Giuly2E Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 not daily but I seem to get inspired everynight as I try to sleep:P:P:P:P thanks anyway:kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Nice one Guily:) Here's my last one... I dunno how to call it. It's in french. I guess it could be called Loin de Toi Au bord de la mer, je t'ai laissé J'ai eu l'impression de t'abandonner J'aurais voulu ne jamais rentrer J'aurais voulu ne pas te quitter. Sous un ciel clair et étoilé La route, comme les marées, M'a pris, piégé, éloigné, De toi, que j'ai toujours aimé. Ne me laisse pas loin de toi Prends moi encore une fois dans tes bras Je voudrais effacer les longs mois Qui me tiennent éloigné de toi. Ma mémoire me trahit, m'achève, Me fait croire que tout a été un rêve, Toutes ces sensations que le vent m'enlève, En moi, c'est toi que l'on m'enlève. Pourtant, la chaleur de tes calins Me revient, au petit matin. Pourtant, le gout de tes baisers Revient me hanter, me reveiller. Et quand vient le soleil couchant, Notre amour étincelle. Alors que le jour se fait mourant, Nos coeurs s'entremêlent. Encore une fois, S'il te plait, parle moi Avec la douceur de ta peau Avec ton regard si chaud. Translation (useful or not, here it is.) Far from you Nearby the sea, I've left you, I felt like quitting you I never wanted to come back home, I never wanted to leave you. Under a clear and starlighted sky The road, such as tides, Took me, trapped me, drove me away From you, the one I've ever loved. Don't let me far away from you Take me once again in your arms. I would like to erase those long months Which keep me away from you. My memory betrays me, kills me, Makes me believe that all has been a dream, All those feelings taken away by the wind, In me, that's you who's taken away. Though, the warmth of your hugs Comes back in the early hours of the day. Though the taste of your kisses Comes back to haunt me, to wake me up. And when comes the sunset, Our love sparkles. Although the day is going to die, Our hearts intertweave. Once again, Please, talk to me With the softness of your skin, With this warm sight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 18, 2007 Share Posted August 18, 2007 oh great poem mike :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 18, 2007 Share Posted August 18, 2007 Thank you very much. My first french poem since a while...:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 18, 2007 Share Posted August 18, 2007 Thank you very much. My first french poem since a while...:) you see you was worried some days ago that you didn't wrote poetry since so long, and then you see, lovely poems again :nice: i told you that you just had to relax. :) btw i don't write poetry in spanish since long time ago... only some short stories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 19, 2007 Share Posted August 19, 2007 Nice one Guily:) Here's my last one... I dunno how to call it. It's in french. I guess it could be called Loin de Toi Au bord de la mer, je t'ai laissé J'ai eu l'impression de t'abandonner J'aurais voulu ne jamais rentrer J'aurais voulu ne pas te quitter. Sous un ciel clair et étoilé La route, comme les marées, M'a pris, piégé, éloigné, De toi, que j'ai toujours aimé. Ne me laisse pas loin de toi Prends moi encore une fois dans tes bras Je voudrais effacer les longs mois Qui me tiennent éloigné de toi. Ma mémoire me trahit, m'achève, Me fait croire que tout a été un rêve, Toutes ces sensations que le vent m'enlève, En moi, c'est toi que l'on m'enlève. Pourtant, la chaleur de tes calins Me revient, au petit matin. Pourtant, le gout de tes baisers Revient me hanter, me reveiller. Et quand vient le soleil couchant, Notre amour étincelle. Alors que le jour se fait mourant, Nos coeurs s'entremêlent. Encore une fois, S'il te plait, parle moi Avec la douceur de ta peau Avec ton regard si chaud. Translation (useful or not, here it is.) Far from you Nearby the sea, I've left you, I felt like quitting you I never wanted to come back home, I never wanted to leave you. Under a clear and starlighted sky The road, such as tides, Took me, trapped me, drove me away From you, the one I've ever loved. Don't let me far away from you Take me once again in your arms. I would like to erase those long months Which keep me away from you. My memory betrays me, kills me, Makes me believe that all has been a dream, All those feelings taken away by the wind, In me, that's you who's taken away. Though, the warmth of your hugs Comes back in the early hours of the day. Though the taste of your kisses Comes back to haunt me, to wake me up. And when comes the sunset, Our love sparkles. Although the day is going to die, Our hearts intertweave. Once again, Please, talk to me With the softness of your skin, With this warm sight. Magnifique. :( / :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 good one thinker :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 My last one, called Drive Along. I guess I'm trying to make it done and I'm still in progress either so maybe something mistake words, just say it to me ok ;) Drive Along We can't back to the past I don't hope this is the last Lost any relation within friendship It makes me to remember so deep This is what I called the sadness of tears Avoid from any fears Sometimes right goes wrong When you drive along You've got a friend in me There's a way to see To open up your eyes Until you get thousand miles This is what you called long journey For the rest of your life I can't stand without my knees Walk away from five to five Never come back again until the end I hope you understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 good one Afi ;) btw nice blog. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 good one Afi ;) btw nice blog. :) Hehe thanks;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Really nice :wink: You've done a great progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Really nice :wink: You've done a great progress. Hehe.. Thank you.. I've another more.. Here Sorry My Love Love can't be falling off apart You'll be the one of my choice that I love I can't touch your heart even myself But I can break yours I'm sorry I didn't mean it anything to you 'Cause I did was wrong When you touch so deep I can't stand without you Could you tell me what's love actually? I'll love you more than anything I don't want to leave you If I should to leave I promise that I won't break up these things No one except you I'm sorry for you If I've some mistakes to you I wrote this afternoon during the lesson in class:P I was kinda bored so, I wrote with my feelings at that time:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 This is a poem I wrote while flying to the US. It's called The Birth Of A Tear. The purring of the engines near my ears Hypnotizes me and I give up my fears. Softly, all stops moving around me My eyes close all alone, slowly. Just the swift beating of a heart, Few things stop, and one starts. This feeling comes, it's deep, Strong like the wind in winter, Warm like the sun in summer. It climbs up a tough hill, I can't stop this free wheel. Reach the blue windows of my soul You, proof of the one I think of, Drown into the ocean of my love Sweet tear I swipe away This sweet tear is for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 :nice: very nice one Mike :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 This is a poem I wrote while flying to the US. It's called The Birth Of A Tear. The purring of the engines near my ears Hypnotizes me and I give up my fears. Softly, all stops moving around me My eyes close all alone, slowly. Just the swift beating of a heart, Few things stop, and one starts. This feeling comes, it's deep, Strong like the wind in winter, Warm like the sun in summer. It climbs up a tough hill, I can't stop this free wheel. Reach the blue windows of my soul You, proof of the one I think of, Drown into the ocean of my love Sweet tear I swipe away This sweet tear is for you. Nice, Mike :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 a new poem is in order :) .... .my mind is Empty .loneliness surrounds Me .tomorrow you'll be Here .Maybe Or Not. .my mind is Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 2, 2007 Share Posted September 2, 2007 I got this poem from my friend.. Here Its called "Waiting (written by : Icha)" are you there, are you watching me as i lie here on this floor they say you feel like i do they say you here every moment will you stay until a darkness leave stay... here with me i know you're only ordinary people, and i am the one for you but you might be the only one who sees me the only one who saved me why it is so hard, why cant you just take me, i don't have much way to go before i fade completely do you feel how cold i am ? do you cry as i do? are you lonely up there? like i have felt in my life the only one who saved me why are you so strong? what is it like to feel so free? your heart is really meaning to me your love, a complete mystery to me do you cry with me?....cry with me tonight are you there...are you watching me? Well, I edited a bit if its actually from my friend's poem:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted September 2, 2007 Share Posted September 2, 2007 nice one ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 5, 2007 Share Posted September 5, 2007 Its like a lyric, I like it;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Which band? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 Oh I see That's cool:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giuly2E Posted September 16, 2007 Share Posted September 16, 2007 ^ I liked the song!the lyrics is also really good:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted October 16, 2007 Author Share Posted October 16, 2007 De-Faced Replacement funny how the money disappears like some queer thing mysteriously cheers me on like I can rear dear little children when I'm done hearing all I can here I fear the real tears will veer down and we're both theater thesbian broke actors smoking the joke joint that teaches us the point: we're not going to keep our coins when the poised disguised boys erase all traces of our faces to replace our places with empty spaces because the bank accounts don't count in the towns they expect more than a down payment ___________________________________ Blueprint Missing It's not dark enough to remember myself black ink sinks deeper yet, not far enough into paper clear mind clear word clear, clear room inside my head I walk naked to visualize the right in the wrongly defined alone loneliness happiness hand in hand (are) my inspiration I am my only love but I lied to myself when I wrote and when I said "here" [these words are for you] I can't remember myself; these structured lines these imprinted notes: the aforementioned defined that I'm emptied starkly as lightning strikes darkly exploiting the void: the noise of voices, toy with me to the point they extinct me they distract me so, they're soundwaves arrayed across my light-sighted-organs I wrote about myself that creature, never-remembered ___________________________________ politically unnamed for my protection (2007-10-2) today I feel tickled like a pickle and I want to jump like a hump So I leap without a peep And people listen while they're pissin So I write pretty like a kite That flies high in the sky, why? I ain't so cold yet that I'm growin mold Cuz if I was, I would revise the wise lies that tie into the lines that comprise of this disguised revised small size rhymes that make this positive or derogative, a reeling rope that gropes you on the slopes before it's over this october I can appeal to quite a deal of real yielding wielded zealots jealous of the amorous tactless happenings realizing the constant (almost) perfectly timed chiming that's lining the pining unnamed game I have no one to blame for the fame of this rambling because it's not famous as far as names can surprise us written in books not so cooked by crooks who vandalize the sides margin with guises and (forgive me for repeating the word) surprises that make as much sense as a fence that keeps out mexicans Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 take me down to your special sea eye to eye, my accompany touch my lips to speak again broken sixstring ring again crown my name with your everything break my chain cause i' m giving in you come with me all the way white light look i' d rather stare into the eyes of your garden' s sphere you come with me all the way you comfort me all the way take me down to your special sea disarm me weapon novelty touch my lips to speak again broken six string ring again lend me your voice new jerusalem shut my mouthful of empty games all of my diamonds all through this strain life all of me reckless on to this pain strife deep to me deeply look to me gently drawn to you dearly drawn to you I liked this one, nice :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 19, 2007 Share Posted October 19, 2007 Blame With Flame Water can't be bought Air can't be paid This is the moment that I couldn't Stay away from anything behind You're satisfied now Well is not being easy to solve I regret because of this Because there's a way to open to tell the truth Rainbows are rare to show up in the sky I never see the helicopter above me And even I care about it So I don't care about you too She blamed me, she told all lies Acting being cruel and rude What a such prejudiced If fires are burn The lights going low If flames burn it up The sun will never shine anymore Could you do it for me, please? I'll stay with you forever Because I love you so For the second time Wait and see If its really true I go on with you If not Just blame with flame Blame with flame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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