awww, that was soooo great:wacky: im sad its over:cry:

Awww Lauren ... :) :) :) :smug:

 

This is sooo very cute and promising!! AND ... it leaves room for another chapter or a different story going on from here :wink3:

 

Well done! I really enjoyed reading it!!

 

Which reminds me that I definately need to continue writing and upload another piece of my own very soon :laugh3:

awh, lauren!! i'm sad it's over, but you wrapped it up perfectly! great job!! :D

That was GREAT!!!!Thank you!!!!

awwwww i loved that soo much it soo sweet when he wrote 'its not over' awww cxoxo well done

Lauren!!! great job!!!! I saw that it was the final, so I sat and re-read from the start again, LOL. That was a good story, sad, but Yes it does leave it open (hint, Hint).

Okay, I've updated as well :laugh3: :wink3:

I left a note on the group page!!! Can't wait to see what happens next:)

I left a note on the group page!!! Can't wait to see what happens next:)

I just say

 

Karaoke!

 

And just thinking about it makes me pee my pants because of .... well, you have to be a little patient here :sneaky:

ohh i wanna know wot happens littlemissmessy i love ur story lol xx

I just want to say I love all the fanfics on here, they are all great! I need to post more but I have had no inspiration or desire to do it at the moment! I'm a procrastinator! :P

I am so glad I made this thread! :nice:

:) xx

Where's Emma (Cobalt)? She used to hang around here a lot...:confused:

 

Edit: New avatar and signature! :dance:

^^gorgeous!! :wideeyed:!

veri preety x

:heart: thanks everyone for all of the lovely comments! I was a little unsure of the ending, but I'm glad people liked it. Its supposed to be kind of open-ended.. so you can decide for yourself what would happen next.

I just started another fanfic.. It's not related to "Lovers In Japan" at all.

Completely different character, and it's a Guy story. so yeah.. once I finish the first part, I'll post it here. :smiley:

aww thanks xx

& the final part :D

 

Part 7 of Lovers in Japan

 

 

 

 

“Good morning” Chris says, as he walks into the bathroom.

 

I’m leaning over the sink brushing my teeth, and as he walks by he gently pats my bottom.

 

“Good morning,” I say with a mouthful of toothpaste. “You look cheery today.”

 

“I am!” he exclaims. “I’m really going to take your advice. Not worrying, having hope. I’m just going to take things one day at a time.”

 

“Good.” I say, after rinsing out my mouth.

 

I turn around to face him and he leans in to kiss me. He gently grabs me by the hips and pulls me closer to him. I wrap my arms around his waist, and we hug for what seems like forever. I feel so comfortable there with him. It’s so effortless.

 

Finally I look up at him.

“You know, there’s only two more days until I have to leave.” I tell him.

 

“What? I thought you were staying with us for the entire trip.” he says.

 

“I really can’t. I have so much work to do. So much to write.” I say sadly.

 

“Two more days, hmm?” Chris asks.

I nod my head.

 

“Well then we’d better make them good ones.” he says with a smile.

 

 

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The next two days were a whirlwind of flirtatious giggling and passionate kisses. Cuddling up under the sheets with glasses of wine, and staying up all night talking about anything and everything. It all passed like a dream and as we sit on the balcony on my last day, I feel myself holding back tears. We are snuggled up together on a lounge chair, watching the smoldering sun as it set in a sky of crimson and gold.

 

What we had been to each other was perfect. Everything that had happened that week was sublime, but it couldn’t possibly last. It was over, and I knew it. But I didn’t dare ruin the moment by speaking those words. It would spoil everything. And I didn’t want that. I wanted to stay there forever, warm and happy, pressed against his strong chest.

 

We stay out on the balcony until the last ray of sunlight disappeared. I lift my chin up to look at Chris.

 

“Let’s go in.” He says, releasing me from his comforting hold. I lift myself up from the lounge chair, and we walk hand in hand through the siding glass doors.

 

I fall asleep that night laying gently against him. Listening to his heart beat, and moving with the rise and fall of his chest.

 

When I wake up the next morning, I can feel the anxiety and worry in the pit of my stomach. We get dressed and I finish packing the last of my things.

 

“Let’s go get some breakfast before your flight.” Chris says as he pulls his arms through his shirt sleeves.

 

“No,” I say shaking my head. “I’m not hungry. Lets just go.”

 

“Are you okay Charlotte?” Chris asks.

 

“Yes. I’m fine.” I assure him.

 

As we drive through the crowded streets of Tokyo, I hold myself against him and breathe him in. Trying to remember everything about him. The car ride was too short, and in what seems like a heartbeat, we are already at the airport. We walk to the departure gates, hand in hand, Chris rolling my suitcase along behind him.

 

I sigh as we get to my gate. Chris turns to me and takes my hands in his.

 

“Charlotte, I can’t thank you enough for what you’ve been to me. I’m been a mess these past couple of months, but in the last few of days, I’ve been happier than I can ever remember.” he whispers.

 

And before I can respond he, kisses me softly on the lips and then draws me close for a hug.

 

“Thank you” he whispers in my ear.

 

I watch through my tears, as he walks away from me. I stare after him until he is lost in the crowd, and I can’t see him any more. I stand there with my ticket, and my suitcase in hand.

And just like that it was over.

 

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One week later

 

I’m sitting in the office in New York, finishing up the last paragraph of the Coldplay feature article, when I hear a sharp knocking on my door.

 

“Come in!” I call, without looking up from my computer.

 

My assistant Carrie sticks her head in.

 

“Delivery!” she says joyfully.

 

“Okay, can you sign for it and bring it through.. Whatever it is.. I’m really busy right now.” I ask her, while typing.

 

A minute later, Carrie’s walking back in with a huge smile on her face and a large vase of flowers in her hands.

 

She sets the vase down on my desk and leaves, shutting the door behind her. I glance at them for a second before turning back to my computer.

“Probably just another bouquet of flowers from some kiss-ass writer on the floor below me.” I think to myself.

 

“Unless….” I say aloud to the empty room.

 

I roll my chair over to the end of the desk and take a closer look at the arrangement. It’s an amazing display of white roses, tiny babies breath flowers, and long cherry blossom branches. As soon as I see the cherry blossoms, my heart starts to beat faster, and automatically I reach for the little card sticking up between the petals.

 

I open the envelope and pull out the piece of paper. As I read it, my eyes fill with tears, and a smile spreads across my face.

 

Written on the small white card are the words:

 

“It’s not over.” ♥

 

 

:wacky::wacky::wacky:

i really really loved it lauren!! :D it was so good!!:heart:

you did an amazing job!! :dance:

 

i'm just sad its over :cry:

can't wait, lauren!!

 

i'm gonna try to finish the next part to sys. :D

oh yay! can't wait :escaping: I'm so in the mood for some SYS

Okay, something's bothering me. My own avatar seems very familiar to me...like I've seen it before. Has anyone seen someone use this as an avatar recently? :inquisitive:

here it is!!

 

SEE YOU SOON.

PART TEN

 

WARNING: some sexual content. not much.

 

 

My eyes fluttered open a few hours later. The movie was off, the plane was dead silent, and it was night… wherever we were. The sight was beautiful. Everything looked so peaceful and quiet from a few thousand feet up. I looked around the plane and saw Guy smiling at me. “Have a good nap?” he asked.

I nodded. “Where’s Chris?”

“He’s doing a phone interview in the other room. Hungry?”

“Starving, actually.” I said, getting up.

Guy stood up and walked over to a counter near the center of the plane and pulled out a plastic container. “My famous chicken salad sandwich. Seriously, even if you don’t like chicken salad, you’ll love this.”

I smiled. “Well it’s a good thing I love chicken salad.” I opened the container and took a small bite. “Oh my god, this is amazing.”

He chuckled. “That’s what they all say.”

For the next couple of hours I got to know Guy, Jon and Will much better. Jonny taught me a little guitar which was incredibly embarrassing, because I have no musical talent at all. Will showed me pictures of his beautiful children and we talked a little bit about what it was like to be on the road all the time. Then I heard my cell phone ring, so I excused myself and dug through my purse. The caller ID read “Jim”.

“Hey!” I said cheerfully.

“Hey, Soph!” Jim said. “How’s the fancy vacation going so far?”

I chuckled and sat down. “Well, hasn’t really started yet. We’re still on the plane.”

“Oh, really? Wow, longer flight than I thought.” He sighed. “Well, I’ll let you get back.”

“Good to hear from you, Jim.”

I hung up the phone and looked up to see Chris walking out of the next room, now wearing a black t-shirt and blue boxers for pajamas. He smiled brightly when he saw me. “Hey, you’re up. Sorry I had to do that. Were you okay here?”

“Just fine.” I said, kissing him on the cheek. “Your friends are very sweet.”

They all smiled as a thank you and we sat down in our seats. “Do you know how much longer we have?”

“No idea. Oh, I got you something. Well, my agent did.” He stood up and walked over to a garment bag and pulled the zipper down.

Inside was a beautiful electric blue one shoulder dress.

“Oh, Chris!” I said, holding the dress up to my chest. “It’s gorgeous! But why?”

“Well as soon as we get there we have to go to some charity event. If you don’t want to-”

Before he could finish I dropped the dress and kissed him on the lips. “I’d love to go.”

Chris grinned and pulled me in again for another kiss. He wrapped his arms around my waist and put a hand up my shirt onto my bare back. Suddenly, he stopped and looked around. “You know… there’s a bedroom in the back.”

“Are you kidding?”

He shook his head.

I took my hands from his neck down to his hand and we slowly crept to the back of the plane, hopefully without anyone noticing. I opened the door to see a tiny bedroom with a twin bed in the back corner. Chris turned me around and pushed me up against the wall, kissing me passionately. I ran my fingers through his hair as I felt his hands pulling off my tank top. When I ripped his shirt off he went for my jeans, and got them off quite quickly. I giggled as he lifted me up and threw me onto the bed. “Condom?” I asked quickly.

Chris nodded and got a condom out of a drawer, then climbed back on top of me.

I tried to be as quiet as I could, but man. That was the most intense sex of my life.

 

 

here it is!!

 

SEE YOU SOON.

PART TEN

 

WARNING: some sexual content. not much.

 

 

My eyes fluttered open a few hours later. The movie was off, the plane was dead silent, and it was night… wherever we were. The sight was beautiful. Everything looked so peaceful and quiet from a few thousand feet up. I looked around the plane and saw Guy smiling at me. “Have a good nap?” he asked.

I nodded. “Where’s Chris?”

“He’s doing a phone interview in the other room. Hungry?”

“Starving, actually.” I said, getting up.

Guy stood up and walked over to a counter near the center of the plane and pulled out a plastic container. “My famous chicken salad sandwich. Seriously, even if you don’t like chicken salad, you’ll love this.”

I smiled. “Well it’s a good thing I love chicken salad.” I opened the container and took a small bite. “Oh my god, this is amazing.”

He chuckled. “That’s what they all say.”

For the next couple of hours I got to know Guy, Jon and Will much better. Jonny taught me a little guitar which was incredibly embarrassing, because I have no musical talent at all. Will showed me pictures of his beautiful children and we talked a little bit about what it was like to be on the road all the time. Then I heard my cell phone ring, so I excused myself and dug through my purse. The caller ID read “Jim”.

“Hey!” I said cheerfully.

“Hey, Soph!” Jim said. “How’s the fancy vacation going so far?”

I chuckled and sat down. “Well, hasn’t really started yet. We’re still on the plane.”

“Oh, really? Wow, longer flight than I thought.” He sighed. “Well, I’ll let you get back.”

“Good to hear from you, Jim.”

I hung up the phone and looked up to see Chris walking out of the next room, now wearing a black t-shirt and blue boxers for pajamas. He smiled brightly when he saw me. “Hey, you’re up. Sorry I had to do that. Were you okay here?”

“Just fine.” I said, kissing him on the cheek. “Your friends are very sweet.”

They all smiled as a thank you and we sat down in our seats. “Do you know how much longer we have?”

“No idea. Oh, I got you something. Well, my agent did.” He stood up and walked over to a garment bag and pulled the zipper down.

Inside was a beautiful electric blue one shoulder dress.

“Oh, Chris!” I said, holding the dress up to my chest. “It’s gorgeous! But why?”

“Well as soon as we get there we have to go to some charity event. If you don’t want to-”

Before he could finish I dropped the dress and kissed him on the lips. “I’d love to go.”

Chris grinned and pulled me in again for another kiss. He wrapped his arms around my waist and put a hand up my shirt onto my bare back. Suddenly, he stopped and looked around. “You know… there’s a bedroom in the back.”

“Are you kidding?”

He shook his head.

I took my hands from his neck down to his hand and we slowly crept to the back of the plane, hopefully without anyone noticing. I opened the door to see a tiny bedroom with a twin bed in the back corner. Chris turned me around and pushed me up against the wall, kissing me passionately. I ran my fingers through his hair as I felt his hands pulling off my tank top. When I ripped his shirt off he went for my jeans, and got them off quite quickly. I giggled as he lifted me up and threw me onto the bed. “Condom?” I asked quickly.

Chris nodded and got a condom out of a drawer, then climbed back on top of me.

I tried to be as quiet as I could, but man. That was the most intense sex of my life.

 

 

*Bites nails at the last line of the story*

ZOMFG :bomb:

:heart: thanks everyone for all of the lovely comments! I was a little unsure of the ending, but I'm glad people liked it. Its supposed to be kind of open-ended.. so you can decide for yourself what would happen next.

I just started another fanfic.. It's not related to "Lovers In Japan" at all.

Completely different character, and it's a Guy story. so yeah.. once I finish the first part, I'll post it here. :smiley:

 

GOOD LAUREN!!! I WILL PATIENTLY WAIT FOR THIS NEXT STORY.........!!!:D:D:D

Speed of Sound (Part 7)

 

 

 

 

 

It was such a lovely morning. The sun shined and Charlie and MIss were at the park.Charlie went down the slide on his own, ran up the stairs and slid down again. He was having so much fun. Miss sat on a bench nearby with a pair of sunglasses and 2 bottles of water. Although she was alone on the bench, she wasn't bored at all, she was completely fascinatedwith what Charlie was doing, as if she had never seen something or someone like him before.

 

Later a black vehicle pulled into the park. Miss didn't notice it at all. She was busy pushing Charlie on the swing. A sudden but small breeze flew in, sweeping Miss's black hair behind her face and let Charlies blonde hair shine in the suns rays. Then, approaching the playground was a little girl also with blonde hair. Following her was a man with blonde curls, sparkling blue eyes that no one would ever forget, and the most important thing. A smile.

 

He came straight up to me.

 

Chris: Hey Miss.

 

Miss (turns around, suprised): Oh, hi Chris!

 

Chris: Thought I would see you here. Anyhow, you know tommorow is Guy's birthday right?

 

Miss: Would never forget it.

 

Chris: We're trying to have him a suprise party. We we're wondering if you could get him over to my place at around 1 tommorow. Do you think you could do it for us?

 

Miss: Sure! That wouldn't be a problem.

 

Chris: That would be great. I'm getting hungry, do you want to go out someplace down the street?

 

Miss: If you don't mind.

 

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The sun was nowset to a dreamy orange color which turned the clouds and sky to all kinds of beautiful colors you would only get in a sunset. The restaraunt was fantastic. It was a one of a kind place and beleive me, it was not one bit trashy. The music was soft and in style, the waitress had great timing, and Charlie and Apple had a good time just as Chris and Miss had. Chris and Miss we're talking almost the entire time they were seated.

 

By the time Chris and Miss had exited, Charlie and Apple had fallen asleep. Miss buckled in Charlie as Chris buckled in Apple also. The sunset was just about gone, only minutes more until the sun would drift away.

 

Chris (standing next to her as she buckles Charlie in): Is Charlie one of your own children?

 

Miss: I adopted him about 2 years ago. He was a young orphan. His parents weren't able to care for him. I knew I could though. I don't know how a child could depart from their parents permanently. It sounds extremly hard.

 

Chris: I don't know what I would do without my family.

 

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Miss lay in her bed, wondering. Waiting. Charlie was sound asleep, it was late after all. 10:30 to be exact. Time passed slower than it ever had for Miss. Miss looked at the clock next to her bed once more. Only a minute had passed by ever since she looked at it. She waited and wondered, and wondered and waited again astime slowly crept along....