd be there!behind the door...oh my god!!!

Thx!!!!!!^

Ohhhh!

 

My god...I'M IN LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVE:heart: :heart: :heart:

 

luv who??? :shocked2: btw i like that poem 2, its sooo deep:D

^^tough question!!!!I don't know her name...:cry:

but I'm ready to tell her what i feel when I'll see her!!!

^^tough question!!!!I don't know her name...:cry:

but I'm ready to tell her what i feel when I'll see her!!!

u dont???:( okay, good luck, :thumbsup:

oh thx!

no prob :thumbsup: :nice:

WARNING!!!

I'm in an advanced state of madness...

 

Here, you have my first poem about our dear 4 guys...

Don't be amazed....I thought it would happen...

 

called 4 guys

 

All the values that you spread

Through what you say

Go in our little hearts

All what you do is an art.

 

You, the four wonderful guys

You make everyone's heart shine

You put upon everyone's face a smile.

 

You're four bright guys

You're what we expected in our lives

You make us all dive

In your world, in your lives.

 

You, the four wonderful guys

You make everyone's heart shine

You put upon everyone's face a smile.

 

Everywhere you are, you bring hope

Please, oh yeah! Please don't stop!

For us, you're on the top!

You got us under your control!

 

You, the four wonderful guys

You make everyone's heart shine

You put upon everyone's face a smile.

 

Oh guys! We love you everyday

We're always

Thinking of you since you're on our ways

You're the best thing ever on the Earth

'Cos, you, the four, you're Coldplay!

sweet! :D

 

that one was an awesome tribute to Coldplay!

^oh thx sweetie!!!!:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

:kiss: I am really enjoying the poetry so far... keep posting.

 

 

 

*edit..i think i will post another of mine :sneaky:

^okay!I'll follow your advice!

 

you should!I'd like to read yours...

oh!!!true love...I'm looking at you!!!

 

called When

 

My heart was floating on the water

You were sitting near the river,

Then you saw it, you shivered

And you caught it in your hands.

 

You filled my heart with love

You hit my soul with one of your arrows

Then, you drew me in a brushstoke

And you flew away like a dove.

 

When I see your beautiful face

It makes me feel so at peace

When I see your perfect lips

I want to give you a deep love kiss.

 

I think so much about you

I realize I can't size how much I love you

It's so great, so nice, so good

You make my heart burns as the wood do!

 

When I see your beautiful face

It makes me feel so at peace

When I see your perfect lips

I want to give you a deep love kiss.

 

In my dreams, I hear you saying

"Don't lose your hope darling!"

Yeah! I've got you under my skin!

 

See you soon for a next one!!!!

ohhhhhhhhhhh i luv that poem:kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

oh thx!:kiss:

no prob, :kiss: there so much expression and its sooooooooo deep :thumbsup:

oh!!!true love...I'm looking at you!!!

 

called When

 

My heart was floating on the water

You were sitting near the river,

Then you saw it, you shivered

And you caught it in your hands.

 

You filled my heart with love

You hit my soul with one of your arrows

Then, you drew me in a brushstoke

And you flew away like a dove.

 

When I see your beautiful face

It makes me feel so at peace

When I see your perfect lips

I want to give you a deep love kiss.

 

I think so much about you

I realize I can't size how much I love you

It's so great, so nice, so good

You make my heart burns as the wood do!

 

When I see your beautiful face

It makes me feel so at peace

When I see your perfect lips

I want to give you a deep love kiss.

 

In my dreams, I hear you saying

"Don't lose your hope darling!"

Yeah! I've got you under my skin!

 

See you soon for a next one!!!!

 

what a passionate man. I can see though, that English is not your natural language? I can help you edit them..if you'd like.

 

But the ideas behind it are soo good!

^yeah you're right.I'm french...

yeah I'd like you to help me..

 

Edit 22/06/06 20:54pm

 

New poem!!!!!!

 

Called EYES

 

I came without any intention

But your eyes caught all my attention

They trap me in their depth

They read all what I think, I guess.

 

My eyes were travelling on you

And, suddenly, met yours

I couldn't turn off my eyes of you

They wouldn't have gone though.

 

You stole my heart, and

You kept it in your hands

I can feel your voice sounds

Like it comes from the underground

 

I try to find you, to see you

But you were not there though

I'd like to see you again

To set me free from these chains.

 

You stole my heart, and

You kept it in your hands

I can feel your voice sounds

Like it comes from the underground

 

I can see myself kissing her

A dream couldn't be happier

I'm looking for you since hours

If life could be easier...

 

See you soon for a next one!!!!!!

If someone is interested in making songs with my poems, tell me!!!

I'd like to be your lyric writer!!

an other one...called Rubbles

I'm walking through the rubbles

I exactly know where I am

These rubbles are my broken dreams

All my dreams have been rumbled

 

I can see my collapsed past

Life is really running too fast

I can't see the future I dreamt about

Neither the target I wanted to shoot

 

I'm walking through the rubbles

I exactly know where I am

These rubbles are my broken dreams

All my dreams have been rumbled

 

I'm lost everywhere

Don't know who, what, and where

Who am I, what to do,

And where do I have to go?

 

I'm walking through the rubbles

I exactly know where I am

These rubbles are my broken dreams

All my dreams have been rumbled

 

Neither here, neither there...

I'm not there, I'm not here

I feel lost everywhere...

Oh, be prepared for some leet poetry.

 

Anime

 

I turn on my lcd

Only to see thee

In thy flashy pose

I beg for my dose

 

Action, comedy, romance

I love to dance this dance

As the leaves fall away

On my hard drive you'll alway stay

Another poem from my "Collection of Leet Works"

 

Spectator

 

Like a refugee

amongst all the joy

Like a prodigy

without his ploy

 

He wanders the streets

sees the life in motion

Where everybody meets

he goes without a potion

 

Does nothing but observe

everybody around him

Does nothing but serves

his every whim

 

His pain is utter

and endevours are dire

Always bit of a mutter

succeedes nothing to inspire

 

Damn, Baudelaire can hide in a hole now.

mmmh^nice one!

 

here you've got the last I've done...

Called Strike

 

What an angry sky today

Are you trying to say

Are you trying to blame

The way I think, I behave

 

Lightnings are striking around

Trying to hit me, their sounds

Are going through my head

Are driving me mad

 

I think I'm going to leave

But where am I gonna live

I want to start an other story

And forget everything I wouldn't see

 

Then a blinding light hits me

And I lose my whole memory

I couldn't see truth and lies

Neither night or moon light

 

I try to fight against my fears

I want to release my tears

I will make it all clear

And I'll trying to reach it

 

I think I'm going to leave

But where am I gonna live

I want to start an other story

And forget everything I wouldn't see

 

Life scares me sometimes

Can't find the signs

Am I able to see in the night,

To see where I should strike?

 

Seeing nothing in the dark

I try to find some sparks

Nothing white, all is black

But my vision is back.

 

And I see something better

Something I couldn't find anymore

Will I be stronger?

Would it be better?

 

See you soon for an other one...

Hey hey, pretty surreal I'll say!

 

Ninja Dream

 

Deep in the dark

but without a sword

He carries a mark

ain't part of a horde

 

In sick and twisted realm

where different to him reigns

His home is the nearest elm

where he's troubled by many pains

 

Prosperous times he waits

whilst at night he prowles

Encoutering many baits

with his cunning of owls

Another prime example of leet poetry.

 

Hot Stuff

 

Hot you are indeed

everybody can see

In beauty you've got the lead

unfortunately there's no we

 

When you sway

and I look at you

There is no way

'cuz you choose,but a few

 

Your curves are pure might

with their exceptional charm

Hunderds would fight

to on them put their arm