silverion

Hmmmmmmm Hooooooommmmmmmmmmm What is that creature. It is not in any of the old lists...

Manic Street Preachers

Wow. I just listened to Led Zepplin. Kashmir 2 Great songs

Hmm. Not being funny in anyway. I tried to listen to song number 4 and song number one. All this material is unpolished and to be quite honest you need to use better equipment and actually use a proper recording studio. The vocals always seem to be very faint. And the breackdowns in song number 4 could do with being more innovative and more original. Keep to the material and work on it. If you guys are serious about becoming a band then this is what you will do. This seems to me to be a rough draft. I am sure you could make your songs 1000 times better if you use the right equipment. One last thing. It is always a good idea to start a song with a good rythem. Save the wierd stuff for later into the song. Unless it is later into your bands carrear and people already know you. You got a rockish sound so look to bands that come before you to see how they did it. Most of them did not become known the way you are becoming known.

10,000 Maniacs

I knew that. Yesterday Radiohead are probably one of the greatest bands of all time.

As a REAL LYRICIST i can quite honestly tell you that you just said the biggest pile of crock that i have ever heard. All of the best songs rhyme. All the best songs have catchy one-liners. All the best songs look good because the lyrics flow together. You go on about Kanye West and his Ability/Inability to flow. Well it is an Inability because none of his lyrics actually rhyme in any way shape or form. And it is the same with most rap artists. The beat comes with the music and they are always out of sync with the beat. Even if it is only slightly. And that is because their lyrics are not supposed to rhyme or look good. They are trying to tell a story. Where on the other hand a lot of the lyrics in other genres rhyme. Rnb, Rock, Jazz, Blues, Country, Folk etcetc. On the majority of cases the lyrics in songs from those genres rhyme. Oh and yes. All the best songs have rhyme in consistent places i think you will find. Do the research. Work it out.

Well i do intend to do this sort of thing for a living oneday. Become a singer-songwriter that is. Just takes practice :lol:

Hmmmmm Hoooommmmmmmmm In old Entish this would take far to long for you hasty folk to bear with. But now i have to use Westerness in todays hasty world But it is ok. Tell you something about myself that you dont know. Hmmmm Hoooommmm. Well i miss the entwives dearly.

heyyy Noni! So good to see you again! i came back cos i really missed the good old days when we used to take over the travis thread. haha How are you doing girl?? So you be the guy everyones talking about. Hello

Got a new song. What you think? Beware the sea Passing away amongst the trees Skin tickled by the leaves This my last journey Going over the sea, to be free Away from sorrow and pain Away from sweet summer rain No longer see the rolling plain No longer will i feel the same In the distance i here it call As it hits the sundering shore Told by the wisest of the fair Beware the sea, Dont stray there But i strayed, i became caught No longer to think other thought Goodby dear friend i know so well Goodby Gonders white tower bell So i pass to a fair land Of many great and beautiful things My destiny is close to hand When i find my long lost kin.

Mine was...DSOTM :)

If you wanna see a genious singer songwriter with a guitar. You can only really look to Dylan. All others are but shadows to him

Well thats an exact replica of my very own acoustic guitar

Nah. Mines this

Anyone ever told you how your breath stinks so?

Mine I want that fucking car

I got an idea. How about using that poetry you written

3/10 Sorry but the color hurts me eyes

Wtf is this for? Bonabon you dumbat

Famished

Celtic Bike or Car

Who is this guy...? And why has he not spoke yet...?

Hahaha. Im my favorite http://home.mn.rr.com/couplandesque/quizzes/radiohead.html