September 7, 201312 yr It's really good, Dylan! You need to have more confidence in your poetry. Trust me, you'll go farther than you'd imagine, like me! :lol: I lacked confidence with sharing my work at first, but I've managed to build up the courage to share my work without feeling insecure.
September 7, 201312 yr Everyone in this thread is better than me at writing :disappointed::P This is a poem we analyzed in English: Written in pencil in the sealed railway car Here in this carload I am Eve With Abel my son If you see my other son Cain son of man Tell him that I Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D
September 7, 201312 yr I favor in story lyrics! Ever listened to Beck's "Satan Gave Me a Taco"? :lol:
September 7, 201312 yr I favor in story lyrics! Ever listened to Beck's "Satan Gave Me a Taco"? :lol: Lol no but that song name is epic!! I channel my inner Springsteen when I write. I'd kill to write like The Boss
September 7, 201312 yr Everyone in this thread is better than me at writing :disappointed::P This is a poem we analyzed in English: Written in pencil in the sealed railway car Here in this carload I am Eve With Abel my son If you see my other son Cain son of man Tell him that I Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D This is why I hate poetry :D
September 7, 201312 yr This is a poem we analyzed in English: Written in pencil in the sealed railway car Here in this carload I am Eve With Abel my son If you see my other son Cain son of man Tell him that I Lets see if any of you guys can figure that out! :D ...trying... It's too deep for me, I can't see it! :inquisitive:
September 7, 201312 yr Lol no but that song name is epic!! I channel my inner Springsteen when I write. I'd kill to write like The Boss Well, here's the song if you're interested. :P [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctTQeTPILI8]Beck - Satan Gave Me A Taco - YouTube[/ame]
September 7, 201312 yr You want me to explain it? It's really hard to explain it in writing Yes! Night Dylan, nice meeting you! :)
September 7, 201312 yr Well, here's the song if you're interested. :P [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctTQeTPILI8]Beck - Satan Gave Me A Taco - YouTube[/ame] I will listen when I get home :)
September 7, 201312 yr I will listen when I get home :) Okay. :nice: It's quite a humorous song, so yeah... I've been meaning to want to learn it, too! :P
September 7, 201312 yr Okay let's see Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off. Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out...
September 7, 201312 yr Okay let's see Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off. Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out... ...woah Yay Dylan :D
September 7, 201312 yr ...woah indeed :nod: Well I should go to sleep. Got a meet tommorow. Goodnight! :escaping3:
September 7, 201312 yr Okay let's see Well it's about the holocaust. Eve and Abel are separated from Cain and I'm assuming Adam, because the women and the children were not sent to work but they we're sent off to be killed right away. This also explains why he note is cut off. Also there's some relation to that Cain in the bible becomes the ancestor of everyone and he killed his brother so that has something to do with he holocaust but I can't figure it out... WOAH EPIPHANY MOMENT i love when that happens
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