Simon7 Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 Hey guys! Looking for an aspiring musician Want to write a song about I am feeling as I want to get it of my mind! So just wondered if someone would like to help If you do just pm me? Any questions ask here ? Many thanks Simon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simon7 Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 I thought someone would have wanted this opertunity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jc90 Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 You're making this request at a time when Coldplay are in their 'off-season lull' and as a result, many posters are not active on the forums. Secondly, its hard to manufacture a good song in such an artificial way. Not impossible, but more difficult to produce a good product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted June 12, 2015 Share Posted June 12, 2015 i don't get it my friend. You'd like someone to write a song..for you? to you? on your behalf? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted June 12, 2015 Share Posted June 12, 2015 This whole thing would probably be a lot easier if you happened to be an attractive girl haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simon7 Posted June 12, 2015 Author Share Posted June 12, 2015 On my behalf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penelopeja Posted June 12, 2015 Share Posted June 12, 2015 I'm happy to help out. I enjoy writing so send me a PM if you like we can see if we can get something worked out for you. No money back guarantees but 'I will do my best'....lol.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxwatcher Posted June 21, 2015 Share Posted June 21, 2015 I am a composer and can try to help you write something. I could use a creative change instead of writing for myself all the time :P Here's my soundcloud in case you want to hear the variety of things I've worked on. It also has links to YouTube and Facebook. https://soundcloud.com/theescapist1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted June 23, 2015 Share Posted June 23, 2015 i'm gonna go write a song for you man. it might be the worst thing ever, but we'll see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myl_oxyl_oto Posted June 28, 2015 Share Posted June 28, 2015 I'd like to help out with the writing, if possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 Charlie, will you write one for me, pls? I'm picky though. I might put some song lyrics on here some time, because living in Canada means that I have automatic copyright protection under domestic laws. So by being the first to publish it thru some medium (this site is included, ...I'm assuming), I'm less likely to get burned than I would be by generating stuff 'blindly' (sending it out privately and unsolicited). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted July 11, 2015 Share Posted July 11, 2015 yeah, put up some lyrics! That would definitely get the ball rolling for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 12, 2015 Share Posted July 12, 2015 Charlie: I wrote (or started) a cool song called "You've Really Done it, Now". It's funny and it's pretty good but I have to edit it a bit before posting. While I was writing, a fireworks display was going on and there was a live band in the distance playing 60's classics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted July 12, 2015 Share Posted July 12, 2015 I like the title. It has energy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 I'd be willing to throw something up for ya. What's on your mind? He's mine Lax :P If only you guys knew the forum we were on. We have an "Attic" for songwriters. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 Charlie: You've (Really) Done it Now You've done it now, you showed your stuff Now you've really built me up Now I'm taller than the highest building how will I find which room you're in? If I can leap there in just a few bounds,.. What will you do if I can't slow down? If you shine your eyes like a waving wand What if it makes me a statue of bronze Or just the most beautiful girl (man) in the world How will you ever find the words To talk to me, to get the nerve To walk with me , If you've really done it, done it now If I leap my way to you in just a few bounds what will you do when I can't slow down You've really done it, done it now And isn't it sad that we had to say, "And to think we're just human beings". If I sing your songs will they ever believe I've never dated Sophocles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 Here's part two: (You've Really Done it Now) Now you've done it, done it now What if this feeling's bigger than love What if it's tossing a rose at an elf Who can't catch without crushing herself I'll build you up so much, you'll see We'll both be huge, heads in the trees With heads in the clouds, can't make it down And what if the song starts drawing crowds If I can't stop singing the light into dark And the song rings out like a meadowlark How will you know my voice from the birds' and whatever you do, you can't catch the words And what if God starts singing it too And says "Go, .. write it down now" Or will he say, "You've done it, clown" And throw us down,like it's all too much But it's all cool So we'll all keep in touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 Spidey-Man: I guess I don't live in the attic! Are you trying to say there's such a forum listed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 Charlie: Feel free to re-arrange because I didn't get the rhyme&meter perfect as you might have noticed :) I have a new song in reserve that's in more of a rock format but I just posted the funny poem instead. It has some good concepts, I thought. But the lines could be shortened or re-arranged. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spider-Man Posted July 13, 2015 Share Posted July 13, 2015 Spidey-Man: I guess I don't live in the attic! Are you trying to say there's such a forum listed? ;) http://coldplayers.boards.net/ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 S: Thanks for the look-up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 Lax: some of your work sounds like Spencer Nilsen (sort of meditative)but I really like "Stormy Night" and "Dangerous Expedition". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxwatcher Posted July 14, 2015 Share Posted July 14, 2015 Thanks for listening :) I haven't really heard Spencer's music, so I should look it up now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherrymoroder Posted July 15, 2015 Share Posted July 15, 2015 Lax 1)I was surprised to learn that he's ahead of the program to keep music courses in schools (for American children). Its' good to see an electro-musician who is so respected. 2)I used to own a copy of the Ecco/Dolphin soundtrack and it sounds like some of your work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie17 Posted July 23, 2015 Share Posted July 23, 2015 Sherry: I missed this somehow. I love it. Yeah i'd probably end up adjusting some phrasing here or there but i really like it. I'm gonna give it a try. Could end up being the worst thing ever but if that's the worst that could happen, i think we're gonna be ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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