royal Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/these-are-mine-songs/dream-song-w-vox/s-RwK2X I think the vocals are a bit shitty, but...yeah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Champion Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Fucking good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lifeincoldplaycolor Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 its nice...i liked the idee just try to make those noises more soft :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
royal Posted October 26, 2011 Author Share Posted October 26, 2011 Thanks Champion, and lifeincolor, i don't know what you mean by make the noises soft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strikie Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 I doubt this is the best you can do, it sounds very promising! the 2nd half is just, epic, really sounds great there's room for improvement on the singing bits, but That could imagine that being on the radio, or in my cd player! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lobabe Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 love it. great song. things i would change production-wise drums are mixed a bit too low vocals are awfully weighty (maybe cut all frequencies out below 100 hz) would help thin them a bit. i will say this..i hate soundcloud. i'm bandcamp all the way...i think soundcloud adds a layer of high frequency. maybe i'm crazy for thinking that. but, i also hate the way it shows the music waveform. have some surprise with the loud and soft parts...jeez i don't like how there's not the ability to dress up the page with the band's art. oh, and i hate the color scheme. orange and baby blue? really!? eww haha, anyway i was just gonna say before my tangent...i didn't notice any piercing high frequencies in your mix. so, yeah...that was nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
approximately Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 I like it, but I'd also say that you could improve the singing and your production techniques. I'd also say that another drum sound could improve the "power" of the song, the one you're using sounds a bit "loose". @Lobabe: Hey! Don't say anything against orange and blue, these are the colours of my new website... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
royal Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 Thanks for all the commentary, I really do appreciate it. I just use soundcloud to put up demos and works in progress, but I will establish a bandcamp once I have finished songs. Things to improve: • Re-record vocals • Bring drums forward (perhaps more compression on the kick) Other than that, how is the song...as a song? Haha, is it a good song? Does it remind you of any other bands? I don't wish to cut too close to other artists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
samerater Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I like it, it reminds me of Arcade Fire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fooby Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Absolutely love the music, I don't like the vocal effects but seriously good track, love the build up throughout the song to when it all kicks in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splintercell37 Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Redo the vocals and you're good to go. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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