September 7, 201312 yr Hola everyone :P Wrote this song just now. Backstory: Girlfriend broke up with me blah blah..... But we had a party for cross country today and I realized that I still love her. Funny that the girl I like was there too. I'm so confused about lots of crap right now :confused: Flanders St. I hate to say this But I still love you I know I shouldn't anymore And I really don't want to But every time I see you Every time I see those eyes It hurts me And i feel like I'm on the top of the world I don't even understand why it's over Why you ended it Why you ended it Maybe it had to happen for the good of both of us But it wasn't good for me Now whenever something goes wrong I shut down And I break down I hate you But I love you Why? Why? I don't even understand why it's over Why you ended it Why you ended it Maybe it had to happen for the good of both of us But it wasn't good for me Why does life have to be so confusing Why does love have to be so hard Why does life have to be so confusing Why does love?------- I don't even understand why it's over Why you ended it Why you ended it Maybe it had to happen for the good of both of us But I wasn't It wasn't It wasn't good for me Chords: Verse: G Em C D Chorus: C G G/F# Bridge: Am G B7 (Em) But enough about my issues how are you all? :)
September 7, 201312 yr Hello Tyler, Anthony, James (and Keaton if you're still on). I'm Dylan for those of you who don't know.
September 7, 201312 yr It really is nice. Hope you figure out yer love stuff, James. I'm crap with that stuff, what with me being forever alone and all.
September 7, 201312 yr Hello Dylan! :nice: James, it's really strong and straightforward. It looks like it could have potential and I like it!
September 7, 201312 yr It really is nice. Hope you figure out yer love stuff, James. I'm crap with that stuff, what with me being forever alone and all. Join the club!
September 7, 201312 yr I'm pretty bad with lyrics. Poetry is more my thing, lyrics seem too confined.
September 7, 201312 yr I'm pretty bad with lyrics. Poetry is more my thing, lyrics seem too confined. I can deal with poetry that rhymes. If it doesn't I'm done :LOL:
September 7, 201312 yr Here's my song for those interested in critiquing it. "A New Day" A moderately slow tempo... I'll get back to you on the BPM, but yeah... This is the riff of the song. It's usually played without a capo. E|--------------------------------------------------- B|--------3------------3------------3-------------3-- G|-----3------------3------------3-------------3----- D|--3-------------------------3---------------------- A|---------------3-----------------------0----------- E|------------------------------------------3-------- You can play the same riff with a capo on the first fret, but the open A string is excluded. E|--------------------------------------------------- B|--------2------------2------------2-------------2-- G|-----2------------2------------2-------------2----- D|--2-------------------------2---------------------- A|---------------2----------------------------------- E|------------------------------------------2-------- Capo 1 This is the chord progression throughout the entire song: A E A Fm A E A Fm The chords presented in the lyrics are an example of how the chord progression works. A E I lost a good friend. A Fm Someone I thought I'd never lose. A E Thought I was a good friend. A Fm Emotionally abused. A E We start a new day. A Fm Yet we see the same old sun. A E On my mind was yesterday. A Fm Now we sing a new song. Let's start the new day. (x4) Who are we now? Just strangers to each other. What to do now? We move on to another. Let's start the new day. Let's see the same old sun. Remember yesterday and sing a brand new song. Let's start the new day. (x4)
September 7, 201312 yr I tried to mess around with symbolism, and it turned out ok, I guess. Storm There's a different kind of light in the storm, in the night a midnight shell cracked, a bell rings as white splits the sky in the storm in the night
September 7, 201312 yr Ill post two of my songs "Now You Know What a Firework can Do" She runs through the urban jungle At night in the heat I ask what can I do? she says it's up to you I ask the fortune teller what is my fate? she won't reveal not even something fake I go back to my firework it's then we go to the boardwalk where she plays the mystery machines where we talk, sometimes for hours We go, barefoot, back to the cadillac it's already midnight we need to walk tall and stay off those streets I ask the fortune teller what is my fate? she won't reveal not even something fake we swing out heads to dawn I take her back home and she explains it's jersey where we stay but I want to take the train away I know she can't go Away and leave me at bay she's all dressed to withdraw what she's considers mistakes but she doesn't know it's the mistakes that I take I ask the fortune teller what is my fate? she won't reveal not even something fake Now she's gone I don't know the right action I guess this is it all that's left of me is a fraction A Promise can be Inconspicuous (Break Away) Come together only when I need repair it's so naive to be anchored by a stare Just help me get down New York conveys a hail I can't seem to break away when I look behind the veil Sandy you can't take away a promise you won't be able to break away without you it can't resemble to a future where you stay but how did we get here? why do I question your stare Those promises represent Something beyond repair If your heart gives to a break and your hands seem to shake just think of a promise those that form before the hurt Sandy you can't take away a promise you won't be able to break away without you it can't resemble to a future where you stay Sandy if I only knew the answer to the questions I ask myself I will be able to respond when you call for my help They seem inconspicuous but those promises can't be with us I don't want to break away but those promises can't be with us anyway both of these are first versions and will be tinkered with. They pretty long. I like story lyrics
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