look at the moon, look at the stars

don't you see one day they all will be ours

look at the sea, look at the sky...

 

now you keep going hehe

 

'cos baby don't you know they belong to you and I ? (it seemed rather obvious)

 

we can call this the geography song :laugh3:

Look at the moon,look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea,look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look at the future,look at the past

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

they are closer than they seem thay are

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

 

nice touch!!

maya's line is good too :)

^ I don't mean to keep changing things, its just I'm working out a melody :P

^ I don't mean to keep changing things, its just I'm working out a melody :P

 

Oh dont worry!!My line needed a little kick anyways!!

I think I've got a good melody :D

I'm excited about this.

 

So.

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

I can't help but taste it everywhere I go

The heartbeat in the trees, oh I feel it in my bones

 

..:\ I don't love those next lines.. someone has something better I bet?

Oh I love this game (and I won't go lame this time if you are worried about it)

 

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

look beneath my skin and lean on my back

'cause the best thing to enjoy is in our hearts

 

Yeah I know I need a lot of practice

Edit: I jsut added another line but girlinthebandshirt's line was better

I think I've got a good melody :D

I'm excited about this.

 

So.

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

I can't help but taste it everywhere I go

The heartbeat in the trees, oh I feel it in my bones

 

..:\ I don't love those next lines.. someone has something better I bet?

 

 

Those are pretty good.I like them.It still flows with the song an lyrics. So are we ready for a chorus now??

Look at the moon, look at the stars

dont you see one day they all will be our ours

look at the sea, look at the sky

cos baby dont you know they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the earth is spinning us so fast

look beneath my skin and lean on my back

'cause the best thing to enjoy is in our hearts

 

 

anybody see the moon in the same place,

only we can, cause we are one.

 

maby this can be the chours

When I've put it to music, some of it didn't sound right... here's what I think will work (clearly open to interpretation) :nice:

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours

Look at the sea, look at the sky

'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the Earth is spiining us so fast

I can't help but taste it now

Something I can't figure out

 

Maybe I'm wrong

Maybe I'm right

-needs something here, and I'm not sure what-

It's the way I know

Its the way I know

 

^ I originally had 'the world I know' but then I realized that's a Collective Soul song :thinking: :laugh3:

 

^ I originally had 'the world I know' but then I realized that's a Collective Soul song :thinking: :laugh3:

 

maybe it can be 'the world we know' hehe

When I've put it to music, some of it didn't sound right... here's what I think will work (clearly open to interpretation) :nice:

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours

Look at the sea, look at the sky

'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the Earth is spiining us so fast

I can't help but taste it now

Something I can't figure out

 

Maybe I'm wrong

Maybe I'm right

-needs something here, and I'm not sure what-

It's the way I know

Its the way I know

 

^ I originally had 'the world I know' but then I realized that's a Collective Soul song :thinking: :laugh3:

 

 

that would have went great with the theme of the song!I kinda like "the world I know" Maybe we can change it to"the world WE know"??

maybe it can be 'the world we know' hehe

 

haha great minds think alike!!=)

haha great minds think alike!!=)

 

hehe coldplayers minds:D

^weird you guys, haha

do you think that's different enough?

I'll change all the I's to we's.. I think that'll work :nice:

 

So.

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours

Look at the sea, look at the sky

'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the Earth is spiining us so fast

I can't help but taste it now

Something I can't figure out

 

Maybe we're wrong

Maybe we're right

-still needs something here-

But its the world we know

Its the world we know

Maybe I'm wrong

Maybe I'm right

-needs something here, and I'm not sure what-

It's the way I know

Its the way I know

 

 

Maybe im wrong

Maybe Im right

Theres no need for us to fight??

Its the world we know

Its the world we know

^ that's cool... needs to be a few more syllables though (its geeky, I know, but otherwise it doesn't fit the music as well)

 

hmm :thinking:

^ that's cool... needs to be a few more syllables though (its geeky, I know, but otherwise it doesn't fit the music as well)

 

hmm :thinking:

 

thats quite alright.you know the melody so if you can think of anything to add please do!

what do you think? :confused:

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours

Look at the sea, look at the sky

'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the Earth is spinning us so fast

I can't help but taste it now

Something I can't figure out

 

Maybe we're right

Maybe we're wrong

Maybe its just another way to belong ?

But its the world we know

Its the world we know

what do you think? :confused:

 

Look at the moon, look at the stars

Dont you see that one day they all will be our ours

Look at the sea, look at the sky

'Cos baby dont you know that they belong to you and I

 

Look into the future, look down at the past

Feel the way the Earth is spinning us so fast

I can't help but taste it now

Something I can't figure out

 

Maybe we're right

Maybe we're wrong

Maybe its just another way to belong ?

But its the world we know

Its the world we know

 

 

Thats good!

cheers :nice: now I'll stop being a lyric hog, haha.

 

One more verse, and maybe a little break-away section, and it'll be finished I'd say.

Ideas?

Yea come on people lets get some lyrics from are fellow talented coldplaying members!!