grids Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Actually I don't know what kind of the title of this poem.. If everyone wants to give some title, tell me:P Haha.. My English soo bad in here.. I can't make a poem into an English language but I try;) I wasn't think about anything else would be Sometimes wise, sometimes don't Every people can make a choice how they do in their lives It depends of them Sometimes good, sometimes bad Be good to bad that is actually what I don't think about I can be wise, can be not Truth and lie ought to be in your life Make some biography about the journey of our life Well life shouldn't be pushed But with affection with everyone They could be a person, animals, anything from natural beings Home is a place where we live Clock's ticking is a time for spend something we should do We are nothing without our parents We are nothing if God's didn't made us We are nothing without supporter who support us We are nothing will be in the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 is good :) is it translated or directly written in english? :thinking: btw i know is not easy to choose a title for the poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 those are the lyrics of the last song I wrote...I was "inspired" by my cousin who was lately very ill:(...but she´s getting better:):) sometimes you wish you could be someone else take it slow move ahead sometimes you think life isn´t fair you must be strong it´s hard to bear Sometimes you´re scared and you can´t move from your bed you try your best but you´re afraid of death Someway I hope that you will move on you´ll find the place where you belong Someway I hope you will hang on you´ll be fine my love Sometimes you´re scared and you can´t move from your bed you try your best but you´re afraid of death well...it´s kind of too sad:confused:....lol I was REALLY upset:p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 is a nice one, although you are right is a bit sad. :) have you shown it to your cousin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 is a nice one, although you are right is a bit sad. :) have you shown it to your cousin? nope...I don´t know if she´ll like it..:embarassed:...she doesn´t take those things much seriously...so...I don´t know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 oh ok :) when i show a poem to someone in which the poem was inspited, i never get a good answer :( at least my friends liked them :) till i begun to wrote other kind of poems, not only love poems :dozey: they used to tell me that them were so deep... (the love ones). they are so classical... poetry is not only love poems i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 ^it´s true though I think that most of the people see poetry only through love themes and don´t consider other things that can be told with a poem:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 yes.. my classmates were surprised when a so known poem by becquer, our teacher told us that the poem wasn't about unlove, it was about creation itself. :nice: i was so proud that i was the only one that realised of that in my whole class. :nice: poetry is more than love poems :) althought i think that people think that poetry is just about love, because it use to be more common to find love poems than about other topic, or at least that's what we think when we read them. one of mine is also about creativity, and people loved it, thought it was about love too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 yes.. my classmates were surprised when a so known poem by becquer, our teacher told us that the poem wasn't about unlove, it was about creation itself. :nice: i was so proud that i was the only one that realised of that in my whole class. :nice: poetry is more than love poems :) althought i think that people think that poetry is just about love, because it use to be more common to find love poems than about other topic, or at least that's what we think when we read them. one of mine is also about creativity, and people loved it, thought it was about love too. yep...a lot of poems are actually about love and in the end I think it´s for the power of love itself..I mean when you fall in love it´s easier to write about love and all lovers look for love poems..if someone wants to read about political ideas or other it´s easier that they look for books or other things rather than for a poem... and I think that´s also cause the most famous poets known lived during 1700 and 1800 that is the romantic era so...it´s more common for people who have a general knowing of poetry to know love poems than others... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 yep...a lot of poems are actually about love and in the end I think it´s for the power of love itself..I mean when you fall in love it´s easier to write about love and all lovers look for love poems..if someone wants to read about political ideas or other it´s easier that they look for books or other things rather than for a poem... and I think that´s also cause the most famous poets known lived during 1700 and 1800 that is the romantic era so...it´s more common for people who have a general knowing of poetry to know love poems than others... you are right of what people thing of poetry. :) but i think that poetry is not just write about love or unlove, my first poems in spanish were about politics and history... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 ^yes...I think it´s nice when a poet writes also about politic and history though it´s sure that love poems will be remembered more easily since the topic is so universal instead of political ideas or history...you know it´s interesting to see for example what a poet has written about politic in his days but it´s not much to you as a love poem can be;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Nice poem, grids (forgot your name, sorry :embarassed:). It's a fair start! And really - Giuly - excellent one. :wink: I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 11, 2007 Share Posted August 11, 2007 Nice poem, grids (forgot your name, sorry :embarassed:). It's a fair start! And really - Giuly - excellent one. :wink: I love it. It's alright. I'm bad in English, but I try to make a poem in English.. Thank you for the advice;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 11, 2007 Share Posted August 11, 2007 is good :) is it translated or directly written in english? :thinking: btw i know is not easy to choose a title for the poems. Thank you:) Nope, it was directly written in English:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 11, 2007 Share Posted August 11, 2007 And really - Giuly - excellent one. :wink: I love it. Thanks:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 11, 2007 Share Posted August 11, 2007 It's been a pleasure! :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 12, 2007 Share Posted August 12, 2007 So I was listening to "pride& prejudice"´s soundtrack yesterday night and I scrolled down to see all the titles and noticed one especially:"The Secret Life Of Daydream"...so this is basically what came out while thinking about the title and listening to the melody:) I close my eyes And I can see What will become of me in the eternety It won´t be long until I keep this vision in my head Flowers glowing, children growing and mothers putting them to bed Colours sorround my soul I can smell the roses everything is moving but slow though noone is taking pauses I can lay on the grass and don´t see the moments pass I can look up in the sky watch the birds that fly Now I open my eyes and feel the time that has passed bye it´s time for me to switch what was dream to alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 12, 2007 Share Posted August 12, 2007 very nice one giuly :nice: :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 12, 2007 Share Posted August 12, 2007 thanks:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 :nice: good one thinker, i liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 I wrote that last night while I couldn´t fall asleep as always:P it´s actually the longest thing I´ve ever done:rolleyes: My heart beats so fast I hardly find time to relax It´s finally the day I´ve been waitning for And all my hopes are knocking at my door Is it gonna be easy? or is it gonna sound a bit too cheesy? I so hope I´m gonna find you I pray that I´m gonna remid you of something... something special, something to hold, Something to love.. My heart moves so fast I hardly think my life will last a minute longer as soon as you set eye on me as long as I can find some apologies something nice to say something cute in this hot day something good before you fly away... I´m afraid I might blow it all away and find too many obstacles on my way let you dissapointed and not knowing if it was really this that I wanted.,. Blaming myself that if only I had wanted it really I might have made it better Blaming yourself that you could have told it all through a letter It all really lays in Fate´s hands it keeps us silent between its bends... So do never dispare my love it will come naturally when it´s ment to be So do never think yourself alone ´cause you are everything that matters to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 :nice: very nice one giuly. i liked it a lot. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 thanks bea!:kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 other one I wrote last night:) Today Everything went in the same way again I´m paralyzed in my little world little knowing what is happening outside my 4 walls I´m stuck in my square Of everything that sorrounds me I am not aware I keep my eyes closed and pretend it´s all right I even feel bored while somewhere else people die Why can´t I fond the strength to wake up? Why can´t I start feeling something needs to be done? I shall start and get a map and keep only one thing in front of me : the sun Everybody should find something to fight for everybody should rise up before finding themselves on the floor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 :surprised: you write daily. :) i liked it giuly :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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