IMPLEMENTATION

 

My dream came true

And I'm crying.

My dream I was hiding

Only in fear of its dissolvement,

It came true.

And I'm crying.

 

Everything had calmly and slowly

Then again abruptly and quickly,

Come to its place.

I've lost my walls,

My shame's become an addle intruder

In the purigitory of elite hopes.

Everything came true.

I'm crying.

 

Maybe I shoud've continued hoping,

And maybe it would've been better if my dreams hadn't disappear

As the sorrow I scorned

As the sorrow from which I was running

Maybe the sorrow...

Maybe a new dream has formed right here.

 

I am happy.

And I am crying for the Sorrow.

^I love it! a great poem, deep and beautiful, really! *coming tears*

Miro.. that's so... wow..! =)

My last one

It's called Me For You

 

A couple of nights ago,

You were the one I saw.

The stream of my thoughts

Are reaching your lost boat.

Stealing your little heart,

I try to fix most of the slivers

Making you feel less shattered,

Let me be your light.

 

Do you want me to be

The love and the light you need?

My eyes would be your sea,

And your harbour would be my body.

 

My life is what I want to give,

I wear my heart on my sleeve,

And I still think, I want to live,

This love, more than anything,

You know it, I really believe,

In this strong feeling.

My heart's with you,

My love's only for you.

 

Do you want me to be

The love and the light you need?

My eyes would be your sea,

And your harbour would be my body.

 

You for me, me for you

And the sky became blue

Again, the birds flew,

Forgetting all what was new,

I love you, that's all I knew.

Mike, i couldn't avoid to log on in to read your poem!!

 

beautiful!:blush:

^Thx a lot Iris!!:kiss: :kiss:

My last one, a Christmas Present... Sent to my lover!

It's called Me For You

 

A couple of nights ago,

You were the one I saw.

The stream of my thoughts

Are reaching your lost boat.

Stealing your little heart,

I try to fix most of the slivers

Making you feel less shattered,

Let me be your light.

 

Do you want me to be

The love and the light you need?

My eyes would be your sea,

And your harbour would be my body.

 

My life is what I want to give,

I wear my heart on my sleeve,

And I still think, I want to live,

This love, more than anything,

You know it, I really believe,

In this strong feeling.

My heart's with you,

My love's only for you.

 

Do you want me to be

The love and the light you need?

My eyes would be your sea,

And your harbour would be my body.

 

You for me, me for you

And the sky became blue

Again, the birds flew,

Forgetting all what was new,

I love you, that's all I knew.

 

:)

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My last one, written today...

It's about this messy Christmas...

(sorry for depressing anyone... )

 

It's called Revenge

 

The unforgiven lies are making my life,

The hidden words I'm fighting against,

Those words are swords, causing me pains

I want to kill them with a rifle.

And again, they cracked that scar,

That deep scar in my wounded heart.

 

Why pretending all's ok, all's right

When you see those well-known lights

Disappearing, fading away like,

The day, taken over by the night?

 

My revenge will be the heavy silence

Of each of my screaming thoughts

I won't let them any chance,

I'm going to make their boats

Sinking like stones in the sea,

No matter where I'll be.

 

I'll dig the furrows of my anger,

Spreading them anywhere,

Taking anyone in the lethal tides

They could never reach the sides,

Lost in the ocean of my angry feeling

They won't even hear the bell ringing.

 

Why pretending all's ok, all's right

When you see those well-known lights

Disappearing, fading away like,

The day, taken over by the night?

 

I hear the breath of the anger,

Telling me nothing will be better,

Maybe it's weird, maybe it'll change

But this is my revenge.

^ Again...you've outdone yourself =)

:stunned:

 

That's amazing/brilliant!!!!!

 

Good job Mike!!!

@ mick: bravo:)....as usual.....Sometimes xmas puts out the reality of your life and of your REAL relations with people and your friends.......if you're alone, or not!

Well, I guess it's time for me to post a poem then.

 

The past is put on hold

Press to play

I guess you can tell me

All the things that I didn't know today

I'm quite insecure of what you told before

Can't find out if I wanna hear things anymore

^ Confusing & weird & nice

Very nice Elsje!

 

^^^ thx for your comments guys/girls!

 

A new one... I started it yesterday evening, and I just finished it...

 

 

It's called Silent Cries

 

Those words you said to me,

Still echoe in my head, so sweetly.

No one told me this before you

No one told me "I love you".

You did, and my loneliness is breaking,

You did, and my heart is flying.

 

Each time you leave my heart cries quietly,

Breaking like crystal, sinking in the sea,

Feeling like my world's collapsing, while,

Inside, I'm releasing my silent cries.

 

Fortunately, everyday, you come back,

Like the sun chase away the dark.

I feel like I'm finding all the slivers

I was losing while you weren't here.

My heart's alive, beating for you,

For you, I'd sing my love out.

 

Each time you leave my heart cries quietly,

Breaking like crystal, sinking in the sea,

Feeling like my world's collapsing, while,

Inside, I'm releasing my silent cries.

 

Walking on the path of our lives,

Holding hands, love'll make us alive

No matter the distance,

No matter how the world will be

You are my lovely chance,

I want to be with you, honey.

^ Oh...nice one =)

 

Here's mine.

 

I SMILE

You do not know

How I feel.

every time I see my

Reflection in the mirror

is

every time I see

Someone else.

 

Someone stranger

Someone older

Someone weirder

 

Someone. New

Someone. Else

 

You do not know

The power of hatred I carry

The power of void I live with

so do not say

I will change.

People do not change.

I do not change.

You simply do not know me enough.

 

I think

I never was in Love

But I know

My Love is for you.

 

I smile

every time I recall the memory of your eyes

I smile

when I see your lips

But You do not know how I feel.

 

Because I will sacrifice for You.

^beautiful, I really love it!

Course you do

:smug:

:P

I've found yesterday a beautiful poem...it's not mine, but it's as good :D

It reminded me of someone very special :)

Njoy!

 

 

Intertwined

 

call me

with your name

 

and turn around

with my move

 

let me

watch you

 

with your eyes

 

and don't forget

that you hug

 

with my arms

i really liked the one you wrote "Byron369"

maybe you'll win something as good as an oscar oneday :D

Thank you :blush:

 

 

(I hope I will =)

oh my god, I love it! really beautiful!!!

^ I knew you would :P

Inspired by sad events, inspired by Snow Patrol.

 

Distrust

 

I thought that you were a good friend I got

Yesterday you showed me that you're obviously not

Tears came out and they burned my face

You could have at least try to trust me or embrace

 

You didn't know but you stepped on my little heart

I should have known that this would happen

From the start

Can you remember how we where?

Do you see me or just a screen with blur?

 

All these questions make my head ache

I wonder why you are doing this to me

Did I make a mistake?

^ You didn't make mistake by writting this.

 

It's amazing! ;)

Wow!!!

 

Mike, Miro and Elsje you guys are revealing yourselves as trully poets!Very, very good!Loved them!Good job! :thumbsup:

 

And Elsje, hope you get well soon, lovely lady! :kiss: