Very nice Anthony :nice:

I like the poem Dylan :)

It's really good, Dylan! You need to have more confidence in your poetry. Trust me, you'll go farther than you'd imagine, like me! :lol: I lacked confidence with sharing my work at first, but I've managed to build up the courage to share my work without feeling insecure.

Thanks guys! :awesome:

Everyone in this thread is better than me at writing :disappointed::P

 

This is a poem we analyzed in English:

 

Written in pencil in the sealed railway car

 

Here in this carload

I am Eve

With Abel my son

If you see my other son

Cain son of man

Tell him that I

 

Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D

I favor in story lyrics! Ever listened to Beck's "Satan Gave Me a Taco"? :lol:

I favor in story lyrics! Ever listened to Beck's "Satan Gave Me a Taco"? :lol:

 

Lol no but that song name is epic!!

 

I channel my inner Springsteen when I write. I'd kill to write like The Boss

Everyone in this thread is better than me at writing :disappointed::P

 

This is a poem we analyzed in English:

 

Written in pencil in the sealed railway car

 

Here in this carload

I am Eve

With Abel my son

If you see my other son

Cain son of man

Tell him that I

 

Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D

 

This is why I hate poetry :D

 

This is a poem we analyzed in English:

 

Written in pencil in the sealed railway car

 

Here in this carload

I am Eve

With Abel my son

If you see my other son

Cain son of man

Tell him that I

 

Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D

 

...trying... It's too deep for me, I can't see it! :inquisitive:

I'm terrible at looking for deeper meanings. :(

You want me to explain it? It's really hard to explain it in writing

Aww, I have to go. :(

 

G'night! :escaping:

Lol no but that song name is epic!!

 

I channel my inner Springsteen when I write. I'd kill to write like The Boss

 

Well, here's the song if you're interested. :P

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctTQeTPILI8]Beck - Satan Gave Me A Taco - YouTube[/ame]

And goodnight Dylan! :nice:

Goodnight Dylan! :escaping:

You want me to explain it? It's really hard to explain it in writing

 

Yes!

 

Night Dylan, nice meeting you! :)

Well, here's the song if you're interested. :P

 

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctTQeTPILI8]Beck - Satan Gave Me A Taco - YouTube[/ame]

 

I will listen when I get home :)

I will listen when I get home :)

 

Okay. :nice:

 

It's quite a humorous song, so yeah... I've been meaning to want to learn it, too! :P

One of my friends loves Beck :P

Wait, I don't have to! My sheets haven't finished washing yet! :lol:

Okay let's see

 

Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off.

 

Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out...

Okay let's see

 

Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off.

 

Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out...

 

...woah

 

Yay Dylan :D

...woah indeed :nod:

 

Well I should go to sleep. Got a meet tommorow. Goodnight! :escaping3:

Okay let's see

 

Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off.

 

Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out...

 

WOAH EPIPHANY MOMENT

 

i love when that happens

Night James! :P

 

and yes, I love Beck's music too!