RJ Fox Posted August 18, 2005 Share Posted August 18, 2005 I loved Don't leave me It was sad....but it was great. They're coming on well. I write stories too.....but I never have time to finish them :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingtoseehere Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Irene, I'm putting your Shores on my blog because I like it too much and I dont care if anyone tries to stop me... :evil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 You evil you :P Nooo, it's great! I really appreciate you thinking my poem worth putting up on your blog, so a bow to you *bows* :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Irene, I missed you around here. Good to see ya :kiss: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 I missed you too! *hugs you in a very squashing manner* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 :blush: :blush: Thanks Irene. I will commence with doing the same now to you :kiss: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 *feels flat but happy with the big Aaron-hug* I'm gonna post an old poem of mine. See what you think of it :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 :lips: Sounds good ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 Warchild Hide-and-seek and let's play tag The children having fun People laughing, birds they sing And flowers in the sun Little girl, empty the sea and when you're hurt, then come to me Happy, take your time... Firearms and flying bombs And children with a gun People screaming, fires roar The black clouds killed the sun Little girl, they killed them all No-one to hug you when you fall You're all alone now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Wow Irene. That is really awesome. The last stanza is powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 19, 2005 Author Share Posted August 19, 2005 Thanks :kiss: I've gotta go off to shower, unpack an bed now. I'll see you, dear. Goodnight :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colduser Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Take care Irene, and welcome back :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 That is really amazing :o good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eline. Posted August 19, 2005 Share Posted August 19, 2005 Don't leave me Lying on the dried-out grass In your arms, away from all of this You'd love me, and with a tender kiss Make all my problems pass But meanwhile, my soul burns up It's all a dream, will never be I want to make it go, just stop Cause your blue eyes are all I can see And inside of me, I ran and ran And the memory of you would vaguely float away Till I would not remember you, but your eyes and voice will stay And above the raging storm of my disordered mind They shout at me for who I am, and crave to let me find You within these barren planes, To find myself again I don't like it. or don't I have any reason for that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 Maybe you do have a reason. You tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burningmonk Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 That Warchild one was very very good. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burningmonk Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 Nothing new? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 i liked a lot Warchild ;) Very good writings Irene :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 Thanks Ari :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 when you started writing? i mean how old where you when you wrote your first poem/story/play...? do you keep your first writing? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 My first poem...guess when I was about 7 or eight or something? First story around that age too. But my first real poetry came when I was like 14 or 15. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted August 20, 2005 Share Posted August 20, 2005 hey that's very good ;) do have you published anything? :) I mean on a magazine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ireentje Posted August 20, 2005 Author Share Posted August 20, 2005 Nope. Have you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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