I loved Don't leave me It was sad....but it was great. They're coming on well. I write stories too.....but I never have time to finish them :rolleyes:

Irene, I'm putting your Shores on my blog because I like it too much and I dont care if anyone tries to stop me... :evil:

You evil you :P Nooo, it's great! I really appreciate you thinking my poem worth putting up on your blog, so a bow to you *bows* :)

Irene, I missed you around here. Good to see ya

:kiss: :kiss:

I missed you too! *hugs you in a very squashing manner*

:blush: :blush: Thanks Irene. I will commence with doing the same now to you :kiss: :kiss:

*feels flat but happy with the big Aaron-hug*

 

I'm gonna post an old poem of mine. See what you think of it :kiss:

:lips:

Sounds good ;)

Warchild

 

Hide-and-seek and let's play tag

The children having fun

People laughing, birds they sing

And flowers in the sun

Little girl, empty the sea

and when you're hurt, then come to me

Happy, take your time...

 

Firearms and flying bombs

And children with a gun

People screaming, fires roar

The black clouds killed the sun

Little girl, they killed them all

No-one to hug you when you fall

You're all alone now.

Wow Irene. That is really awesome. The last stanza is powerful.

Thanks :kiss: I've gotta go off to shower, unpack an bed now. I'll see you, dear. Goodnight :kiss:

Take care Irene, and welcome back :kiss:

That is really amazing :o good work.

Don't leave me

 

Lying on the dried-out grass

In your arms, away from all of this

You'd love me, and with a tender kiss

Make all my problems pass

 

But meanwhile, my soul burns up

It's all a dream, will never be

I want to make it go, just stop

Cause your blue eyes are all I can see

 

And inside of me, I ran and ran

And the memory of you would vaguely float away

Till I would not remember you, but your eyes and voice will stay

And above the raging storm of my disordered mind

They shout at me for who I am, and crave to let me find

You within these barren planes,

To find myself again

 

I don't like it.

 

 

 

or don't I have any reason for that?

Maybe you do have a reason. You tell me.

That Warchild one was very very good. ;)

Thanks.

Nothing new?

No.

i liked a lot Warchild ;)

 

Very good writings Irene :cool:

Thanks Ari :)

when you started writing?

 

i mean how old where you when you wrote your first poem/story/play...?

 

do you keep your first writing?

 

:)

My first poem...guess when I was about 7 or eight or something? First story around that age too.

But my first real poetry came when I was like 14 or 15.

hey that's very good ;)

do have you published anything? :) I mean on a magazine.

Nope. Have you?