LOVED the ending of In A Little While, so sweet to see Guy being an adorable daddy!

 

I liked the line about Guy not being a robot, maybe he had been lurking in that thread :laugh3:

Juliana-

 

You are crazy girl..........

That was very creative.

I imagine there are scenes like that happening all over the world when women go into labor.

I love how he was trying to be so sweet and she was being a bitch.

And the best part was at the end when he wanted to name the kid after Will, Chris and Jonny.

It really was great.

Scandalous was amazing brooke!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:clap::clap::heart:

 

In a Little While was incredible!!! LOVED the ending!!! :wacky::wacky::heart:D:D:D:D :clap::clap:

 

And in my place was fantastic!!! :D:D:D:D:D :heart::clap::clap:

@jknc , I just finished the latest chapter of The Wedding :dance:! I really like this epic Guy/Fab love story you have going. How many stories have you written all together?

 

Nick, you keep your hands to yourself :whip:

@jknc , I just finished the latest chapter of The Wedding :dance:! I really like this epic Guy/Fab love story you have going. How many stories have you written all together?

 

Nick, you keep your hands to yourself :whip:

 

 

 

In general............more than 70 stories.

For Guy/Fab............13 stories.

 

 

I am glad that you like it.

It started as one and just turned into a monster.

Oh my gosh..............Poor Jonny!

Someone needs to get him away from that witch fast!!!

Good story though.

Where is Super Hero Chris when you need him?

 

 

 

 

Phil as coffee boy.........that is hilariously appropriate.

What will they write about?? Hmmmm......

:lol:

 

Thank you :)

Poor, poor Jonny. :sad:

He needs a new girlfriend that isn't a jerk...

What the hell is keeping them together? :thinking:

Jonny wants love, he doesn't want to be alone. He has this fear (you will find out later) of being lonely, he'll do anything to keep this women! He does really like her but is scared of her and I'm sorry to say...it's all going to get a HELL of alot worse! She will be getting at Jonny psychologically, metally and physically, tracking his every move, blocking him from his friends, the band etc. :( :(

@bear

 

Your story was so cool.

I find it hard to believe you haven't written before...

And I wonder why not?

ive just never really had any ideas, i guess!

and thanks a lot:nice: im kind of nervous about showing my writing:shy:

ive just never really had any ideas, i guess!

and thanks a lot:nice: im kind of nervous about shwoing my writing:shy:

 

 

I certainly understand the nervous part.

But thanks for overcoming it and sharing your story.

@bear

Omg. Your story is really good so far!

“What? Do you think I’m a freaking robot?” Guy asked, his own tears shining in his eyes. Yes Guy, yes we do. We even have a thread about it. And btw I love Chris' baby names :lol:

Oh, I'm loving all the fanfics!!! In My Place, If Only You Knew, The Daily Coldplayer, You Don't Know How Lovely You Are. You are all doing a terrific job with these stories.

 

Seriously, all the stories being posted here are so diverse and creative! I love it :nice:

 

 

EDIT: Thank you all for the lovely comments. It really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it!

Oh YAY!! Darcy your story is so exciting! I would kill to be Coldplay's assistant :bigcry:

 

Can't wait for more :D

 

Simon, you be nice to Jonny :angry:

 

 

 

 

 

:curtain:....I shouldn't really talk since I'm kinda giving him a hard time in my story too

aaahh, thanks a lot:heart:

i hope i can actually figure out a plot:uhoh:..

 

 

:lol:

aaahh, thanks a lot:heart:

i hope i can actually figure out a plot:uhoh:..

 

 

:lol:

 

One Woman...............four gorgeous men....

The plot writes itself...............:laugh3::laugh3:

One Woman...............four gorgeous men....

The plot writes itself...............:laugh3::laugh3:

 

ha, indeed! :lol::wink3:

ok, so this is my first attempt at fanfiction..:shy:

its pretty much just fluff, at least for now.

i guess its rated "R," for language.

 

You Don't Know How Lovely You Are

CHAPTER ONE

 

 

 

“Shit shit shit shit shit.”

 

Cursing furiously under my breath, I groped in my purse for keys. Gum, iPod, movie ticket stubs, lint, lipgloss, extra coins.. Everything but keys. Finally, my hand felt cold metal and I tore them from my bag. I jammed them into the lock of my car with a little more force than was necessary.

 

I was standing on the London street outside my flat, and I was very, very late. Late to something I could care less if I went to or not.

 

Finally, the lock clicked and I jumped into my car. Turning the key in the ignition, I started down the street. I wasn’t paying much attention to the road, because all I could think was, Elle is going to fucking kill me if I miss this. Elle is going to fucking kill me if I miss this. I was trying to think less of my best friend, and more of where I was going when my phone buzzed on the dashboard.

 

“Yeahh, hello?”

 

“Are you there yet?!”

 

Oh shit.

 

“Not yet, I’m driving.”

 

“V, I am going to fucking kill you if you miss this!” I heard Elle screech angrily. Luckily, I was prepared and held the small phone away from my face.

 

“Look, I’m really, really sorry. I’ll be there soon. You know I don’t even want to go!”

 

“V,” Elle started, trying to sound a bit more kind. “I know you don’t want to go. But you have to. You have to get on with your life. I’m doing this because I love you, you know!”

 

I sighed, knowing she was right, once again. I hadn’t had a job in four months. And it wasn’t exactly a coincidence that my ex-boyfriend, Jack, broke up with me approximately four months ago as well. I was a wreck for weeks, crying on the job, taking sick days for no reason, coming in late. I couldn’t really blame the office for firing me, but still, it stung. I lost my boyfriend, my job, and I traded in my nice flat for a tiny one, across the city from my friends. I felt like the only thing left was Elle, my best friend since we were sixteen. Now we were both twenty-nine, and I didn’t have my shit together.

 

“I love you, too,” I sighed into the phone. “I’m turning onto the block right now. I’ll call you when I’m done?”

 

I heard Elle breath what sounded like a sigh of relief. “Good luck, V,” she said, and I heard the phone click as she hung up.

 

After parallel parking, I hurried across the street and through the entrance of a slightly rundown building. Seeing that there wasn’t a lift, I started taking the stairs two steps at a time, my breathing becoming more and more heavy. At the top, I crossed the threshold into a small waiting room, with a sign outside that said “EMI STAFFING” in dark lettering. After speaking with the receptionist (more like “breathing at the receptionist”), I took a seat in the small waiting area with another woman, a little older than me.

 

Catching my breath, I thought about what I was doing. What job am I even applying for? I thought to myself. What was Elle thinking?

 

I didn’t have more time than that to ponder, because soon I heard my name.

 

“Violet Grant! He’ll see you now.”

 

I straightened my skirt and walked up to the door to the left of the receptionist’s counter. Entering, I saw a man, about my age, sitting behind a simple desk. I sat down opposite him.

 

“Good morning, er, Violet Grant,” he said, looking down at a paper in front of him. “You’re Elle’s friend?”

 

“Yes,” I said.

 

“Well, as you know, she recommend you for a job with our company.” He paused, as if he wanted me to say something.

 

“Er, yes,” I said stupidly, “I know, but she didn’t exactly tell me what the job is. She only rang to tell me late last night.”

 

“I see. Well, the job is ‘Artists’ Assistant.’”

 

“Um, what does that entail?”

 

“Well, you’d have to travel with a band, in this case, Coldplay, and well, assist them!”

 

My heart skipped a beat. Or possibly five beats.

 

“Coldplay?” Whoops, I said that bit outloud. “I mean, wow. Seriously?” I was sounding dumber by the minute. I had been practically obsessed with Coldplay since they first broke 10 years ago. Instead of talking, I was thinking Elle, I love you so, so much!

 

Realizing he was still watching me, I said, “That would be fantastic!”

 

Smiling a little, the man said, “Great. I’ve seen your resume. Your job as a secretary for five years, and then a waitress before that... You will do perfectly. Here’s Coldplay’s tour schedule. I’ll have someone contact you to tell you about paperwork, salary, passports, things like that. Welcome to the EMI team!”

 

As he shook my hand, I realized the interview was over. My whole body felt a bit numb with surprise and excitement. As I walked confidently out of the room (I say “walked,” but it was really more of a girlish skip), I felt supremely happy. Things were starting to look up. And I owed Elle a very, very large present.

 

 

Ahh...you're a fan of the fluff, eh? :dozey:

That's probably the one style I would never attempt to write. :lol:

But I'll read your story, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it. *goes to power through the fluffiness*

hahaha, its not that fluff-y.

its just kinda.. not depressing:lol:

 

tell me what you think when youre done:nice:

Hey! My stories are like Coldplay songs. Sort of depressing, but with a light at the end of the tunnel. :P

 

Anyway...I really like your story so far. I'm very excited to see where it goes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would kill to have Violet's job. :shifty:

Hey...thanks for reading it.

You mean they aren't together?:wink3:

 

no, Guy's with me. :sneaky:

 

ok, review time!

 

The Wedding- oh no, i hope Fab's OK! :(

A Story You Don't Wanna Read- great ending! i love that Chris can't take a shower by himself. :lol:... :wink3::sneaky:

In A Little While- ahh, fantastic ending! i loved the comment about Guy being a robot. :P

In My Place- i love this story!!! i can't wait for the next part. :D

If You Only Knew- ewww, Anna. :angry:

The Daily Coldplayer- "Wee! I'm going to be like Spiderman! A photographer by day and a, uh, spiderman by night!" :lol:

You Don't Know How Lovely You Are- i wish my friends would get me a job working with Coldplay. :P

Violent Waters- great chapter!:clap::clap:

Kyra the new Violent Waters chapter is AMAZING. :wacko:

 

Chris is freaking adorable in it, I kinda want to cuddle him. And that hardly ever happens...:shocked2:

Heehee...I always want to cuddle Coldplay. Any member will do. :D

 

 

Thanks for the review...and it's great to have you back on the thread! :heart: