May 14, 201016 yr Sorry for my little leave of absence. I needed some time to recharge (i'm secretly a robot, shh don't tell) I will get to reviewing a bit later on. Thanks for all the comments about my stories, yall are seriously some of the best people I know and if wasn't for yall I would probably be out punching some kid over spilt juice. Hugs and Kisses around!!
May 14, 201016 yr The last place: Well...at least they're together. And that seems like an easy mission, if we're talking about Chrissy :wacky:
May 14, 201016 yr Kimberly-- Where ever you have been, I want to go there. This story of yours is ----- I can't even find words in the English language. But I will try--- FANTASTIC--INTELLIGENT-SWEET-THOUGHTFUL-BRILLIANT--STUPENDOUS--MAGICAL-UNTOUCHABLE I freaked when I read about James Doolittle. And you knew so much about the actual events!! God I love this freaking story. I love the setting. I love the time period. I love EVERYTHING. I will nominate this story for Best Will Story in a heartbeat. Unless someone beats me to it. And for some other awards too.;) Oh and I don't mean to forget to tell you that this story was so well-written too. The descriptions. The emotions!!:kiss: haha you don't need to nominate me for anything just yet, we still got another month for somebody elses brilliant to come out! But thanks and I wrote this story about a month ago so it wasn't in some far out there place :D Would you really punch someone over juice? Me I'd just pour it on their heads...:P only apple juice. everything else is a whole other story.:sneaky: Pink Paper Planes:[/b] Aghh! This is amazing! It was sweet and lovely and beautiful and so well written! You know I love historic stuff. And I love anything even remotely involving WWII almost half as much as Dianna does. Thank you for writing this!:D oh geez thanks! I love history as well and WWII is one of my favorite historic events, not for the loss of life of course, but for everything else. Pink Paper Planes: this was such a wonderful story! :heart: Thanks a lot!! :hug: Pink Paper Planes:[/b] YAY HISTORY! :awesome: This was sad though:( But amazing may I add! I love WIll's parents! I tried to base Will's parents off how I would want to act when I had children, not that is guaranteed at all!! haha Pink paper planes: Really sad ending..but such a lovely story :wacky: Sorry for the sadness, it just came that way.
May 14, 201016 yr So I feel that when I read these it's always praise which is awesome, but sometimes it's nice to have a bit of constructive criticism so I welcome that on my stories!! Be brutally honest! If you didn't like it say so, if you feel there is some way for me to improve then let me know, and if you really did like it then yay! So go and rip my stories apart cause thats what I want! :D Okay that's done now on to my reviews!! Three Little Words: How different is this story! I enjoy reading stories aren't the same plot!! Should be good!! Alone?: uhh who's there?? Creepy!:shifty: The Meeting: hmm I like naughty dreams:mellow: hehe Violet Hill: How lovely, wonderful descriptions Anna, just enchanting Homecoming: I don't think I have read something like this, It's like a sample of a tasty chocolate and the sellers know that your gonna want to by it. The Fall: I'm so so so relieved that what I thought was going to happen to Danielle didn't. This story was so captivating and full of deep emotion. Dianna obviously knows how to lay that on thick!! Thick is good ;) Animals: At first I laughing at the thought of Chris with a Unicorn tattoo cause, last year when I was working for the YMCA we take the kids to the pool and this lady was just sitting there and covering her entire back was this massive unicorn tattoo, but anyways I like how it was Chris just being Chris and him holding on to something magical. But then your story went further and it was just hypnotizing and so fresh and original! Charlie the Unicorn has nothin' on this!! Will's Secret Plot: hahahaha this was epic!! Guy with blonde hair!! That I would love to see, and it would be soo true that we would kill him for that hot mess. Great job with this Katie!! The Last Place: Holy packages tied with string!! Having worked with cadavers the smell is like nothing eles!! You described it to a T!! So glad that they got out of that hell hole!
May 14, 201016 yr Thank-You for all the Kindness, and I also would like to know if anyone doesn't like anything, so I can work on it, that said The Meeting continues in about an hour. I Love Alone... This is spooky, and very interesting!:) Violet Hill was extreemly well written:) The Last Place: I really find this story captivating and wanting more:) Some of these fics you girls talk about??? Where are they??? I have looked and can't find them:( 3 Little Words: Cool story, I can picture them as teachers, how hot to have them as teachers, I'd behave!!! Homecoming: This was the sweetest, LOved it!!! Will's secret Plot: Funny as Hell!!! 2 snaps up!!! Pink Paper Planes: Aw this is incredible, had me from the first paragraph!!
May 14, 201016 yr Some of these fics you girls talk about??? Where are they??? I have looked and can't find them:( they are probably the ones on dianna's blogs, all of which can be found here: http://www.blogger.com/profile/12547075148104568828 :nice: so, Animals is probably one of my favorite stories ever. :wacky: it's so sad to see it end :cry: but it was sooooo wonderful and lovely. :wacky:
May 14, 201016 yr Okay I haven't read Animlas yet and I don't know how much time I have yet... I will get to reading it and I'll be reviewing when I'm done with practising guitar. ANYWAYS, Brooke. I love you. And your story but, I love you more. I love your writing. I love your plots. I love you.
May 14, 201016 yr Dianna that was so magical and beautiful and unique! Yay magic and yay BuMabies!!!!!!! :awesome: This story was so peaceful and so comforting to read. Pure beauty! :heart:
May 14, 201016 yr ANYWAYS, Brooke. I love you. And your story but, I love you more. I love your writing. I love your plots. I love you. :blush::heart: just for that i will post the last part of The Last Place :P
May 14, 201016 yr OMG. Brooke. The Last Place. :stunned: I was so freaked out when Chris walked into that morgue place. *shivers* You're so brilliant! :hug: Can't wait to read the last part.
May 14, 201016 yr I cried. I cried my heart out through-out this entire story. I bawled my eyes out. That was so sad, frightnening and beautiful. The Last Place was just.... Wow. I loved it. I enjoyed re-reading it and trying to predict the next chapters before you would post. I was just wowed by it.
May 14, 201016 yr The Meeting: So unique still! I hope Jon leaves David soon! EDIT: Okay... Kimberly you want critism I'll give you it!. You always misspell minute as "minuet".
May 15, 201016 yr ^ haha yay thanks I'll try and fix that!! Wanna know a secret? I always misspell that word along with pretty much every other word, I'm an awful speller! My mom tells me that everyday haha The Last Place: awwww that was lovely brooke, one of your best!! The Meeting: oh. well this is good!! I'm very excited about your last chapter! Chasing: This makes me giddy and you only have one chapter finished.. grrr
May 15, 201016 yr The last place: Excelent final chapter :wacky: The meeting: "I thought so, goodnight Chris"!?!??!! what the hell was that!?!? noooo Joonnyyy!!! :bigcry:
May 15, 201016 yr Will's Secret Plot: hahahaha this was epic!! Guy with blonde hair!! That I would love to see, and it would be soo true that we would kill him for that hot mess. Great job with this Katie!! Will's secret Plot: Funny as Hell!!! 2 snaps up!!! Thank you for the lovely comments:blush: The Meeting: Jonny, I hope you do something with that knowledge!:whip: Chasing: I am so drawn into this story already that when I saw there was only two chapters so far I yelled at my computer screen. I can honestly say that I don't know what it is Will and Guy do. I am eager to find out. More please!!!!!!!!!!
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