October 31, 200916 yr The Escapists: Awwww great ending I loved it!:heart::bigcry:(these are tears of joy) Love Over This: Some pretty intense stuff:D A Rush Of Blood: At least they can still be together in their dreams:) But I'm still anxious for Elizabeth to wake up already!:whip::P
October 31, 200916 yr Oh, I forgot to review The Escapists! :facepalm: It was an excellently written story, yes, but I feel like the good part came too early. I thought things would take a huge turn for the worst and almost destroy Chris and Jonny's relationship. I liked the ending, though. SO SWEET Love Over This--Simon, are you trying to write a comedy or a serious story? I is confuzzled. :confused: But it has suspense, which is a good thing because cliff hangers get you a better audience!
October 31, 200916 yr Druids came out of the trees- is he looking at a sheep? :surprised: Will growled, "He looks so drugged, I can't take him seriously." that part made me laugh. :lol:
October 31, 200916 yr ToCatchFire--Great start to a suspenseful, mysterious story! Hmm is Chris some kind of British Chuck Norris now, who can divide by 0?
October 31, 200916 yr And To Carry The One: Chris looked briefly around the room and saw that Jonny was eye raping Guy. I nearly died laughing:lol: And the ending was hilarious too. I can't wait for more:dance::D
October 31, 200916 yr Thanks Lhuna and Keddie. :D I really liked your poem Lhuna. I can't wait for the next one :bomb: It's funny you should say that I actually went to Wal-Mart and saw a Chuck Norris poster and I was like I bet Chris could divide by zero too. :P :smash:
October 31, 200916 yr Coldplayisawesome. Your story is awesome. :o I was really suprised with the ending. :smash: :D
October 31, 200916 yr Ehhhhh.....I knew this would have to happen eventually. I've reached the first....erm...."intiamte" scene of my story. I've got to force myself to keep writing through the awkwardness!
October 31, 200916 yr Woah Brooke! This is getting so intense so fast:o:stunned::shocked2: I'm both scared and eager for the next chapter.
October 31, 200916 yr Noooooooo:bigcry: :lol: Well that's better than promising to put up another chapter, and then never doing it, like me.
October 31, 200916 yr Haha thanks.:D I've come up with a solution though. I'll just write a bunch of foreplay and then skip ahead a couple hours.:lol: That's my style. Avoidance:thumbsup:
October 31, 200916 yr BROOKE! :bigcry: You're so cruel! Don't leave us hanging like that! And You Carry the One--Believe it or not, I was about to reference that Chuck Norris fact. But it looks like everyone already knows it! :lol: One Day Like This--:dizzy: :sweatdrop: Druids... This 'epic' is very interesting. You're really creative!
November 1, 200916 yr Brooke- Your wedding scene was sweet and lovely. I could totally see Chris spending all day doing something like that.....thanks for a great story!!!!!!!!!!!
November 1, 200916 yr aww, i'm glad you liked it. :wacky: it was weird when i woke up this morning and didn't have to write a new chapter of The Escapists. :P
November 1, 200916 yr i think i actually will write a third one, but i'll probably wait a while before i do. right now i'm just trying to decide whether or not to leave The Drums as a cliffhanger. :P by the way, you should totally post some more of Ho Ho Ho *cough cough*
November 1, 200916 yr :lol: well, maybe i'll write more of it. :P One Day Like This- :wink3::wink3: You better!:whip: Just kidding:P If you ever feel the strong urge to write more, than so be it, and if not, ooooooh well. There is no rule that says you can't continue their story!!!!!!;) This is true:sneaky:
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