ClearAsCrystal Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 oh god! i hope for your sake that when you open the door it's her! :laugh2: ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 I really wish she'd be there!behind the door...oh my god!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Thx!!!!!!^ Ohhhh! My god...I'M IN LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVE:heart: :heart: :heart: luv who??? :shocked2: btw i like that poem 2, its sooo deep:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 ^^tough question!!!!I don't know her name...:cry: but I'm ready to tell her what i feel when I'll see her!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 ^^tough question!!!!I don't know her name...:cry: but I'm ready to tell her what i feel when I'll see her!!!u dont???:( okay, good luck, :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 oh thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 no prob :thumbsup: :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 WARNING!!! I'm in an advanced state of madness... Here, you have my first poem about our dear 4 guys... Don't be amazed....I thought it would happen... called 4 guys All the values that you spread Through what you say Go in our little hearts All what you do is an art. You, the four wonderful guys You make everyone's heart shine You put upon everyone's face a smile. You're four bright guys You're what we expected in our lives You make us all dive In your world, in your lives. You, the four wonderful guys You make everyone's heart shine You put upon everyone's face a smile. Everywhere you are, you bring hope Please, oh yeah! Please don't stop! For us, you're on the top! You got us under your control! You, the four wonderful guys You make everyone's heart shine You put upon everyone's face a smile. Oh guys! We love you everyday We're always Thinking of you since you're on our ways You're the best thing ever on the Earth 'Cos, you, the four, you're Coldplay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 sweet! :D that one was an awesome tribute to Coldplay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 ^oh thx sweetie!!!!:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 :kiss: I am really enjoying the poetry so far... keep posting. *edit..i think i will post another of mine :sneaky: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 ^okay!I'll follow your advice! you should!I'd like to read yours... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 oh!!!true love...I'm looking at you!!! called When My heart was floating on the water You were sitting near the river, Then you saw it, you shivered And you caught it in your hands. You filled my heart with love You hit my soul with one of your arrows Then, you drew me in a brushstoke And you flew away like a dove. When I see your beautiful face It makes me feel so at peace When I see your perfect lips I want to give you a deep love kiss. I think so much about you I realize I can't size how much I love you It's so great, so nice, so good You make my heart burns as the wood do! When I see your beautiful face It makes me feel so at peace When I see your perfect lips I want to give you a deep love kiss. In my dreams, I hear you saying "Don't lose your hope darling!" Yeah! I've got you under my skin! See you soon for a next one!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 ohhhhhhhhhhh i luv that poem:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 oh thx!:kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 no prob, :kiss: there so much expression and its sooooooooo deep :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 oh!!!true love...I'm looking at you!!! called When My heart was floating on the water You were sitting near the river, Then you saw it, you shivered And you caught it in your hands. You filled my heart with love You hit my soul with one of your arrows Then, you drew me in a brushstoke And you flew away like a dove. When I see your beautiful face It makes me feel so at peace When I see your perfect lips I want to give you a deep love kiss. I think so much about you I realize I can't size how much I love you It's so great, so nice, so good You make my heart burns as the wood do! When I see your beautiful face It makes me feel so at peace When I see your perfect lips I want to give you a deep love kiss. In my dreams, I hear you saying "Don't lose your hope darling!" Yeah! I've got you under my skin! See you soon for a next one!!!! what a passionate man. I can see though, that English is not your natural language? I can help you edit them..if you'd like. But the ideas behind it are soo good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 ^yeah you're right.I'm french... yeah I'd like you to help me.. Edit 22/06/06 20:54pm New poem!!!!!! Called EYES I came without any intention But your eyes caught all my attention They trap me in their depth They read all what I think, I guess. My eyes were travelling on you And, suddenly, met yours I couldn't turn off my eyes of you They wouldn't have gone though. You stole my heart, and You kept it in your hands I can feel your voice sounds Like it comes from the underground I try to find you, to see you But you were not there though I'd like to see you again To set me free from these chains. You stole my heart, and You kept it in your hands I can feel your voice sounds Like it comes from the underground I can see myself kissing her A dream couldn't be happier I'm looking for you since hours If life could be easier... See you soon for a next one!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 If someone is interested in making songs with my poems, tell me!!! I'd like to be your lyric writer!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 an other one...called Rubbles I'm walking through the rubbles I exactly know where I am These rubbles are my broken dreams All my dreams have been rumbled I can see my collapsed past Life is really running too fast I can't see the future I dreamt about Neither the target I wanted to shoot I'm walking through the rubbles I exactly know where I am These rubbles are my broken dreams All my dreams have been rumbled I'm lost everywhere Don't know who, what, and where Who am I, what to do, And where do I have to go? I'm walking through the rubbles I exactly know where I am These rubbles are my broken dreams All my dreams have been rumbled Neither here, neither there... I'm not there, I'm not here I feel lost everywhere... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 Oh, be prepared for some leet poetry. Anime I turn on my lcd Only to see thee In thy flashy pose I beg for my dose Action, comedy, romance I love to dance this dance As the leaves fall away On my hard drive you'll alway stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 Another poem from my "Collection of Leet Works" Spectator Like a refugee amongst all the joy Like a prodigy without his ploy He wanders the streets sees the life in motion Where everybody meets he goes without a potion Does nothing but observe everybody around him Does nothing but serves his every whim His pain is utter and endevours are dire Always bit of a mutter succeedes nothing to inspire Damn, Baudelaire can hide in a hole now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 mmmh^nice one! here you've got the last I've done... Called Strike What an angry sky today Are you trying to say Are you trying to blame The way I think, I behave Lightnings are striking around Trying to hit me, their sounds Are going through my head Are driving me mad I think I'm going to leave But where am I gonna live I want to start an other story And forget everything I wouldn't see Then a blinding light hits me And I lose my whole memory I couldn't see truth and lies Neither night or moon light I try to fight against my fears I want to release my tears I will make it all clear And I'll trying to reach it I think I'm going to leave But where am I gonna live I want to start an other story And forget everything I wouldn't see Life scares me sometimes Can't find the signs Am I able to see in the night, To see where I should strike? Seeing nothing in the dark I try to find some sparks Nothing white, all is black But my vision is back. And I see something better Something I couldn't find anymore Will I be stronger? Would it be better? See you soon for an other one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 Hey hey, pretty surreal I'll say! Ninja Dream Deep in the dark but without a sword He carries a mark ain't part of a horde In sick and twisted realm where different to him reigns His home is the nearest elm where he's troubled by many pains Prosperous times he waits whilst at night he prowles Encoutering many baits with his cunning of owls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 Another prime example of leet poetry. Hot Stuff Hot you are indeed everybody can see In beauty you've got the lead unfortunately there's no we When you sway and I look at you There is no way 'cuz you choose,but a few Your curves are pure might with their exceptional charm Hunderds would fight to on them put their arm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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