Another song I made up

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As I fall

I can see it all

See the reflections

On my inner wall

And as all my hopes fail

No friend to pay the bail

I can tell I’m alone here

My talking is responded

With empty echoes

 

Empty echoes

The reflections of reflections

Nothing inside

Nothing on the outside

All I hear

Is empty echoes

 

 

I see stars

I’m surrounded by fire

I’m losing my restraint

Revenge is my desire

My inner battle starts

The bullets are flying

 

I lie dying

I cry to the heavens for help

But all that’s coming back

Is empty echoes

 

Empty echoes

The voiceless mourn

But I can’t hear their vigil

Empty echoes

The demons scorn

It’s what I hear

The empty echoes

 

And all I hear is wrong

The speeches and the songs

And as the birds close in

They see me dying

 

And while I cannot see

What it means to me

It’s like I’m drowning in the sea

Not breathing, I’m crying

 

I feel it. Feel the ground

Feel the tension in the air

It means nothing to me

I could kill for an answer

 

I’m telling myself

It will be okay

But it’s inside of me

The empty echoes

 

Empty Echoes

My mind’s response to me

Don’t know what to believe

Empty echoes

I fall to my knees

My life is now the fee

For the empty echoes

 

As I die I sink into the sky

As I die I sink into the sky

And I realize man can’t truly fly

And I don’t think I will ever see

Why real truth can never be

Why the ground is separate from the sea

Why the lock is separate from the key

And why you aren’t here with me

 

And the empty echoes

They can’t take my soul

Oh empty echoes

Leave me; come back when you’re full

Empty echoes

The darkness now is clearly nigh

As I end my fall

And sink into the sky…

I hope John doesn't see this...:uhoh:

I hope John doesn't see this...:uhoh:

 

why?

Because John's sort of an ass. And he'll probably make an ass-full comment on it. Probably.

It's rubs.

why?

cause our band has a song called Empty Spaces and he'll come along and like "don't steal our songs!" or something stupid like that :lol:

cause our band has a song called Empty Spaces and he'll come along and like "don't steal our songs!" or something stupid like that :lol:

 

would your band happen to be called "Pink Floyd" LOL

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w7d8IBX3DKQ&feature=related]YouTube - Pink Floyd - Empty spaces/Young lust[/ame]

would your band happen to be called "Pink Floyd" LOL

YouTube - Pink Floyd - Empty spaces/Young lust

technically our song is called Empty Space(s)

 

 

so its different ;)

don't steal our songs!

Its very focussed on, you. Theres about 70 "I"s and 30 "Me"s. I used to write the same way when I was 14/15 but realised although its fine for me to read, its incredibly boring for anyone else to try and engage or relate to.

^It could be a rap song though. I guess that would make it okay.

I can sort of imagine that

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Rrr-rr-rrrwwee-rreewwiinnd selecta hit the beat wheres my bass at!?

 

(Wicky wicky)

As I fall

I can see it all

(Yeah!)

See the reflections

On my inner wall

(Jeah boi!)

And as all my hopes fail (fail!)

No friend to pay the bail (bail!)

I can tell I’m alone here (Y'aerme?!)

My talking is responded (Brap brap)

With empty echoes

 

Jeah, empty echoes, y'all..

I dig, I dig.

 

I'm gonna bump a thread I made last week. I think you should have some good stories.

Oh was that the punch thread? I just replied in that, didnt bother with any stories though.

gotcha