If you didn't notice I just posted :awesome:

 

I noticed. And it is a really cool one too!!!

Really Dianna? It's pretty old but yay! :dance: I'm glad you like it. I actually REALLY want to write right now.

Homecoming: oooh :surprised:

*pulls a rachel* more, please! :wideeyed::P

:p Am I going to be a verb now? I think I might write more:rolleyes:

The Last Place: I see Timothy smacking Chris on the hand like a nun in a Catholic School would do when he goes near that door:P Wonder what Jonny has to do...:thinking: :love:

:surprised: a surge of new people! how lovely. :awesome:

 

well, hello Hustler, and welcome to our thread! your story is verrrrrry :bomb:tastic and :sweatdrop:-filled, so i don't think you have anything to worry about. :P

Thank you coldplayisawesome. That's kind of a weird username by the way. Does t mean something? How do you know they are awesome? Are you one of those people who has met them because I would just die if I talked to someone on a message baord who had actually talked to one of them in person. I have written an entire sotry out but I am not sure how much it is apporpriate to post. Do you wait tuntil you get a certain amount of comments or do you just posrt at will and what happens of no one comments? Does that mean they don't like your story and want you to stop writing. I know it is a lot of questions but I just want to make sure that I do everything right. Everyone here seems so intelligent and so polished and my work is sort of rought and down in the dirt.

:mebeingadouchebag:

Thank you coldplayisawesome. That's kind of a weird username by the way. Does t mean something? How do you know they are awesome? Are you one of those people who has met them because I would just die if I talked to someone on a message baord who had actually talked to one of them in person. I have written an entire sotry out but I am not sure how much it is apporpriate to post. Do you wait tuntil you get a certain amount of comments or do you just posrt at will and what happens of no one comments? Does that mean they don't like your story and want you to stop writing. I know it is a lot of questions but I just want to make sure that I do everything right. Everyone here seems so intelligent and so polished and my work is sort of rought and down in the dirt.

 

i know it because i am the most intelligent person in the world and everything i say is fact. :awesome: :uhoh:

and also, how could anyone even suggest they're not awesome? :P

(but sadly i have not ever met any of them :disappointed:)

also also :P i am Brooke, by the way. :nice:

 

personally, i tend to get impatient and post what i've written as soon as i can. :P

you could certainly post more of yours very soon, if you like. :wink3::bomb:

as for the comment thing, most of the people who visit these threads comment on the stories, so you don't have to worry. and i think your writing is fine. :)

Brooke is a strange name for a person isn't it? I have only heard of one other person named Brooke and that was a guy. He was a singer way back in the 1960's/ Not that I remember the 1960's. Or anything I mean, I was am not nearly that old. But my mom used to listen to him because well she is old. But it is a nice name anyway. And I will post a bit more in a few minutes. The next chapter is not very long but it is a little sexier than the first one.

:awesome:

and hey, i didn't pick the name, my parents did. :P

Brooke, are you so blind? :awesome:

 

Why is he asking.. such questions..

i'm not blind, i'm kind. they rhyme, but they are two different things. :P

 

 

@Hustler- :lol: great last line :P

OMGG I LOVE RHYMES.

me too! :blush:

 

hmm, i haven't written a poem in a while... :thinking:

Ok, I usually post reviews everyday, but I haven't the last few. Sorry everyone! :heart:

The Last Place: Oooooooooooooooooo!! I'm soooooo excited 'bout this. It's making me shake with excitement. You've no idea.Goddamn it Chris, find Jonny! Go give 'im a great, big smothering snog!

The Younger Years: Nawww. Cute. :kiss: Very cute. What's a kiss between friends? Ha! Love it. So adorable how Chris slept next to Jonny and he didn't know it. Nawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :heart:

Homecoming: EEEEEEEEEEE!! Can't wait for more. Chris and Jonny. Awww!

EFFYOU: :wink3:. :laugh3:. That is all.

 

*Sighs*. I miss talking to everyone. I hate being online when no one else is. And I also hate getting up in the morning to see I've just missed everyone by like ten minutes!

Alone?: scary :uhoh:

and poor Chris :cry:

Animals: ooooh, this story is very interesting! :wideeyed:

I guess I'm pretty late :\

 

but I just read White Lips Kissed.

Very very well written!:shocked2: But I was disappointed with the story setting :thinking: :(

 

I liked the murder story/mystery thing going on :D That was really intense action :P

But I disliked the "love" between Guy & Chris. I found that rather awkward :confused: :inquisitive: sorry

 

But that's just me I guess :) I didn't like that sexuality there between Guy & Chris but the story was really well written and made me root for the protagonist :lol:

Okay then...........well, thanks I guess.

I'm not really sure what you mean by sexuality. There was no sexuality in that story at all.

White Lips Kissed: gaaaaaah! That was such a good ending. You go, Guy!

Thanks Jackie:)

 

The Younger Years: Oooooooooooooooh:wacky: I can't wait to see Chris's reaction to Jonny's comment!:wink3:

The Meeting: Nice work so far:)

Three Little Words: I like this whole teacher idea:)

Violet Hill: Beautifully written:heart:

Homecoming: This is so well written. Really nice work:)

Alone?: Creepy....I am both eager and not eager to find out what Chris saw:uhoh:

 

 

 

 

Okay, I have a statement to make here. I think everyone needs to realize something about writing stories. Now I suppose I can't speak for everyone else, but I can say that I myself don't have any desire to read a story that is all crude sex. Every story doesn't need to have sex scene, or even an intimate scene. And honestly if you write soemthing like that it just sounds forced. If any of you are ever considering writing a sexy scene, use Dianna as an example. Her stories are sometimes graphic but surrounding those scenes is an actual story with an actual plot. And the scenes are always described in a beautiful, loving way. I really have no desire to read stories that describe it any other way. And that means saying things like "the best sex they ever had" or feeling the need to describe a sex scene every other chapter. If you write like that, I am not going to be interested.

 

I'm sorry for being harsh, but I just don't want this thread turning into a screenplay for a porno. I don't mind sexy scenes in stories. Just please don't overdo it, because it honestly just looks tacky and doesn't give a very good impression of what we do here on these two threads.

 

I love you all:heart:

yes, yes, my dear katie friend, i quite agree with you.

Okay then...........well, thanks I guess.

I'm not really sure what you mean by sexuality. There was no sexuality in that story at all.

 

Thanks Jackie:)

 

The Younger Years: Oooooooooooooooh:wacky: I can't wait to see Chris's reaction to Jonny's comment!:wink3:

The Meeting: Nice work so far:)

Three Little Words: I like this whole teacher idea:)

Violet Hill: Beautifully written:heart:

Homecoming: This is so well written. Really nice work:)

Alone?: Creepy....I am both eager and not eager to find out what Chris saw:uhoh:

 

 

 

 

Okay, I have a statement to make here. I think everyone needs to realize something about writing stories. Now I suppose I can't speak for everyone else, but I can say that I myself don't have any desire to read a story that is all crude sex. Every story doesn't need to have sex scene, or even an intimate scene. And honestly if you write soemthing like that it just sounds forced. If any of you are ever considering writing a sexy scene, use Dianna as an example. Her stories are sometimes graphic but surrounding those scenes is an actual story with an actual plot. And the scenes are always described in a beautiful, loving way. I really have no desire to read stories that describe it any other way. And that means saying things like "the best sex they ever had" or feeling the need to describe a sex scene every other chapter. If you write like that, I am not going to be interested.

 

I'm sorry for being harsh, but I just don't want this thread turning into a screenplay for a porno. I don't mind sexy scenes in stories. Just please don't overdo it, because it honestly just looks tacky and doesn't give a very good impression of what we do here on these two threads.

 

I love you all:heart:[/QU

 

 

 

 

 

 

:embarrassed: I can't write like Dianna:embarrassed: now I don't wanna incorporate any kind of :wink3: in my stories, I don't want to come off like a creepy sex writer:embarrassed:Help............. I suck:thinking:

@Mia I don't have a problem with :wink3: stuff in stories. As long as it isn't all the time, okay?:) That's what I mean when I say you should write like Dianna. Just let the sexy scenes be a part of the plot, instead of being the entire plot, if that makes sense. I am not saying you did anything wrong, I just felt like I should give a reminder.

I agree too. I think it's important to have a plot going in a story.

I don't mind the occasional sexy scence either, but not every chapter.

I hope I don't sound like a hypocrite. :heart:

@Mia I don't have a problem with :wink3: stuff in stories. As long as it isn't all the time, okay?:) That's what I mean when I say you should write like Dianna. Just let the sexy scenes be a part of the plot, instead of being the entire plot, if that makes sense. I am not saying you did anything wrong, I just felt like I should give a reminder.

 

 

Thank-You, now I am running off to re-read my fic to see if I had an actual plot:D

I really do understand what you mean and appreciate it:kiss:

Haha well maybe you do sound a bit like a hypocrite:P

But I think that isn't a difficult thing to fix for you, because honestly you seem to have some great plot ideas.