October 20, 200619 yr Elsje - I like it a lot. It's short but sweet and it calms me as it says that for everything bad that happens, there's a good thing that follows. And, it has reminded on one of my poems that i posted on my space... Ambivalent From laughter to weep From light to shadow From hope to despair From a smile to a tear From day to night I keep thinking of him I liked your comment and your poem, I absolutely adore it, seriously..
October 20, 200619 yr A new one, just over although I started it on 26th of august... It's called Leaving I can't spend much time To be someone I wanted to find Life's too short to be a fake And it's too short to stay in the dark. Living my life is one of my plans Guided both by love and life' hands The sun is warming me up, I hear The sound of my deepest whispers. My life isn't here anymore I didn't want this first, Rowing my boat off the shore Will make me give all my guts. Still running after my future I want to make it pure, Throw all my worries away And carry on my way, I say: "These duties I'm going to leave This new life I'm going to live I was looking for it, my new lane I'll land off in this plane..." If today I'm still here, I didn't have the chance to leave. I want to be away, see something new Tired to wait for it, will it happen soon? I'll give up all, to live something else I'll throw it all not to be myself I wait for letting my past behind me Thinking about this, I just say: "These duties I'm going to leave This new life I'm going to live I was looking for it, my new lane I'll land off in this plane..." Leaving, just leaving this boring life Stopping all those knives Which are coming to stab me. I'm yearning for dreams I want to escape to some places Where I could be at peace....
October 20, 200619 yr ^I like it....but that's not strange =) Owh Miro.. you don't even liked mine? Oh,sorry...I didn't quite see it....you weren't online to point me at it... Anyhow-I like it. Simple and powerful =)
October 20, 200619 yr A new one, just over although I started it on 26th of august... It's called Leaving Just great. Very nice Mike.
October 20, 200619 yr Let's open the door of my mind The pain, memories and thoughts Bring me back to that time again Take me back to 'then' I look around me The aching place My light becomes one with my shadow My shadow becomes a face It touched me Said I'm warm Thoughts again, I'm cold on the inside He talks.. 'Do you want to live in the past or live for the future,' he proposed. 'I want to live for the future'... The door is closed. =) (I don't know how i should call it.. but i like it, i made it myself!)
October 21, 200619 yr Elsje, I love it. I specially like these two verses: "My light becomes one with my shadow my shadow becomes my face" The end of the poem, in a form of short dialog, reminds me a bit on Franz Kafkas short novel (Vor dem Gesetz - on german). And the name of the poem...Hm...Maybe something like "Hidden Face", or "Cold Shadow of My Mind". Very nice, Elsje. ;)
October 21, 200619 yr Another poem, just over... Called You... Those three words I'd like to hear Write them with my blood, Let them shinning under this gold, This quiet and peaceful morning sun. Hm...Sometimes when I see something like that, I just cant find words to describe the pictures in my head. :thinking: Maybe I am crazy, or something. :sneaky: The morning sun is always quite, especially in autumn. Yes, autumnal poem (at least as I see it).
October 21, 200619 yr Elsje, I love it. I specially like these two verses: "My light becomes one with my shadow my shadow becomes my face" The end of the poem, in a form of short dialog, reminds me a bit on Franz Kafkas short novel (Vor dem Gesetz - on german). And the name of the poem...Hm...Maybe something like "Hidden Face", or "Cold Shadow of My Mind". Very nice, Elsje. ;) I love your comment! Thanks a lot!! hmm.. hidden face would be cool.. :)
October 23, 200619 yr Nice ones, everyone!!! A new one, called Feelings Feelings, These things are confusing Me, in my head they're running, I can't control anything. Sometimes, they start a war They hold me in the dark They try to eat me like does a shark They don't want me to be back in the light. Like a strong river I don't control the streams My feelings carry on all what they're founding, I'd like to calm them down, I'm like a twig, Across the sea, trying to stop those strong tides. The space they take in my heart Their strengh put me in the light And they lift me for a flight To travel until the coming night. Each beating is more intense I carry on crossing the fence The fence of his rush I always feel, Such a fire, running through my body. Wild and unforseen, I like those feelings...
October 24, 200619 yr Feelings Feelings, These things are confusing Me, in my head they're running, I can't control anything. Sometimes, they start a war They hold me in the dark They try to eat me like does a shark They don't want me to be back in the light. Like a strong river I don't control the streams My feelings carry on all what they're founding, I'd like to calm them down, I'm like a twig, Across the sea, trying to stop those strong tides. The space they take in my heart Their strengh put me in the light And they lift me for a flight To travel until the coming night. Each beating is more intense I carry on crossing the fence The fence of his rush I always feel, Such a fire, running through my body. Wild and unforseen, I like those feelings... I like it very very much :)
October 25, 200619 yr I give you poetry at its best... PIZZA ROYAL Pizza oh Pizza, my sweet Pizza, how you are so soft and crunchy, every time i meet i feel so munchy, at night i dream of you sliding down my troat, and after you dessert, little goat, why oh why does not rain you every day, so i can throw umbrella away, you are by far the invention of century, thats why i write for you this poetry, i wish planet was one giant Pizza, so i eat till end of the world! :rolleyes:
October 25, 200619 yr I give you poetry at its best... PIZZA ROYAL Pizza oh Pizza, my sweet Pizza, how you are so soft and crunchy, every time i meet i feel so munchy, at night i dream of you sliding down my troat, and after you dessert, little goat, why oh why does not rain you every day, so i can throw umbrella away, you are by far the invention of century, thats why i write for you this poetry, i wish planet was one giant Pizza, so i eat till end of the world! :rolleyes: Oh Will, you were kidding me when you told me you weren't able to write sth good!! anyway, thx ppl. Here's a new one Called Music When you see all's going wrong You believe you won't be strong enough You know all's messing, Nothing's right and it's failing. You heart carries so much pains Because you wonder what's going to happen. And then you feel relaxed It's like you're going to bed. Now you know you're not the same anymore, You're forgetting all what you're sick of. You wonder what's travelling in you It's music, helping you to get through. You're tired of running and waiting for it But you know you really need it. You wonder if you're going to split Or when you gonna meet it. Worries don't make you sweet Then you see what's happening. Suddenly you feel like all is gone Someone's singing for you, you're not alone. It swipes all your duties away It makes you dream, it wants you to get What drives you to smile, to be in this state, Music lights you on a new way. Music tightens your little heart It's like entering a world apart You let go this intense shiver And you feel so much better.
October 26, 200619 yr Author innuendo At the speed of light you arrive Like a wind to cool the inner mechanisms Water forms an inner course through To bring life that wasn't alive before Surely, gold is great, unsatisfactory But as a human being I perform, When death is alive like never before "Cuz there's no one like you in the universe" _______________________________________ Blueberry Fairies Berries fall upon us like fairies Yesterday we had dreams about drugs Crack takes us back to color the black I snack on crack to have more fairy attacks Slumped over loiterers emphasize their butt Winging through the parking lot of pizza hut And then fly to the sky to get really high Too, just like us they must discuss Dreams about homosapien human things The ugly fat things without any wings Frying fishes to make pretty dishes They wish it was delicious Muse-fairy drugs will make us fall in love
October 26, 200619 yr great poems people! this is a song i wrote some years ago. it's called YOU: everyday I see the sun everyday I feel the wind blow everyday I hear these people talk but where are you? every night I see the stars every night I see the moon every night I hear silence but where are you? I got my friends but I feel alone all is good but I feel I'm on the bottom there's something missing and I'm not sure if it's true I believe it's you Very nice!! I like it!! Sth I can feel everyday!! A new one... written yesterday. Called Maze On this sunny sixth of May, My eyes caught the last glows of the day. This day, my mind turned into Something I didn't expect, something new. My past I tried to escape So, I started to enter a maze. I dived into this dark hall, Walking in the shadows, my hands on the walls, My life I tried to carry on living, I waited for winter to become spring I was a dead, willing to be alive. Doubts and fears kept slightly my mind, I didn't want to slip in this river, I thought it would have caught me forever, But I didn't sink there, I've been saved. I've been kept alive, back in another place. All's been emphasized, all's stronger I lost you, it's sad, but I'm someone better. Day by day, step by step, I started over new, I just began to shape myself, that's what I wanted to.
October 28, 200619 yr Very nice!! I like it!! Sth I can feel everyday!! A new one... written yesterday. Called Maze On this sunny sixth of May, My eyes caught the last glows of the day. This day, my mind turned into Something I didn't expect, something new. My past I tried to escape So, I started to enter a maze. I dived into this dark hall, Walking in the shadows, my hands on the walls, My life I tried to carry on living, I waited for winter to become spring I was a dead, willing to be alive. Doubts and fears kept slightly my mind, I didn't want to slip in this river, I thought it would have caught me forever, But I didn't sink there, I've been saved. I've been kept alive, back in another place. All's been emphasized, all's stronger I lost you, it's sad, but I'm someone better. Day by day, step by step, I started over new, I just began to shape myself, that's what I wanted to. :happy:
October 28, 200619 yr MY SHATTERED ILLUSIONS I've been dreaming for a long, Long time... And when will it end, When will I stop? I have a dream about a house. The house is purple. The house is full of all those nice things I don't need, The house is full of the feelings I craved for. The house is...no more. I have a dream about a job. The job is interesting, The job is just what I need, The job brings me joy and happiness. The job is...no more. I have a dream about security. My purple house, I feel safe. My joyful job, I feel safe. You, I feel safe. I have a dream about you. You are the One, You are my illusion, You are mine. You are...no more. I had a dream about a house, My house is grey. I had a dream about a job, My job is hateful. I had a dream about security, My feelings are eternal. I had a dream about you, About me and you. I had my dreams, My dreams and my illusions. I'd been dreaming for... Forever. 'Till my dreams ended and Unerring paths were exposed, It was all about me and you. About me and you. You were my saviour. I had it all. It was about me. About me and you. About my dreams. Everything else died away When we met. Everything else died away At that cursed moment. I had it all just for a second. It's all about me. Me and you. Me and my shattered illusions.
October 30, 200619 yr Inspired by one of Nicko's sentences: "Darkness goes away You feel the brightness in your soul." Thx Nicko!! So, this is a new one, called Winter. All around and inside, winter invades me. A slight wind starts to blow, and I see A poor leaf, falling down and it flies To my hands, this tree released its last cries. White clouds cover the sun, burst into the sky Some icy pearls come from the furthest space Days are going shorter, light fades out everyday Each year, all's turning the same way. All's getting dark so quickly, all's getting so strange During months, night's becoming my usual life The cold moon pushes me over the edge Its light strikes my skin like knives. Then all goes longer, daylight lasts The sun rises when I get up, it warms my heart Darkness and ice are swept away, Like leaves are lift up by the wind, everyday. Coldness has been torn, opening a new door in my mind I can feel the sun, it rises up and it shines It's all I'm applying for, all I'm yearning for, This is life, happiness I don't want to miss anymore.
October 31, 200619 yr Author some words about red stuff the red leaf tree is nowhere to be seen I can diguise myself with yellow leaves brown and green these insects interests they see what we don't it grew outside of the forest successfully this red leaf tree she had too many friends in his life in the projects too many enemies it's suspiciously somber today ___________________________________ a joke that squints its eyes and nods its head the brick that is given to us like NC State leftovers ___________________________________ smoking on inhale a beer stung him in the neck reciprically yesterday, friends of Marvin sting him in the buttocks the basis of all long lasting relationshipos that never end, or at least after a long time thus, the sun splattered his eyes sunshine he turned his head to a 45 degree angle pulled his arm around like a high 5 and coughed onto the inside of the elbow of grumpy, the frowning clown and his eye twitched sexy-like yellow-tinted love HA HA HA haunting sunshine ___________________________________ "burp" whispers blown from wet torrents wish you well by a wishing river that likes to run over us ___________________________________ salesman blowing bombs out of your bloody tongue the same one that licked me you totally ignored the other girl shut up at this particular moment or I shut my eye at you and kick my foot at the table I'm sitting in with a 100 pound balloon that bounces like all the checks girls give you ___________________________________ stick stick the pencil in your eye then wait until bravery isn't the trait that is needed, no longer see out of the other eye wish that the earth is black consistently it's every color besides then when both eyes are gone wink like there is someone watching and make your own universe pray tell, it is greater than great
October 31, 200619 yr Coldness has been torn' date=' opening a new door in my mind[/i'] I can feel the sun, it rises up and it shines It's all I'm applying for, all I'm yearning for, This is life, happiness I don't want to miss anymore. Yummy :)
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