Thought I'd share a song I'm working on, it's nowhere near finished yet, but here's a rough recording I did.

 

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/user1624061/rough-song]Rough Song by Joel Stephenson on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free[/ame]

I think that people are better in their original songs. You're one of the examples. When you create your song you sing the way you want and choose their range of notes. It's still far from perfect, cause I could still hear that some notes weren't sang correct. You still have to work on your vocal cause some parts didn't sound good.

I honestly didn't like the very low part cause you were mumbling, and also that try-to-be falsetto part. You can't do that yet so firstly try to widen your range and they sing it.

Cheers for the crit, it's not meant to be anywhere near perfect yet, just a very rough recording I did so show some friends mainly, we've been working on it today in band practice and it's sounding ALLOT better. Doesn't help that I had to try and keep the volume down recording this as everybody was in bed, it was one of those moment when you're writing and something just clicks, and you just have to record it :D