:shame:

 

my computer would crash if I downladed.

 

Your parents are really cocks, you ever tell them that?

 

edit: assuming they arranged that somehow?

 

Reupload'd be nice ^^

oooohh

Thank you people who like :surprised:

lyyyrricccsss

 

There’s someone looking down at me, down at me.

I don’t have a lot of patience, patience please

This is just another day, it’ll end soon

I’m keeping it up ‘till the battle is won.

I will go, I will go, go.

 

 

It’s just another weight on my shoulders

I’ll get through some day

I could hear them breaking through my mind

They found the back door key, the back door key…

 

There are somedays where I just want to go home.

Like the swing set. Look how it sways

Then I’d go back to bed

I’d wait for a while

See the blackboard smile

See the boy in me

See what we couldn’t be

To see what its worth

When theres nothing left to hurt

In single file they march

 

(instrumental solo whatever)

 

It’s just another weight on my shoulders

I’ll get through some day

I could hear them breaking through my mind

They found the back door key, the back door key…

 

One day I will go

One day I will show

One day I’ll go back home

 

One day I will

One day I will

Today I will go back home

 

Today I will

Today I will

Like there’s no tomorrow

 

I will go back home

Go back home

Go back home

This is just another weight on my shoulders

 

It’s just another weight on my shoulders

I’ll get through some day

I could hear them breaking through my mind

They found the back door key, the back door key…

(guitar solo-fade out)

 

 

 

And I'll be uploading to youtube:dozey:

 

Those are really good lyrics for someone your age :shocked2: Great job Eddie :clap:

really solid. good lyrics.

great work eddie!:thumbsup:

The way your lyrics are arranged is very Radiohead-esque.

:surprised:

pweeeese reupload?

 

It sounds good.

 

edit: from what I hear of it. Not from what it actually sounds like. obviously.

I aaaammm. Uploading to youtube right now. And if people really want to download it (:surprised:) then I might upload it somewhere for that

YAY good job

YOUTUBE HATES ME

It wont upload....

Is there another way to stream audio?

THIS BE THE SONG EXCEPT ON MYSPACE AND MY FRIEND (FROM THE BAND) MIXED IT AND ADDED SOME GUITAR AND STUFF!

Download reached limit of 10 :uhoh::(

THIS BE THE SONG EXCEPT ON MYSPACE AND MY FRIEND (FROM THE BAND) MIXED IT AND ADDED SOME GUITAR AND STUFF![/url]

Oh didnt saw this :uhoh: :lol:

Eddie this is really really good :stunned:

 

Seriously, you can sing.

 

and it's a good song :nice:

Wow this is great!!

 

But.. please don't use so much reverb on your voice.. it makes you sounds like a woman. :uhoh:

Guitar can be a bit harder.. and add some piano or a second guitar later in the song, the lyric is filling it.. but the background sounds to empty... or you can just add trafic sounds or weather sounds.. :)

I suggested he add a piano too.

Ye, I'll tell the guy who put the effects and extra guitar

I really like your voice though, its not just a generic voice. It has character.

:wacky: Thank you!

Ohh, I gonna listen to this tomorrow.

 

 

PS. The best song ever written is Back For Good by Take That.

I just listened to it again. Eddie, I really like your voice.

:wacky: thanking thanking

WOW EDDIE PERSON.

 

You are so cool.

:surprised:

Agreed.

:surprised:

 

 

 

 

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