0_o

 

Ehhhh.... I guess I shouldn't then. :P

 

EDIT: ^Wow, that bad? lol

Its cute, yet raunchy.

Its alright, read it, but close it if your parents walk in :lol:

jk.

good advice ;)

Haha, its not like theres pictures, its more of a "i dont want them to see that word" thing.

 

lol :lol:

I'd rather not, hehe.

 

I've stumbled across some pretty nasty fanfic in my lifetime... lol. Don't wanna go back. :P

im not finishing it...is just too strange.... :stunned: , i dont even want to go on, it just seems inapropiate to write fan fics such as this one :stunned:

 

i have written fan fic but my writings are nothing like this, mine are funny and logical...but this one :stunned: , im hoping that neither of them will ever read it, otherwise... :stunned:

Mmmk..

 

But if ever you are in a raunchy mood, read it. :lol:

^^Same here. :D

 

I like nice, clean (violence is welcome. :D), funny fan fic. :D

Oh yeah..

 

And Christiana.

 

HOME OF THE BITCH! :lol: :lol:

amen sista!!! ;)

did you get my 2nd rant message mandy?

No.

 

Garrrr.

I hate/love comps. :sneaky:

i shall try to send it again - the private message function on here leaves a bit to be desired... :/

haha.

 

I know this mah dearrrr, :P

glarbinator, alyssa, same here... the writing is good(from a writer's perspective) but as a critic and a coldplay fan, the writing was just unethical, strange and incomplete. although the writer could easily describe jonny's behavior(he acts the same way i imagine) he fails to obtain a sharp description of behavior of both guy and will. guy seemed oddly rude, raw and unaware of everything. wil on the other hand seemed quirky, clownish and even childish, not mature and refelctive with a hint of fresh humor as he is described to be in real life.

 

it disappoints me...truly...

glarbinator, alyssa, same here... the writing is good(from a writer's perspective) but as a critic and a coldplay fan, the writing was just unethical, strange and incomplete. although the writer could easily describe jonny's behavior(he acts the same way i imagine) he fails to obtain a sharp description of behavior of both guy and will. guy seemed oddly rude, raw and unaware of everything. wil on the other hand seemed quirky, clownish and even childish, not mature and refelctive with a hint of fresh humor as he is described to be in real life.

 

it disappoints me...truly...

 

Did you notice that its a fan fic?

 

Its made for humor.

Im sure it wasnt intended for a New York Times reveiw on it.

For entertainment.

:lol:

:bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry: :bigcry:

 

 

 

 

:stunned: I had to stop, and I think I'm going to go die now.

 

 

Erm... sorry... I don't know, I mean I don't want to insult anyone who uh... likes that. but......... I just want to go die now, that's all...

 

Just.... :stunned: *done* Sorry uh... yep. I'm in shock, that's all. :stunned: :stunned:

I don't like humor fics.

 

One more reason I shouldn't read this! :D

Then dont read it anymore people that cant handle it.

 

Lol. :lol:

I haven't read it yet :o

is this a gay thing xD?

Yep.

I didnt think it was that bad, but a few did.

I would read it if you are mature enough.

If your not, than dont bother.

 

I thought it was funny personally. :D

Well, "if you never try, then you'll never know..."...

 

*goes to read fanfic*

Yes.

 

Not that I, uh, care.... I just I dunno...... I feel really strange reading that about people... There's some fan fiction that's ok, done in a playful, fun sort of way... But to.... Eh.

 

It just gave me a strange feeling, that's all. Just trying to give other people a heads up. :stunned:

 

Oh, and I hope that doesn't make me immature.... :cry:

It will wear off in alittle while.

Thats how I was for a little bit.

Then you see the humor in it. :D