janhaw Posted November 2, 2006 Share Posted November 2, 2006 Mike and Miro; the poems are great, really. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted November 2, 2006 Share Posted November 2, 2006 ^ Hvala :nice: Ti pises? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 Mike and Miro; the poems are great' date=' really. :)[/quote'] Thx a lot Jan!! ok, this is a new one... It's called What I feel for you. The night's slowly coming Time to dream, I'm flying Where you are, through the dark I knock at your heart's door. Open your mind to me I'm going to tell you, honey, How my love shines for you What I feel for you. Let me enter your heart Let my voice echoe like a deep whisper Don't ay anything and carry on dreaming I'll haunt you like you're haunting me. Open your mind to me I'm going to tell you, honey, That I'm so in love with you This is what I feel for you. My soul is leaning next to you You feel like a presence nearby you You hug the pillow, it's like hugging my heart I tell you my love, you give me your warmth. I put my hand on your cheek A slight shiver travels on your soft skin You open your eyes, you look at me Attracted by their glow, you get me. Open your mind to me I'll be the moon of your dreams Can you feel my love's streams This is what I feel for you, honey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 Poem called 'Luke' :heart: I'll waste my energy I'll fall asleep I opened a door to another dimension I fell, so deep Standing on a almost breaking bridge Sun shines on my skin I saw you comin' I'll let you in 1 thought 2 people 3 words A kiss Idiot Mike, I should be dreaming this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 ^ Hvala :nice: Ti pises? Da, evo ti moj blog...;) himmelreich.blog.hr And something on french...A friend of mine wrote this: Non, je ne regrette rien Enchanteur des reves dit moi Pourquoi musique muete Est mon occupant Dessous le soleil? La substance de la vie est seulement Une blessure superficiele Dans le joue de la terre Qui nous étouffe Bouscule-moi, enchanteur, Immaculé illusioniste, illicitement Comme l'eau bouscule les rayons Comme je refuse soi Pécheurs pleurent des larmes De la penitence, et moi? Non, mon enchanteur, Je mérite seulement la léthargie... Pourquoi sommes-nous les gens? Le ciel nous regarde, mais nous ne sommes pas les individus célestes...Nous ne sommes pas les enfants de la terre, mais nous sommes son enfantil rire...Nous sommes son douloureux pleur...Non, je ne regrette rien... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 Wow! Great one Jan! You speak/write French very well!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 3, 2006 Share Posted November 3, 2006 Non, c´est pas moi. ;) Ma amie. :) I am speaking french, but the thing is, i forgot many.... But the friend of mine is great, yes. She is writing poetry on croatian and french. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted November 4, 2006 Share Posted November 4, 2006 ^ Wow. Ono si ti napisao na svom blogu...? Mocno i mracno OBOZAVAM IH (Posebno Odluku) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 ^ Wow. Ono si ti napisao na svom blogu...? Mocno i mracno OBOZAVAM IH (Posebno Odluku) Hvala ti. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 Well, ppl, I've posted my last poem here. Take care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 ALL SHALL FADE Home is behind The world ahead And there are many paths to tread Through shadow To the edge of night Until the stars are all alight There is no answer For this question There is no reason For destruction Through shadow To the edge of night Until the stars are all alight Mist and shadow Cloud and shade All shall fade Lord of the Rings, hehe. Nice...:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 Thx a lot Jan!! ok, this is a new one... It's called What I feel for you. The night's slowly coming Time to dream, I'm flying Where you are, through the dark I knock at your heart's door. Open your mind to me I'm going to tell you, honey, How my love shines for you What I feel for you. Let me enter your heart Let my voice echoed like a deep whisper Don't ay anything and carry on dreaming I'll haunt you like you're haunting me. Open your mind to me I'm going to tell you, honey, That I'm so in love with you This is what I feel for you. My soul is leaning next to you You feel like a presence nearby you You hug the pillow, it's like hugging my heart I tell you my love, you give me your warmth. I put my hand on your cheek A slight shiver travels on your soft skin You open your eyes, you look at me Attracted by their glow, you get me. Open your mind to me I'll be the oon of your dreams Can you feel my love's streams This is what I feel for you, honey. I like this one very much. The poem is soft like yellow autumn leafs. Great, Mike. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 Untitled 7 You know When the skies cry When smiles die There must be a hidden reason My feelings reflect the faces of any season You knew When I draw the line I thought it was all, fine I was wrong Played a shamefull song You thought So this is it And I felt that My heart was frozen solid I knew that the person I used to be With the bad and mean personality Was coming I refused to let her But she did Did you know That the last time that we spoke The glass I thought I didn't have Broke? This is the end, this is it The last sentence of this poem will have her dot You thought wrong about me I liked many things about you, a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted November 7, 2006 Share Posted November 7, 2006 ^ OMG, Elsje... Wonderful :nice: But dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 ^^I love it Elsje. It means a lot for me. :kiss: Here a new one... I was like dry of ideas, these last days... Fortunately, I've always a little idea, still here like a star which could guide me... Anyway, it's called Intensity. My love, I see you beside me, The touch of your bare skin against mine Makes me shiver, up and down through my spine. We're leaving, there isn't any wall. Slowly, your chest rises and falls, Your heart is like playing drums, I start to get each of its rhythms Through the dark, I hear your soft voice, I feel like a guitar you gently strum. With a lovely strength, I'm trapped by your arms I'm melting, under the comfortable warmth You're spreading, I feel the subtle taste of your lips The wet noises of your wonderful kisses, You whisper your love to my ears, Quietly, we're diving into the sea. Under the moon, your eyes are swallowing me I'm drowning myself there, I don't wanna stop, I don't wanna be anywhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 ^ Soft perverted yet very beautiful! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 Today's Frustration How to start a conversation For instance Talk about me? No thank you Acknowledge my existance Don't underestimate me Don't try to catch my shadow If I want to I'll keep my head low How to trust people When they say 'what's bothering you' The next thing I know They despite me sayin ; you talk to much about yourself They don't know what I'm about to go through 'How do you feel?', that is the question Don't expect an answer of me Remember, what I'm about to tell you Hidden face Is different than what you see What's the definition of friends? When do you know when someone is your friend? Can you see when it's real or it's one to pretend? Will I ever know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 Another one that I made earlier but never posted. Black / Whited Picture I was the picture You once drew You gave me all kinds of colours Now you're simply free And I'm sinking into sadly blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Byron369 Posted November 12, 2006 Share Posted November 12, 2006 Another one that I made earlier but never posted. Black / Whited Picture I was the picture You once drew You gave me all kinds of colours Now you're simply free And I'm sinking into sadly blue Wonderful =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FluMTonks Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 Of course the time has come for me to say, Years of pain and toil for no reason You took m y might sword of youth from me And swung, bathing me in the whispers of Your hate, your fire breath devouring Everything in its path including my Soul, as you say not to panic and things Will be all right, even though you know of The sorrow you caused venomous and cruel. As I lay in this casket before you Telling you the sorrows I faced because Of the path you chose to lead, thinking I Was a fool when really I saw through your Every move of sheer idiocy, Every step every breath thought by You to be clever and secretive plans. The first night you betrayed the vow of us, The first night you chose against our love vows, The first night you took by my heart and cracked it, Was the night of remembrance from when you Spent your power in agony with the Only thing I loved more than you, the thing You bore from your own body, the thing that Was created as we joined mind, body, spirit, Together in what I though was pure love. This I did not understand - did not the guilt Of our child haunt you and you laid in the Arms of another? The candles blown out Hours before your cheating endeavor? The second night was yet another day Of remembrance - the day your said your vows, The day we remember the vows that we Supposedly said full with loving Care and an attitude that we would be with Each other forever. I kept my deal, You did not - and soiled the very right god had Given to us, blessed us with wrapping his Holy arms around our married shoulders. Then came the third, the forth, the fifth, the sixth, Each as obvious as the last, each one Of your betrayals cracking me a Bit more until there was none left to break. As you all call me a fool for staying By her side, I ask you do you know What I did behind her back? As I speak From the dead making your minds swim with thought, I am not the hoodwink you all took me To be in my marriage. You probably Do not even know my real name given To me at birth by the parents you thought You met - when in reality are dead. You cracked my heart and I murdered behind Your back all those you were close to your heart, You cracked I killed you kissed I sliced you lied I smashed you hugged I crushed and loved every Second of releasing tortured soul. I lived life on two frontiers of two worlds Different as black from white leading me To the conclusion, I hate you all and Wish I never protected you, took you Under my wing, gave shelter, treated your Soul with kindness. I killed your brothers cousins, uncles, sisters one by one. I felt their think blood in between my calm Fingers as I rejoiced in my revenge. You cheated adn I killed but who came out in the end? I did - I win - I always Win no matter what the game we play is. Grieve your family's death and hate mine as I have won our little game, for forever I am in your thoughts for generations To come. I have scarred you forever, you Are mine and will never be taken from the Thought I have created and harvested. Kind of long... and a bit dark... sorry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 ^oh wow, absolutely stunning!!! Tough moments, lately... betrayal...omg... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 I finish to write my last one few mins ago. This is a love poem. I can't get enough of love... :D It took me much time to write it. I think it's a good one. Enjoy, guys! Anyway, it's called My Fellings My heart was begging for love I was like a lost child You came like the light Which's going through the fog. You're my sun, my moon which shines You brought me back to see the daylight So lovingly warmed I feel my heart Beating with so much intensity I wanna break the rules, really. Come on love, tell me what you feel Swipe away all my injuries Just lend me your soft shoulder Let my head resting there, to feel better. If I only could see How your eyes would be like... I guess they may be like the sea Beautiful, and as clear as the sky. There I could read What you're thinking. Come on love, tell me what you need I'll be here, I'll cure your injuries My heart will be the place Where you could rest in peace. I hear the whispers of my feelings They're willing to meet you I set them free, I let them flying Wherever you are, love, I need you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambergris Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 ^ Good one. This poem really touches me, but I didn't write it. Chemistry It doesn't take a Gypsy woman To gaze into the crystal ball and cry Aiiii! Aiiii! I see a landscape littered with emotional casualties Think only of cold water and Things which are ordered and solid But the red alert itself Quickens the mercury Chaotic patterns leap, shock! Disallowed dimensions Bang on the door Laughing cruelly at the melted crystal Demanding attention Dancing the deadly Tarantella Taran! Taran! Tarantella! http://www.e-poems.org/Chemistry.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambergris Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 This is very nice, also. Atoms Some people raise uncertainty To a principle As though we were nothing but atoms Atoms don't bleed It's not anticipation makes them breathless They expect nothing And so They've no need Some people say, Nature's dialectic As though she knew how else things could have been Nature doesn't choose She never bates her breath in expectation She's no need And so Nothing to lose http://www.e-poems.org/Chemistry.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyuu Posted November 19, 2006 Share Posted November 19, 2006 (Yeah a part of The Kooks but it's my version of it) So in your head and in your mind Something's very cold said And as I am and so it seems As I dream To see my 'pritch' on my own moviescreen Don't mumble I might say this I don't believe in love Too many hate Meant that I just freeze and you're just too late Oh if only if only I wonder I could have someone to live with Instead of giving the people that aren't dear to me a rude hit So there you are I can't help but stare My hands on your curly hair I couldn't know and You only kissed me twice If this is heaven if this might be fuck then it's a big slice Oh if only if only I wonder I could have someone to live with Instead of giving the people that aren't dear to me a rude hit Oh if only (I could have someone to live with) I wonder oh if only (I could have someone to be with) Oh if only if only (I wonder if you exist) The last time that I would be lonely (Someone to live with) Finally a piece that does fit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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