chuck kottke Posted May 9, 2008 Share Posted May 9, 2008 Hayley, I wish I had your background in English Literature! As fas as I've gotten is Dickens and some of the poets.. But just reading Dickens really says a lot about society - both then and now. Glad to hear of your interest!:) Kellie, that's a nice start - you can always build upon that theme, be it unrequited love, and give it some more intrigue! But that's a good foundation - a mystery keeps the reader/listener interested.;) Thinker, that one's very sincere and kind - nice to read something consoling - at times we all go through rough patches, and need a boost. Keep up the good work!!:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 12, 2008 Share Posted May 12, 2008 Her hand as gentle as a warm spring breeze stroking my forehead, all just to please Kindness was a dove That settled next to me To hold an angel with velvet hand One that could for moments be The sweetness of her touch for all eternity.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 14, 2008 Share Posted May 14, 2008 Reflection A sense of place takes its sweet time and saves nine lives that settle in time to realize our place in the land nature's garden to know to grow into the value of place to put to rest one's wheels To put to sleep one's worries.. smell the good earth to Dig with both hands, and watch the garden grow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 18, 2008 Share Posted May 18, 2008 Calling All Coldplayers: Just post some poetry here!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 21, 2008 Share Posted May 21, 2008 ^^Nice! I like it!! Very minimalist, and very true to the senses!!:smart:;) Here's one: Identify, separate lumpers and splitters all to form images of idealized objects neat and precise concise and simple.. but truth's much more than connecting all .s and all of the dashes-- to send a message beyond just the slashes../ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted May 21, 2008 Share Posted May 21, 2008 Its been a while ey...but I'm back! :D Melancholy The roses are grey A non-existant summer day A shroud in the sky As another passes by The simple sweet sound Nothing more than mud on the ground A colourless waste Expanding out vastly, into space Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 Hello Miss Snicket!:) Glad you're back from the hiatus, Rachel!!;) I gather winter in Aussie-land is looking rather dull?? Can't you just hop a ride on a kangaroo?:laugh3: Cheers! -from Chuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pseudonym Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 "There once was a man from Peru Who dreamed he was eating his shoe; He awkoe with a fright in the middle of the night To find that his dream had come true" -Gary The wisest snail of them all :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 travweld OOPS! Poem:Travels the atom.. From rock to rock goes the life of the binder once a weathered stone thence a giant ocean containing smallest of creatures, sequestering rust and coating their hulls with dust laid down as carpets on the bed floor to be taken up by the renovators and broken like soup bones into many molds pored like the shimmering water of a fiery netherworld never far, but neither near from source to sink it doeth flow and then tossed aside, like the child's toy forgotten for the blink of time's eye.. and yet born anew in the slow turning bit into tiller that digs in the land and lifts anew the ancient of stones with the tines of time spinning away weaving a tapestry on ancient truths to keep us for another day and slowly the rock revolves on its axis as a measure of tilth and a keeper of life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 "There once was a man from Peru Who dreamed he was eating his shoe; He awkoe with a fright in the middle of the night To find that his dream had come true" -Gary The wisest snail of them all :D :laugh3: Well done escargo!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 Hello Miss Snicket!:) Glad you're back from the hiatus, Rachel!!;) I gather winter in Aussie-land is looking rather dull?? Can't you just hop a ride on a kangaroo?:laugh3: Cheers! -from Chuck. Haha, glad to be back. I never get tired of your aussie style antics. I believe the Kangaroos are in hibination nowadays :laugh3:. But yes, winter is rather dull and but we need the rain over here...but then again, essentially, all Australians come from British ancestors so it should be in our blood to be cold :lol:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 ogs I was unaware of any Aussie-style antics!:stunned::rolleyes: 1 quik questian: WallawallaWallaby - is there such a town down-under??;) Anyhow, did not know that Roos' hibernate - maybe they just get slower in winter, kinda like our white-tailed deer?? Do you need special saddles to ride them (w/ shock-absorbers included?)?!:P Here, it's the bumbling black bears, and the white-tails.. We do have bison, but they're raised in captivity in our state. The bison would be the best choice for riding of the three, but only by a slim margin. A few people have tried alpacas - same difficult climate as the high Andes, only flatter.. But they look too slender for anything but barn cats to ride! Aussie landers hibernate too?? Or, do you all go north to the warm coasts? Either way, keep warm Rachel! Poem: abra-cadabra hocus-pocus outta focus candle abra bumble-bee opera A chorus of frogs A course on dogs sawing saw logs laughing out-loud at the sound from the bogs.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 VeryNice!:cool: It's late, and my poem machine is all slowed down... Power going off, rest well.:sleeping2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 great ones Chuck, Thinker (Einar). :thumbsup: ok after 5 days without writing anything new, just has came 3 new poems: Solitude Daisy Poppy Stone Town may be them are too simple, but them are also shorter than usual, i hope that from that i can make them be a bit complex again. all comments and critics are welcomed. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 ^ I like Stone Town the best! I was feeling really lonely last week cus all my best friends had been sick so I wrote these two poems... Sea-Side Eyes I look up, but nothing has changed The air perhaps, is colder, one day older. I am last to leave, my name is not called out No beautiful statue, standing tall, not at all Eyes of the sea and hair of the wind My quiet bliss is all I seem to miss Another day passes, the world seems to freeze Where are those Sea-side eyes, because now, even the dust cries And now a quirky one. Simplicty You & me perfect symmetry An unlikely pair So delicate nad fair Musing the idea Of ever drawing near To young to dare To ever really care Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
englishrose Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 I thought this up in about thirty seconds today, just lying on the grass...It's funny how that works; I've spend hours on a shorter poem before. Anyways: I find poems in the clouds and quench my thirst on my tears. I fill my belly with seagull cries, and the sky is my canvas. The breeze is my eiderdown, and this perfect day is mine for the taking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pseudonym Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 I have a kind of scary poem, a song actually. Sort of influenced by Cemeteries of London, just wrote this last night: Paranoia Echoes in the distance The distance A cry for help No one listenin’ I hear these voices in my head They can’t be real They can’t be, ooooooohhhhh Something in the air We breathe A light through the fog We can’t see I hear these voices in my head They can’t be real They can’t be, ooooooohhhhh Hiding in my closet It’s under my bed They are all around me It’s all just in my head I feel something here It might not be real But my heart’s filled with fear It’s only paranoia Now the day is gone The night looms Over us the clouds move To show the red moon I hear these voices in my head They can’t be real They can’t be, ooooooohhhhh Hiding in my closet It’s under my bed They are all around me It’s all just in my head I feel something here It might not be real But my heart’s filled with fear It’s only paranoia Only paranoia… Only paranoia… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
englishrose Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 Creepy. I like it. Have you set it to music? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pseudonym Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 Creepy. I like it. Have you set it to music? absolutely. creepy repeating 3 note bass line. tom tom drum rolls. eery Violet Hill-esque sound effects and low monotone singing reminiscent of "All I Need" by Radiohead. Or at least thats how my drummer's family described it.:) maybe if we ever get into a studio we can record it and Ill post it here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 Creepy. I like it. Have you set it to music?:laugh3: I just have to laugh Ms. tea lady. No offense, it's just the sort of response one might expect from one of us - "OOOO, that's spooky! Give me more!" - How true, though. We all like a good chiller thriller from time to time - I used to love a movie titled "The Fog" for the eerie things that happened unexpectedly. And now, some iambic pentameter.. Beer buzz has taken hold in the noggin' above Can't stop now because it's like a dove calling me, beckoning me, singing frothily to me Taste my suds and ye will be merry! And so I did as it commanded, and found the buzz Bumblebee not included, some assembly required, Kit sold separately, but complete in effect One tall glass, add one fine beer, yields one happy glug!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
englishrose Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 :laugh3: I just have to laugh Ms. tea lady. No offense, it's just the sort of response one might expect from one of us - "OOOO, that's spooky! Give me more!" - How true, though. We all like a good chiller thriller from time to time - I used to love a movie titled "The Fog" for the eerie things that happened unexpectedly. And now, some iambic pentameter.. Beer buzz has taken hold in the noggin' above Can't stop now because it's like a dove calling me, beckoning me, singing frothily to me Taste my suds and ye will be merry! And so I did as it commanded, and found the buzz Bumblebee not included, some assembly required, Kit sold separately, but complete in effect One tall glass, add one fine beer, yields one happy glug!:P Hehehe, yes, I know what you mean. Spook junkies... I like your iambic pentameter, very clever :D I won't be writing those any time soon, not after having been force-fed them by the English curriculum...it's a shame, I quite like it really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 Yea, I have to agree - spooky can be cool!:cool: Probably not much iambic anything in the poem, but thanks anyways! Glad you like it:happy: Yes, very often overdosing students on structure/stricture turns students off - I do recall as well loosing some of the "fun of it" in the process. Please keep prodigiously producing poetry, and have a good night! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 i dont know is this kinda poem or not. well, call it a creepy lyric... at least i just want to share in here :D its called flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elyria Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 By a mustard sun I walk and patiently await the turning of a leaf... ~me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 ^I love it, so simple and yet it still has meaning Look in my eyes and see fire Flicker past The simple expression of Nets we have cast The watchdog growls quietly To the cat in his sight A glance at her eyes And she's gone with the night Snow falling gracefully Without a regret Tossing and turning It lands where we met A sunrise appears to only A few simple eyes For the rest of the world They see the Sun's cries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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