aw, well that's good :) I won't pry into your personal life by asking questions, but don't feel bad to open up because I would like to pretend that I'm not trying to pry into your life and do it anyway :uhoh:

Now you are rambling. :laugh4: Not to mention ; I always loved your poems though. :uhoh:

 

No that's okey, you don't have to know everything of my past but if you have questions, feel free to ask! :)

 

Latest poem, inspired by the deadline ; exams!

 

Peu Important

 

Everything feels heavy

Everything's on my shoulders

Without my shoulders to cry on

I got worries on my own

 

Being there for you

'You're being here for me'

Now that I ask for you

There's no one on the surface of the sea

 

Things happened

Time has passed

I don't know where my road goes

Nor ends

Time drives too fast

post 666 :devil:

Elsje that's really nice !!! :nice:

 

Ok, I'm not a good poet, but this is just a try :rolleyes:

 

 

The World

 

I could show you the world

We could live on our own

But you still wouldn't know

If you wanted more

 

Just of seeing your face

I could hardly guess

You don't want me to be

In this beautiful sea

 

It's the sea where we drown

When we don't even try

And it's the sea where we swim

When we believe we can.

 

So now tell me, what will I do?

If I can't even swim or drown with you

What will become of me?

Just don't tell me I'll be far away from you.

Wow, lovelight...It's nice :thumbsup:

 

Anyways, what's your real name?

great poems, everyone! :)

Lovelight, it's a nice try! really nice! Keep on writing!

Thanks guys! :D

btw, my name is Carolina.

I really liked your poems too.. so keep on posting new ones ;)

Actually Carol, I think the poem is nice bit a but simple, I'm sure you can do much better though!

 

Keep the poems coming!

Thanks Elsje! :) .. I'm not good at poems, but I'll keep on trying . :D

Well, Carolina...keep up the good work :wink:

Wow, I really like that one thinker! :)

You're in a band right?

 

Anywayz, new poem. It took me a lot of time to make this one, it had to be close to perfection.

This is a poem about someone that's far away from me but still very close. Important person.

So Mike, tribute to you. This is not the greatest poem in the world no, this is a tribute (to you). :P

 

Brother

 

Sunshine raised

Clouds burst

Common points created a mirror

A mirror where you could see

You equals me

 

Same passion for creativity

Similar past

Never give up your dreams, dear

Time will make them last

 

You're an unwritten bestseller

Your burden's trying to stop your ink from flowing

Someday, they have to let you go

Whenever, wherever, you're going!

Guys, your poems are so nice that I wanna write myself! :nice: Congratulations you all! :thumbsup:

Wow, I really like that one thinker! :)

You're in a band right?

 

Anywayz, new poem. It took me a lot of time to make this one, it had to be close to perfection.

This is a poem about someone that's far away from me but still very close. Important person.

So Mike, tribute to you. This is not the greatest poem in the world no, this is a tribute (to you). :P

 

Brother

 

Sunshine raised

Clouds burst

Common points created a mirror

A mirror where you could see

You equals me

 

Same passion for creativity

Similar past

Never give up your dreams, dear

Time will make them last

 

You're an unwritten bestseller

Your burden's trying to stop your ink from flowing

Someday, they have to let you go

Whenever, wherever, you're going!

 

 

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

Elsje, that's wow, reallly good, I love it!

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

:nice:

 

I like it, Elsje

Great poems everyone !!! :)

Elsje, your poetry is beautiful, I have nothing else to say, no other word to describe it. I've never really been on this thread before, probably my first time here, but wow your poems just leave me speechless, you seriously have talent! Good job :)

Elsje' date=' your poetry is beautiful, I have nothing else to say, no other word to describe it. I've never really been on this thread before, probably my first time here, but wow your poems just leave me speechless, you seriously have talent! Good job :)[/quote']

 

:blush: Thanks a lot! Seriously! :D :stunned:

I wrote that last one yesterday...

 

It's about love (awww... love... what a nice thing to write about )

 

It's called Upside Down

 

For you, I'll travel, ignoring the distance,

I know, honey, you are my chance,

My lovely and warm spark.

I'll climb the highest mountains,

To be with you, licking your pains,

Hearing your words burning my heart.

 

Under cold and white stars, that sky like ink

Under the frozen and pale moon who winks

Your body is like a beautiful and calm sea,

I hear regular rythms coming to my ears,

These waves on your skin, the tides of shivers,

Let me feel them, let them travelling to me, forever.

 

When I think of you, it snows while the sun shines,

All around the world seems to turn upside down,

You are the daylight, coming to scare the night

And you are the one who caught my sight,

My deep and warm feelings, my lonely heart.

Let's live our love, let's be together, apart.

I love it, Mike :happy:

 

/I was just reading some of yours older poems...and :stunned:

 

Hmm...I should post here a poem...it's been a while.

What do you mean by :stunned:?

lol

 

Well, another one, made yesterday...

 

Called My own Shadow.

 

Those loud voices in my head

Are screaming at me, are driving me mad,

Are telling me I'm mistaking,

That I didn'g get anything.

Trying to fight this, my head, my heart,

Both don't need that useless war.

 

That part of me, that part I'd like to erase, stays,

I always try to chase it away.

They are back, they are the doubts

Whoever I am, whatever I do

They would never let me go

They're such my own shadow.

ok, this is super hard to do..

 

(dream)

-My girlfriend and I ended up de-building graves

-debating, while we were wondering whether the war would end up being good and what would be won

-general patton sang a gay song so he was sure where we were

-carelessly mixing and draining concoctions in a kitchen sink she carried along past the pathway I took to the house

-she explained that the gay song was the last straw

-so she told me, in not very long a nuclear bomb will explode

-because the concoctions react to water, way far away down the drain

-then through the glass I saw two big blasts

-I turned to get away but the radiation vaporized tires on our car and my girlfriend and I were being arrested

 

I tried to make something that was semi-rhythmical or full of alliteration for my stupid happy joyful poetry class which is full of lollipops and buttons.. and I realized it's really. really hard, at least to write a long poem that has a lot of alliteration in it. we were supposed to record a dream, which is easy. I already recorded the dream and wrote it in a sort of poetry form, but making it sound interesting is hard. We have to read this out loud and it's not allowed to rhyme, so I'm having mucho trouble adding rhyme in places other than the end of lines and a little alliteration, etc. here's what I wrote before as a record of the dream:

 

(dream)

My girlfriend and I were slaves destroying old war graves, so they could be recycled

it was our job

a military general sang the name and number of the grave we worked on and we were to reply so that he knew where we were

it was kind of a gay song

she was digging from the inside of her grave

we were talking, but then I couldn't see her, so then I got the hammer and just started pounding on random graves to crack them all

as I walked along a path, the wall of graves became pictures which made them more enjoyable to smash.

I got too excited

then we had a break, my girlfriend walked past me, deeper

she went inside a house, pouring some concoctions down the kitchen sink

she said it was two nuclear bombs, and she was tired of the digging.

as soon as the water reached her concoctions, a few miles away the bombs would explode.

she poured too fast, I couldn't stop to ask, "what?"

a second later, two cars/cities exploded

I turned around and tried to find a getaway for us because of the radiation

it was dangerous

but finally, I would live with her, and we would run from the governments

but then I turned around and the rubber tires on our car melted from the radiation, and...

I turned around again and she was being arrested, we were surrounded

Like a dream behind the wall,

my voice dies without the sound.

 

In my eyes a strange death lives,

nobody knows why.

 

My hands are still on the ground.

Oh, Jan, svida mi se :nice:

"Jednostavna" a tako "nejednostavna" :D

Tuzna...ali super

 

My turn :P

 

 

MAN ON THE SURFACE

Long fingers,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Sad eyes,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Arm hairs,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Wounds on the face,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Ugly smile,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Unnecessary words,

Maybe 'cause of it.

Incorrigible future,

Maybe 'cause of it.

 

And maybe 'cause of the handwriting

Maybe 'cause of selflessness

Maybe 'cause of hermetism,

Insensitivity,

Insecurity,

Inadequacy,

Impossibility,

Maybe 'cause of complexity.

 

Short hair

Circle-size

Maybe 'cause of it.

I am restrained.

Maybe 'cause of it I hate

Like a dream behind the wall,

my voice dies without the sound.

 

In my eyes a strange death lives,

nobody knows why.

 

My hands are still on the ground.

 

:stunned: Stunning!