Hmmm...well it has no words which is annoying. The whole time I'm waiting for words but they never come :o

 

Read the first post.....

 

But keep the bad reviews coming.

Random tidbit: if you turn it up loud you can hear the metronome-type thing on the ancient keyboard I was using to keep time.

Oh right sorry. Ok umm...it sounds like another song I cant remember who by though. It might be Nico..........hmm....... Anywho my point is its a little unoriginal! Oh no I hate being mean, aghhh.

well,no words=no problems

Yee...finally i could lsiten to it...

and my first impresion was "Awwww...." hehe it sounds so nice...like Nik said...a bit like a lullaby:wink:

 

I only think you could maybe improve it a bit...I don't know how...

but improve it in so far that it maybe doesn't sound that much the same...;)

I hope you know what I mean...

 

but all in all a cute melody:)

I wrote a song. No lyrics, just an acoustic guitar and some organny sounding keyboard to make it sound more professional.:smug:

 

Dmusic Link: Just go here and click the little green arrow next to the Untitled one or if that doesn't work download the:

Rapidshare file here.

 

As you can see it says v1.1, meaning it is not finished, not even close. I might even just constantly update that thing until it is how I would like the finished product to be.

 

And try to ignore the fact that the keyboard is slightly out of time with the guitar, I had to record them seperately and then with the magic of Audacity meld them together, that is the best I got.

 

And also I've never played piano/keyboard in my life, other than Ode to Joy, Mary had a Little Lamb and Hot Cross Buns I've got nothin'.

 

Oh and also it is very short because I want to soon add a bridge and probably vocals etc. except I suck tremendously at singing so that will be a while cause I don't want to destroy the song.

 

Enjoy.

 

P.S. Any constructive critisicm accepted, I know it's crap but if you can tell me why at least I can improve it.

 

P.P.S. I had to do that thing at the end because otherwise there a heap of noises there.

 

P.P.P.S. Recorded with my mp3 player so cut me some slack.

 

 

I don't have anything interesting to say all I know is I like it!

Why didnt you tell me you gimp.

 

I enjoy this muchly, I want to rape it actually. When I get back from holiday in a week and a half I'm going to put lyrics and vocals on the mother, whether you like it or not (And whether or not its even capable to sample on my muffucking PC).

I only put it up here yesterday you gimp.

 

Do whatever the hell you want with it but it is probably too short to do much with anyway, if you really want me to I'll record a longer version and maybe add a bridge. But only if you really want me to, because I couldn't be bothered really.

the song is not bad,but the end? omg,my ears were getting broken

What the white noise fuzz thing?

yes,that thing at the end,omg

Lovely.