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Nice one Guily:)

 

Here's my last one... I dunno how to call it. It's in french.

 

I guess it could be called Loin de Toi

 

Au bord de la mer, je t'ai laissé

J'ai eu l'impression de t'abandonner

J'aurais voulu ne jamais rentrer

J'aurais voulu ne pas te quitter.

 

Sous un ciel clair et étoilé

La route, comme les marées,

M'a pris, piégé, éloigné,

De toi, que j'ai toujours aimé.

 

Ne me laisse pas loin de toi

Prends moi encore une fois dans tes bras

Je voudrais effacer les longs mois

Qui me tiennent éloigné de toi.

 

Ma mémoire me trahit, m'achève,

Me fait croire que tout a été un rêve,

Toutes ces sensations que le vent m'enlève,

En moi, c'est toi que l'on m'enlève.

 

Pourtant, la chaleur de tes calins

Me revient, au petit matin.

Pourtant, le gout de tes baisers

Revient me hanter, me reveiller.

 

Et quand vient le soleil couchant,

Notre amour étincelle.

Alors que le jour se fait mourant,

Nos coeurs s'entremêlent.

 

Encore une fois,

S'il te plait, parle moi

Avec la douceur de ta peau

Avec ton regard si chaud.

 

 

Translation (useful or not, here it is.)

 

Far from you

 

Nearby the sea, I've left you,

I felt like quitting you

I never wanted to come back home,

I never wanted to leave you.

 

Under a clear and starlighted sky

The road, such as tides,

Took me, trapped me, drove me away

From you, the one I've ever loved.

 

Don't let me far away from you

Take me once again in your arms.

I would like to erase those long months

Which keep me away from you.

 

My memory betrays me, kills me,

Makes me believe that all has been a dream,

All those feelings taken away by the wind,

In me, that's you who's taken away.

 

Though, the warmth of your hugs

Comes back in the early hours of the day.

Though the taste of your kisses

Comes back to haunt me, to wake me up.

 

And when comes the sunset,

Our love sparkles.

Although the day is going to die,

Our hearts intertweave.

 

Once again,

Please, talk to me

With the softness of your skin,

With this warm sight.

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Thank you very much. My first french poem since a while...:)

you see you was worried some days ago that you didn't wrote poetry since so long, and then you see, lovely poems again :nice:

i told you that you just had to relax. :)

btw i don't write poetry in spanish since long time ago... only some short stories.

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Nice one Guily:)

 

Here's my last one... I dunno how to call it. It's in french.

 

I guess it could be called Loin de Toi

 

Au bord de la mer, je t'ai laissé

J'ai eu l'impression de t'abandonner

J'aurais voulu ne jamais rentrer

J'aurais voulu ne pas te quitter.

 

Sous un ciel clair et étoilé

La route, comme les marées,

M'a pris, piégé, éloigné,

De toi, que j'ai toujours aimé.

 

Ne me laisse pas loin de toi

Prends moi encore une fois dans tes bras

Je voudrais effacer les longs mois

Qui me tiennent éloigné de toi.

 

Ma mémoire me trahit, m'achève,

Me fait croire que tout a été un rêve,

Toutes ces sensations que le vent m'enlève,

En moi, c'est toi que l'on m'enlève.

 

Pourtant, la chaleur de tes calins

Me revient, au petit matin.

Pourtant, le gout de tes baisers

Revient me hanter, me reveiller.

 

Et quand vient le soleil couchant,

Notre amour étincelle.

Alors que le jour se fait mourant,

Nos coeurs s'entremêlent.

 

Encore une fois,

S'il te plait, parle moi

Avec la douceur de ta peau

Avec ton regard si chaud.

 

 

 

Translation (useful or not, here it is.)

 

Far from you

 

Nearby the sea, I've left you,

I felt like quitting you

I never wanted to come back home,

I never wanted to leave you.

 

Under a clear and starlighted sky

The road, such as tides,

Took me, trapped me, drove me away

From you, the one I've ever loved.

 

Don't let me far away from you

Take me once again in your arms.

I would like to erase those long months

Which keep me away from you.

 

My memory betrays me, kills me,

Makes me believe that all has been a dream,

All those feelings taken away by the wind,

In me, that's you who's taken away.

 

Though, the warmth of your hugs

Comes back in the early hours of the day.

Though the taste of your kisses

Comes back to haunt me, to wake me up.

 

And when comes the sunset,

Our love sparkles.

Although the day is going to die,

Our hearts intertweave.

 

Once again,

Please, talk to me

With the softness of your skin,

With this warm sight.

 

Magnifique. :( / :)

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My last one, called Drive Along.

I guess I'm trying to make it done and I'm still in progress either so maybe something mistake words, just say it to me ok ;)

 

Drive Along

 

We can't back to the past

I don't hope this is the last

Lost any relation within friendship

It makes me to remember so deep

This is what I called the sadness of tears

Avoid from any fears

Sometimes right goes wrong

When you drive along

You've got a friend in me

There's a way to see

To open up your eyes

Until you get thousand miles

This is what you called long journey

For the rest of your life

I can't stand without my knees

Walk away from five to five

Never come back again until the end

I hope you understand

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Really nice :wink:

You've done a great progress.

 

Hehe.. Thank you..

 

I've another more.. Here

 

Sorry My Love

 

Love can't be falling off apart

You'll be the one of my choice that I love

I can't touch your heart even myself

But I can break yours

I'm sorry I didn't mean it anything to you

'Cause I did was wrong

When you touch so deep

I can't stand without you

 

Could you tell me what's love actually?

I'll love you more than anything

I don't want to leave you

If I should to leave

I promise that I won't break up these things

No one except you

I'm sorry for you

If I've some mistakes to you

 

 

I wrote this afternoon during the lesson in class:P

I was kinda bored so, I wrote with my feelings at that time:P

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This is a poem I wrote while flying to the US.

 

It's called The Birth Of A Tear.

 

The purring of the engines near my ears

Hypnotizes me and I give up my fears.

Softly, all stops moving around me

My eyes close all alone, slowly.

Just the swift beating of a heart,

Few things stop, and one starts.

This feeling comes, it's deep,

Strong like the wind in winter,

Warm like the sun in summer.

It climbs up a tough hill,

I can't stop this free wheel.

Reach the blue windows of my soul

You, proof of the one I think of,

Drown into the ocean of my love

Sweet tear I swipe away

This sweet tear is for you.

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This is a poem I wrote while flying to the US.

 

It's called The Birth Of A Tear.

 

The purring of the engines near my ears

Hypnotizes me and I give up my fears.

Softly, all stops moving around me

My eyes close all alone, slowly.

Just the swift beating of a heart,

Few things stop, and one starts.

This feeling comes, it's deep,

Strong like the wind in winter,

Warm like the sun in summer.

It climbs up a tough hill,

I can't stop this free wheel.

Reach the blue windows of my soul

You, proof of the one I think of,

Drown into the ocean of my love

Sweet tear I swipe away

This sweet tear is for you.

 

Nice, Mike :wink:

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I got this poem from my friend.. Here

Its called "Waiting (written by : Icha)"

are you there, are you watching me

as i lie here on this floor

they say you feel like i do

they say you here every moment

will you stay until a darkness leave

stay... here with me

i know you're only ordinary people, and i am the one for you

but you might be the only one who sees me

the only one who saved me

why it is so hard,

why cant you just take me,

i don't have much way to go

before i fade completely

do you feel how cold i am ?

do you cry as i do?

are you lonely up there?

like i have felt in my life

the only one who saved me

why are you so strong?

what is it like to feel so free?

your heart is really meaning to me

your love, a complete mystery to me

do you cry with me?....cry with me tonight

are you there...are you watching me?

 

Well, I edited a bit if its actually from my friend's poem:D

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De-Faced Replacement

 

funny how the money disappears

like some queer thing mysteriously cheers me on

like I can rear dear little children

when I'm done hearing all I can here

I fear the real tears will veer down

and we're both theater thesbian broke

actors smoking the joke joint

that teaches us the point: we're not going

to keep our coins

when the poised disguised boys erase all traces of our faces

to replace our places with empty spaces

because the bank accounts don't count

in the towns they expect more than a down payment

___________________________________

 

Blueprint Missing

 

It's not dark enough

to remember myself

black ink sinks

deeper yet,

not far enough

into paper

 

clear mind

clear word

clear,

clear room

inside my head I walk naked

to visualize the right

in the wrongly defined

 

alone

loneliness

happiness

hand in hand (are)

my inspiration

I am my only love

but I lied to myself

when I wrote

and when I said

"here" [these words are for you]

 

I can't remember myself;

these structured lines

these imprinted notes:

the aforementioned

defined

that I'm emptied

 

starkly as lightning strikes darkly

exploiting the void:

the noise of voices,

toy with me

to the point they extinct me

they distract me so,

they're soundwaves arrayed

across my light-sighted-organs

 

I wrote about myself

that creature, never-remembered

___________________________________

 

politically unnamed for my protection (2007-10-2)

 

today I feel tickled like a pickle

and I want to jump like a hump

So I leap without a peep

And people listen while they're pissin

So I write pretty like a kite

That flies high in the sky, why?

I ain't so cold yet that I'm growin mold

Cuz if I was, I would revise the wise lies that tie into the lines

that comprise of this disguised revised small size rhymes

that make this positive or derogative,

a reeling rope that gropes you on the slopes

before it's over this october

I can appeal to quite a deal of real yielding wielded zealots

jealous of the amorous tactless happenings

realizing the constant (almost) perfectly timed chiming

that's lining the pining unnamed game

I have no one to blame for the fame of this rambling

because it's not famous as far as names can surprise us

written in books not so cooked by crooks

who vandalize the sides margin with guises

and (forgive me for repeating the word) surprises

that make as much sense as a fence that keeps out mexicans

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take me down to your special sea

eye to eye, my accompany

touch my lips to speak again

broken sixstring ring again

crown my name with your everything

break my chain cause i' m giving in

 

you come with me all the way

 

white light look i' d rather stare

into the eyes of your garden' s sphere

 

you come with me all the way

you comfort me all the way

 

take me down to your special sea

disarm me weapon novelty

touch my lips to speak again

broken six string ring again

lend me your voice new jerusalem

shut my mouthful of empty games

all of my diamonds

all through this strain life

all of me reckless

on to this pain strife

deep to me deeply

look to me gently

drawn to you dearly

drawn to you

 

I liked this one, nice :thumbsup:

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Blame With Flame

 

Water can't be bought

Air can't be paid

This is the moment that I couldn't

Stay away from anything behind

You're satisfied now

Well is not being easy to solve

I regret because of this

Because there's a way to open to tell the truth

Rainbows are rare to show up in the sky

I never see the helicopter above me

And even I care about it

So I don't care about you too

She blamed me, she told all lies

 

Acting being cruel and rude

What a such prejudiced

If fires are burn

The lights going low

If flames burn it up

The sun will never shine anymore

Could you do it for me, please?

I'll stay with you forever

Because I love you so

For the second time

Wait and see

If its really true

I go on with you

If not

Just blame with flame

Blame with flame

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