Kyuu Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 ^^^:laugh3: My last one... Called Meaningless. You thought that I was caught By the worries and the doubts I've been fought against. You thought you've put me down, In my mind you've set the pain, And you've made my hope gone. You really think you achieved it But you didn't even reach it. Now, I should confess All your words are so meaningless. Even if I seemed to give it up, But your anger cheers me up. Rude words that you use, And I thought you were mature. Hide your insecurity behind Your cold look, but you're fragile inside, Whatever you do, you'll stay a child. All you've to be worried about is: The devil lives where you sleep. It doesn't rhyme, it makes no sense, yes I am still a child and I won't pretend like I'm not though I act more mature than you. ;) I would give you credits if you would indeed make a good poem, which you didn't. You think I didn't reach anything? I survived my disease and accepted it, I survived the loneliness and yes the devil lives where I sleep but I'm not afraid of him. Yes, words are meaningless whether it's mine or yours but at least I know how to use them. My goals are more important than to hurt you which is just a waste of time that I don't want to waste cos I don't want to end up like you in the end. Actions speak louder than words, where are yours? Weren't you the one that said ; if I would stand in your shoes, I'd kill myself.. ? I won't make another poem nor say something about you cos it's meaningless to do so plus you're not even worth a kill. Careful where you fall cos you got nothing to stand on.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 ^The more you care about what I write, the more I'm happy, so carry on :laugh3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 ^^^:laugh3: My last one... Called Meaningless. You thought that I was caught By the worries and the doubts I've been fought against. You thought you've put me down, In my mind you've set the pain, And you've made my hope gone. You really think you achieved it But you didn't even reach it. Now, I should confess All your words are so meaningless. Even if I seemed to give it up, But your anger cheers me up. Rude words that you use, And I thought you were mature. Hide your insecurity behind Your cold look, but you're fragile inside, Whatever you do, you'll stay a child. All you've to be worried about is: The devil lives where you sleep. Good one Mike. ;) mm are you answering one to the other, then? :surprised: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 Can't wait to read other poems. :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 my new poem....feel free to criticize it! :uhoh: just another day on the line so far away I hear you whispering my name my skin is burning with a thought I didn't shave today and my voice is the same let's go north where no man is caught for being lame so far away I hear your lips move is that sad name mine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 short but good one Miro. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 Miro, I love it! Here's my new one. Called Let it erase the distance. Feeling alone In my everlasting nights, All the sounds are gone, Only one word remains and flies. "Just say it again, Let it echoe and break the silence, Give it a chance to swipe away the rain, Let it erase the distance." Play me the music of your heart Play me its unsung melody Take me away from the start, Show me what I have to see. Wherever I could stand, I feel you, near me, You take my hand, And whisper softly: "Just say it again, Let it echoe and break the silence, Give it a chance to swipe away the rain, Let it erase the distance." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 4, 2007 Share Posted April 4, 2007 very good one Mike. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 5, 2007 Share Posted April 5, 2007 :nice: sounds splendid! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 5, 2007 Share Posted April 5, 2007 Thank you Miro! Another one that I started a pretty long time ago... It's about a very important member of my family I lost 3 years ago. The current weather here (sunny) and this period of the year (beginning of it + spring) made me write it. It's called Remember A leaf fell from a tree, All happened so quietly All happened too quickly. Let's remind the short days How the cold air hit our faces, How the snow flew with grace. Remember how the bright sun raised, The newborn light stroke our eyes, When the dark was chased away by its rays. Remember the rain, beating against the windows How it washed all the things we knew It reminds me how all is definitely gone. The leaf fell from the tree, endlessly And the ground looked like vanishing Everything was back to the very beginning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted April 5, 2007 Share Posted April 5, 2007 wonderful one Mike. It make :cry: and :nice: at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 5, 2007 Share Posted April 5, 2007 Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 rhôôôô... that thread was nearly dead... here's a new poem Called Absence. My lovely day and its light went away One more time, my body shivers. It looks like the night's back on my way, Each time you leave, summer turns into winter. I feel the cold, my tears freeze, But, my heart screams and cries silently Your name, and it echoes again in my head. I can only close my eyes where I stand. The tight cold of your absence, Drives me to lose all my senses. Step by step, the air is being thin, I can't breath anymore, I'm chocking. Being so far from you is so unfair, I'll give my life to love you, Your words are my hope, my air, I could never go on without you. My sun'll be back, whispering me its rays Getting me warmer, swiping my tears away. Just stay with me, forever, please, To tell me how beautiful life is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 nice, Mike :mellow: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted April 24, 2007 Share Posted April 24, 2007 Thank you. Well, the next one describes a part of me I can only dislike. The title doesn't really mean sth, it's not related with the poem, although... I dunno. I've been feeling quite low since a couple of days (maybe more, I dunno. Well all's coming out now... :s) Called Lacking Lake Drive me to that lake, Filled by my dry tears. There melt truth and fake, This is where my mind disappears. Confused, my crystal heart floats, Comes closer to the coast, Reaches the white sand beach Breaks, quietly, slowly on it. Dig my own grave, Put me six feet underground, Draw, with my blood, the traces Of all my mistakes on the ground. All seems to collapse around me, The one I used to be, The words you told me. My mind is playing tricks on me. Shattering all my doubts, I've built myself such a way Down to the darkest clouds, There's nowhere I can really stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted April 24, 2007 Share Posted April 24, 2007 again a superb poem...though I must admit I'm not happy you're unhappy :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 Mr. Reed sir, you sigh so severely several silences sliced you slickly so now you're sickly saving wavering razor blades from shaving some sound slits in your wrists listen, this is what you're missing singing songs to misses miss you many messy kisses shave your skin instead of your soul sometimes someone will see something special Love, For a Love Offender That Lives on a Bee Farm animals grunting hunting for animals display of feathers who cares? I do you display so humbly bumble bee queen queerly does her query, who is worthy? I am I noticed your interest colorful flowers with their powers I shower you with them in them I toil to spoil you with them when they float you gloat with them like heaven never better the petals spell a letter they cast a spell that lasts long lady bee looks like the letter lightly lifts your spirits so I can kiss your exoskeleton a ton if I wish - you wish this is what I wonder if I won I'm done A person must experience eighteen revolutions around the sun before they can have independence and a brain The earth stands Or rather it sat obesely Inspired, I came to Or said, "You fool!" The earth opened up in response its mouth Uttered nonsensical grace Like a truly spoken idiot With laws complimenting contradicted advice A change of scene Will lift your spirits, in hell Closed the old woman's mouth I responded by emitting greenhouse gases She got hot And had one more hissy fit The elderly woman Mother earth is dying, quite frankly I'm glad But death is 10% expected 90% liver failure Which is why alchohol is not suggested But funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sena Posted May 8, 2007 Share Posted May 8, 2007 ı have some poems in turkısh!ı love to write! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted May 8, 2007 Share Posted May 8, 2007 Feel free to post:) and welcome to the board:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anniep_93 Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 I don't usually write poetry but I had to write a poem for English yesterday on the Holocaust and I'm quite proud of it. :) Nothing seems tangible when you’re treated like swine Given a small ration and shoved into line Oblivious to the future that lies ahead “Arbeit Macht Frei” the sign had said This leaves me with only one indication I must show some decorum or else face extermination The resentment I feel now for every gentile Is disguised by keeping docile. The truth is illuminated by this incarceration. They will cover their tracks with careful sedation. My childhood quickly disappears without a trace As they strangulate me into their sinister embrace. When I look through the window of tomorrow I see nothing has been changing It’ll still be all sorrow. Hopefully time will strip my away my agony and liberation will be my only melody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted May 27, 2007 Share Posted May 27, 2007 Untitled You see me in blinding white lights make our faces bleed with colours of bleach and washed-out pales. I am gloriously sanitised with a face perfectly chiseled; and an expression as cold as marble. I sing in monotonous mess but it is alright nonetheless. With manicured nails and killer clothes I am statuesque (but) my love is vague, my life is a circle yes, a circle. sometimes I call this, The "Theme from the Workplace" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted June 7, 2007 Share Posted June 7, 2007 panicator, i love the poem. :) Havent been here for a very long time....:rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 panicator, i love the poem. :) Havent been here for a very long time....:rolleyes: thanks :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartswarm Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Remember Victoria Remember Victoria with hair strawberry blonde that mischievous pixie who leaves trails of stardust Remember Victoria the one with angel eyes who traverse galaxies and doorways between worlds Remember Victoria a girl with radiant smile the earth is her playground; our terrestrial queen Remember Victoria the siren who I loved with lips gracefully sealed; ribbons adorn her feet { Forever, Victoria Down by the water She is safe (and sound) (But...but her eyes never seem to close...) } Victoria isn't real. I was thinking this could make a nice epitaph... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antonellinacarina Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Have you msn??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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