i didn't know you write poems mrcool :surprised:

a whisper, some people here understands german... i don't but....

 

you can't try to tranlate it? i know it use to lose the rhym or the sense but.. :/

i didn't know you write poems mrcool :surprised:

 

kl

well was hard to told it to my friends too... seems not all people like poetry so i didn't know... but one day they read some poems i had on my notebook accidentally and they liked it :)

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yes i noticied that. :/

lol oh well....

 

ive enjoyed reading all yalls poems! :)

well anyways you always can post them here :)

of course!

Ok I post my friendship poem now,because I got time.I translate it into english so it doesn't sound that good but the sense is the same!

 

The day when I wanted to say I like you

 

I'm sitting look out of the window

What do I see?Do I see ghosts?

there is somebody coming straight to me

this someone this is you

your steps are getting faster and faster

in my area it's getting brighter

Shall I tell you something?I like you very much

without you my world would be very empty

now you are here I'm very happy

we are standing there without saying a word

we understand each other without saying a word

between us there is no door

you take my hand and say:Come with me!

you know I follow you step by step

you say:come on I'll show you the world!

and immediately we are standing in a flowerfield

there are flowers small and big

you pick them and lay them on me knees

a thistle is there too

not only one there are two!

But this thistle doesn't matter to us

we put them away very fast

now we continue our journey

and we go to another place.

dark and black is this place

there should be hidden a treasure

but we must find this treasure first

we have to get over our worries

you disengage now my hand

and disappear behind a wall

you are away I am alone

which way is the right to go?

I go on and am confused

alone this way is very difficult.

Now I scream:I need you so!

and I'm standing in front of a hole.

I'm wondering:What should I do?

First I havbe to relax

I close my eyes and think a bit

after a while i am awake again.

I'm looking up what do I see?

I'm standing up and I'm surprised.

Where the hole was is the way clear again.

I'm saying to myself:Oh that's great.

So I can can go on now.

I'm going and going without an end

The best would be if I would find you!

I'm thinking about you and begin to cry

I wish the sun would shine again

I'm coming to a very big place

what do I see it is the treasure!

I'm running in your arms

And I feel very warm

The sun is shining it's getting bright

we begin to run very very fast

we continue our journey through the world

and come again to the flowersfield!

the flowers are still standing

but the thistles are hidden in a hole.

The flower are more now

we look at each other and are very happy.

But I see something I don't lioke to see it

there is standing a black man in the distance

he has got a basket in his hands

and the thistles are appearing over the edge

he bends down and begins to burrow

I know he wants to have the thistles

I want to flee very far away

but you say:Don't be shocked!

he comes fast and sometimes slow

and there is nobody where he wasn't.

He will reach us one day to

And then it's our thistles turn.

But this can be today or tomorrow

Please,please don't worry.

 

I'm looking up at the sky...

...and suddenly I get awake

in front of me there is lying a pen and a sheet

and I'm seeing my handwriting

I wrote a poem

How fast was time passing by?

And suddenly a voice calls my name

I'm standing up and stretch

there is somebody coming straight to me

and the somebody this is you!

I know this is a beautiful day

when I wanted to say that I like you

But every day is suddenly over

I'm sitting here and I'm very quiet

 

I'm thinking about you right now

trying to get my thoughts in control

I'm thinking about this day

when I wanted to say I like you!!!

 

 

 

I think it sounds very bad now but the sense is the same.I hope you understand my metaphors... :lol:

that's a very good one, i liked it. ;)

Ah thank you....hope you feel better...

well i do, thanks a lot. :)

Ah that's good.....

thanks a lot.

 

i really liked your poem a lot. :) it was a bit too long, but well i also write very long poems too :)

i know that it's very long...I wrote it for my ex-best-friend...and then I gave it to my best friends now...

so your ex-best friend never read it?

 

i wrote a poem when i argued with a friend time ago and she read it accidentaly and didn't realized it was about her

No my ex-best friend read it and some months later we were in trouble.That was last year and now I gave it to my best friends.I made a book for them with many of my poems...

oh that's cool. :cool:

 

i gave a poem to my teachers (a different one to each one of them) a year ago :)

 

my friends only like love poems. :/

You gave poems to your teachers?

I wrote once a poem for a very good friend of mine because she was so sad....she said as she read it she was crying....

i did it, because most of them know i write poems and wanted to read some so i gave them one of each other, a personalized one about the year, about what they teached us. :D

 

oh, when my friends read a poem of mine they never know if it's about them, anyways i don't want to tell them that if the poem is about them, i want to keep that secret yet, it'll be cooler if they read on a book that the poem is about them. don't you think? i hope they can read a book of my poems some day :D

Yes of course it's cooler....

My english teacher lets us always write poems when we come too late to our english lesson...

oh that's cool. :D i wish my teachers do the same here. :)

Sometimes I like it to come too late...then she gives us a topic and we have to write the poem...I always wrote fun poems.Once I had to write one because I had a chewing gum in my mouth,so my topic was chewing gum...

that's cool from them. :D

 

once i had to write a short poem in french hehe it was so fun but my teacher was so :stunned: about it, but i found it funny.