September 21, 200619 yr This is a new poem. A poem about my unknown love. It's called Trip with you. Endless river, running down the hills, The well-known hills of my feelings Will go to where you are, my love. The strength of its tides will show you how How much I love you, how much I need you. You'd look into my lost eyes Lighted, step by step By this beautiful burning sky By this wonderful sunset. In the depth of a star-lighted night I'd drown myself into your beatiful eyes I'd feel so good in this quiet place The only place where I'll feel safe. We'd be slowly back Slowly back to the daylight Far away from the start We'd have crossed a wonderful gate.
October 1, 200619 yr Well, I'm the only one to post there... So I carry on... This is a new one called My Ride Lovely curves on the side Two beautiful wide eyes A nice and kind smile It's going to be my ride. A big and powerful heart, To go through the dark Alive because of a little spark It drives me out of the park. A rocky and strong sound Is coming, all around And in the dead of the night, I'm reaching the speed of light.
October 3, 200619 yr Author "They're just excuses, son" Today I vomit a comet Yesterday I destroyed an asteroid my room revolves around the earth my mom dropped a bomb on the wrong occasion referring to our rotation so it splashed in the sea and was attacked by ugly fishies; that's why _____________________________________ Love, as Defined by Colby Starkson in a Lonely Canadian Town I see the lightest green I've ever seen approaching on high a mile in the sky the UFO is smothered with pretty lights it says, "walk on, walk on" so I begin an excavation it lands and I go to where no man has gone before I was decieved! they wish to abduct me this alien ship is full of lonely females. my choice, they will each be my wife or it's the end of this life and I'll be just like them all 15,153 of them I accept the task; but alas! each wedding, each honeymoon I am harassed! my hair is too short my arms are too long some make me wear nothing, some a thong one by one I am part of their nation slowly I see myself submit to their mastery of wit forget you, I'm king I deserve better treatment they show me the queen, her name is alwchicackreoeer she is wise and beautiful and seduces me with her crowned tentacle performs the dance that in itself is romance without a warning she attacked me alwchicackreoeer squeezed with a squeeze that leaves the pythons at ease I felt a rib crack and seconds away from a heart attack she said "get in my bed" (although it was more like "gluaughglufp") this encounter of horrific love nearly knocked me unconscious I can only compare her to a sickly butcher who lusts over filet of flounder at last she was complete and massaged me with her theet one by one I am part of their nation and then I woke up: "who is awxheoree?" "that's you honeysnuggles"
October 4, 200619 yr a new one called Sleepless. the name said it all. Leaned on my bed, late in the evening, I'm so tired, I want to meet my dreams I want to sleep, so I close my eyes, Just to slip where my mind is free to fly. My mind refuses, but I have to sleep I'm a day without any sunset I can't hold back these tired tears Neither this slight shiver I've already met. The beatings of my heart are so fast I'm still awake and it lasts Please, Night, come to steal my mind Dreams are a mountain I want to climb. It will be a sad sleepless night It's something I'd like to fight I'd like the night to rock me, I'd like it to get me slightly.
October 4, 200619 yr a new one called Sleepless. the name said it all. Leaned on my bed, late in the evening, I'm so tired, I want to meet my dreams I want to sleep, so I close my eyes, Just to slip where my mind is free to fly. My mind refuses, but I have to sleep I'm a day without any sunset I can't hold back these tired tears Neither this slight shiver I've already met. The beatings of my heart are so fast I'm still awake and it lasts Please, Night, come to steal my mind Dreams are a mountain I want to climb. It will be a sad sleepless night It's something I'd like to fight I'd like the night to rock me, I'd like it to get me slightly. aww I liked this :wink:
October 4, 200619 yr i had to write it down somewhere ignore this, it's just a bad remembrance Rita Rémálmaiban közt láttalak, Igazábol, csak kerestelek, Talán mégis megbántottalak? Aggódóan, de még szeretlek Rossz vagy, emlék, Itt ragadott szemét, Takarod a jövőm, Amelyben lesz öröm? Rideg szemeidet keresve, Időben helyt nem találva, Téged soha nem megértve, Az utolsó levelemet írva Rád gondolva, Italban fulladva, Tartalomban elveszve, Apróságtól legyőzve
October 5, 200619 yr aww I liked this :wink: thx!:blush: :blush: :blush: there's another one. Called Lost and Saved [ Special thanks to Coldplay ] This beautiful day, all turned Into deep darkness My heart started to burn Because of a strong sadness And Life became meaningless. Lost in the night Lost on the sea I had found back My own insecurity. The tides of my mind Are chazing me, and I I scream, I am asking For a welcome help, coming From Earth, from the sky. Drowning myself in a loose ground All was disappearing all around I didn't want to carry on again I didn't want to fight in vain. Coming from a noisy chaos A voice overcam this flow It began to play, with grace, With my heart and I saw This voice had a lovely voice. Bright blue eyes In the dark Lights me On a new lane That's the way I've been saved.
October 5, 200619 yr ColdMike, your poems are kinda Chris Martin inspired, but in the good way ;) here's another "bad remembrance inspired poem", this time in English Rita (remastered) Reminder of your hair, Issue which was unfair, Treatment of my lost mind, A love that I couldn’t find Red wine and politics, Is that your real tactics? Tears which are not for real, A dream that you’d like to kill Rude words, annoying clocks Irony that perfectly works Thief of my last nerve cells, Approach the morning bells Revealed dry smile, Idiot in automobile, Trees are fake, Allowed mistake
October 5, 200619 yr Hey Nik that's kinda inspired by Radiohead :wacko: I liked it, sad though. This one is the best :smartass: "Red wine and politics, Is that your real tactics?" Eric, I liek your first one very much too. Guys seem to be talented here :surprised:
October 5, 200619 yr Yeah?.. I think "Approach the morning bells" and "Trees are fake" remind me of something else :uhoh:
October 5, 200619 yr Yeah?.. I think "Approach the morning bells" and "Trees are fake" remind me of something else :uhoh: well, yes. actually, "trees are fake" and "approach the morning bells" are confusing phrases and don't make too much sense, if you don't know the real meaning of that poem ;)
October 5, 200619 yr Yeah but that's the point of all poems. You can't really get the meaning if you're not the one who wrote it :wink: Anyway, that's a good one. Looks touching :nice:
October 5, 200619 yr ColdMike, your poems are kinda Chris Martin inspired, but in the good way ;) hehe!!! you're right... Chris and his beautiful eyes inspired me a lot...:D a new one... tribute to a Coldplay song... called A song Travelling slightly On the paper, I see Ideas, letters, words, sentences, Verses, defenceless feelings. They all appear under the light They escape, quickly, like, A river running down the hills, Birds, flying to some far countries. And coming from the underground Notes are quietly gathering To make a nice, deep and restful sound Like a lullaby running to my ears. These feelings this crooning voice says My mind has found this song on its way This song rocks my heart, it tells My rush of blood to the head.
October 10, 200619 yr A new one... about...CHOCOLATE...:P :P :P yum Chocolate is the title though... Chocolate, It smells so delicate, A warm taste In my mouth, the place Where all starts to race. A slight shiver travels Makes me feel so well Cheers me up through hell I ear my heart's bell. Chocolate Is a hidden gate Where I'm swept away I turns upside down my head A welcome feeling to be away. Sweet and warm My tongue is charmed Lovely and smooth Chocolate is melting in my mouth.
October 10, 200619 yr A new one... about...CHOCOLATE...:P :P :P yum Chocolate is the title though... Chocolate, It smells so delicate, A warm taste In my mouth, the place Where all starts to race. A slight shiver travels Makes me feel so well Cheers me up through hell I ear my heart's bell. Chocolate Is a hidden gate Where I'm swept away I turns upside down my head A welcome feeling to be away. Sweet and warm My tongue is charmed Lovely and smooth Chocolate is melting in my mouth. What can I say, 'cept that I LOVE chocolate =) ?!
October 11, 200619 yr @Lana: thx!! @Miro: yeah! A new one, called My safety is gone My heart beats a lot... What is it? Who's here? The dark is back Back in my heart, Drowning like stones Safety is gone. I feel trees are spies, And the sky is an eye, Keeping looking at me, Like if I was still a baby. Fear, love, security unsure feelings Always changing Are driving me to think I'm not at ease, safety As I'd like to be... Stuck in the corner, I shouldn't wait to be better Around me there're bones My safety is gone. I ran out of there... Lost in life's jungle I'm lost in my own bubble.
October 11, 200619 yr lovely poems! I especially like that one because of chocolate.... :D This one's obviously called Lust... ;) Lust. Lust, lust, lust. Only lust moves us on. No true love. No deep feelings. Lust. Lust. Lust. Lust.
October 11, 200619 yr Hm...ColdMike, do you write on french? I mean, if you do, post the poems here. I would like to see them. I´m writing some poetry, short stories and a novel, but they are all on Croatian, and I dont have nervs for translation on english.
October 11, 200619 yr ^&^^Thx!! Indeed I wrote in french... but well, I've got to work on them before posting... I warn you, they're not as happy as those I've psted these last months, y'know... I was in a bad period... very low... this one is called Memories Things you couldn't remember, They're coming from nowhere Memories are the point of my wonders But I didn't get any answer. A road to yourself The thoughts of unsolved problems Sad, painful or happy Such are memories. Memories, a link to the past Show you life, show you time Both are running so fast They're on our own lane. Memories, a huge book That you want to read or to close Unwilling feelings you'd like to lose Things you've misunderstood. Such as pictures or movies, All is going through your head You know how it begins But ignore how it will end.
October 11, 200619 yr THE END HAS COME CLOSER Those mountains I can't reach Hid my life from me. Evening's already here. Essence of my pain I will Never understand. My Daydream and you came. Hostage of my misery, Attitude must wait...I Succumb to the flows of Death. Castle of your memories, my Oblivious mind and Malicious cries. Everything's going away. Cornerstone of my thoughts, Liberty of my spirit Oozed away with you. Scattered, it was lovely to dream, Endless thoughts about my joys and my Ragged life...what should I do now?
October 12, 200619 yr A poem, written by a friend of mine. M.R.: Pardon Promis moi que tu m'aimes Quand l'hiver nous toue Et les yeux de la Lune furieuse Pleurent pour nos ossements Quand nous sommes tout seuls Et la neige masque nos tombeaux Les mots sont le sang dans mes levres Et je suis triste Peut-ętre ton silence nous embrasse Peut-ętre les chevaux noirs sont La ręve de mon triste coeur Et je suis seulement une folle Pardon si j’incommode la mort...
October 12, 200619 yr @Miro: oh great poem! I love it. I hope we will talk soon as well!! ^Nice poem, in french though... I'll post mine when I would have type them. This is another poem called It's love Here I stand My eyes are still opened And I'm dreaming Lift up by the wind. Guided by a star My love flies with grace To this beautiful place Where you are. I find you in each of my thoughts If you wonder what you caught You get my heart since the first sight And you make it so bright. I kept your sight in my head All this love you spread I can' t get enough I need to see you, to tell you: "Now, in my veins, there's no blood. There is this great rush, this great feeling. It's strong, it's Love it's your love. I'm keeping it, I don't want to do anything."
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