grids Posted October 19, 2007 Share Posted October 19, 2007 its so hard to say goodbye sometimes i feel dizzy sometimes i feel okay when it feels so hard to build then i know how it feels right now i decided to make far distance away from you yeah i do, only you and there's no reason why i did that to you its hard to say i'm sorry its hard to say goodbye i felt so much stronger than before without you its better to forget without you its great to know each other i unwind his wings so that he can't fly away he wanted to and i kicked his head so that he can't see anything poor him poor me so we cant connect with each other again but i find another way i better to getting hike into the top of the line then we'll see how it is its nice to know you and now its better to say goodbye forever, and never meet again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted October 21, 2007 Author Share Posted October 21, 2007 take me down to your special sea eye to eye, my accompany touch my lips to speak again broken sixstring ring again crown my name with your everything break my chain cause i' m giving in you come with me all the way white light look i' d rather stare into the eyes of your garden' s sphere you come with me all the way you comfort me all the way take me down to your special sea disarm me weapon novelty touch my lips to speak again broken six string ring again lend me your voice new jerusalem shut my mouthful of empty games all of my diamonds all through this strain life all of me reckless on to this pain strife deep to me deeply look to me gently drawn to you dearly drawn to you There are a few grammatical errors, but I like this too. Especially the bold lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted October 21, 2007 Author Share Posted October 21, 2007 Life is an Act that was Plagiarized You are certainly welcome to legitimize the contraband you have submitted. Though our analyses show naught of an origin- other than that which was centrifugal to inscriptions antiquated- so concluded millenia ago- but with famed historicity. Or if it pleases you, turn yourself in to serve the sentence Shakespeare didn't. _________________________________ Philosophy is Dead A body found frozen and broken in carnage separations- the singular symbol of freedom individualized in pose- upon participating in damnation its nerve-lenses ambiguous so it won't see hope, that fearful sight as she lay motionless where are the philosophae of the dead? she committed the act by ink injection the pen through the sternum so she could utter that she truly had ink run through her veins _________________________________ Biblical Blood-Letting The seven-hundredth year served by Noah is sufficient for flooding mankind's thought. Though the thirty third time our earth revolved Jesus sun-round thought to be three off, nevertheless thrifts God and cheapens the charge of Adam's trickery- to naught from fire unquenched forever. When will wedlock's sacred rite of practice, and participation of priests' prayer to penance provoked in patron ground, that pilgrimaged- blood poured- purge people completely uncut from certain starvations as serpents suffered in revelations? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 21, 2007 Share Posted October 21, 2007 our memories hello, are you there? are you there for me? wish i can stand with you with heart and soul feelings and emotions i ran away from you because there's some reason for keep anything between us and make you understand here i come here i will show you all about me here i will show to the world take your breath away stuck in the middle of crowded place i saw your face i broke up all promises to you i swear i won't do it more because of you listen to the rhymes lights are going with you after all, i missed our memories that we did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted October 21, 2007 Author Share Posted October 21, 2007 keep writing grids. I can't imagine how hard it must be to write in a second language, you are an inspiration to me in that way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 keep writing grids. I can't imagine how hard it must be to write in a second language, you are an inspiration to me in that way thank you :square: i actually write the poems with english directly. sometimes in indo if there's an assignment to do (which is relative the topic about poems):P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingV Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Your photo is only something I look at every day Your face is only as an angels Your kindness is only unsurpassable Your beauty is only boundless Your laughter is only the sweetest melody to hit my ears Your presence is only the most adorable thing ever You only occupy all my thoughts and desires And I’m only human plz help me come up wif a name for this poem ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darlene_Ihnfsa Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 nice one Terry. you know my suggestion: You make me human. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted November 3, 2007 Share Posted November 3, 2007 Your photo is only something I look at every day Your face is only as an angels Your kindness is only unsurpassable Your beauty is only boundless Your laughter is only the sweetest melody to hit my ears Your presence is only the most adorable thing ever You only occupy all my thoughts and desires And I’m only human plz help me come up wif a name for this poem ^^ hmm :rolleyes: what if "it's hard to be like you?" :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 6, 2007 Author Share Posted November 6, 2007 I believe this is my first sonnet. It is for British Literature, written entirely in iambic pentameter in the Italian/Petrarchan rhyme scheme abba abba cdcd ee “Shaken Winter” It’s cold in winter times, the days are short; the nails and bricks start loosening their cracks, but I must look beyond the winter’s tricks, and find myself a positive retort. And from my spirit shaken or ignored, I’ll carry winter’s coldest nights in sacks; where in the summer, there will it unpack so I can strike the longer days their chords. And in those moments will the sonnet’s farce be true to sadness, coldness, and the word- its ‘torment’ solemn, darken summer’s course; no matter that to you may look absurd- To die in light, that is my holy vow. To live through night, that will I try somehow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 6, 2007 Author Share Posted November 6, 2007 erm, I thought I hit submit only once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lera Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 To die in light, that is my holy vow. To live through night, that will I try somehow. Sounds so... poetic :surprised: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingV Posted November 8, 2007 Share Posted November 8, 2007 makes me stronger 15 years i spent in your house all this time I've wonted to get out all the nights i spent crying in bed all the deed you done you want to forget through all this i continued to grow and now I've learnt things no one else seems to know i know you'd like to take it back but you cant change your past and thats a fact yet my smile isn't fake and my dream you didn't break what was lost is nothing to what i retained and overall id say i gained at time id have shot myself and left your god forsaken hell i decided to stay a little longer for what dosn't kill me makes me stronger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted November 8, 2007 Share Posted November 8, 2007 Hey nice poems everyone, really. Even if I don't post as much as I did before, I still read what everyone posts. My last one has been inspired by the "Hail to the thief" CD sleeve where I picked some words to make weird sentences... It doesn't have a title... It could be called Paranoiac It's an entry, it's just a test To check out if players are ready to give their best. The red carpet is a sweet illusion So they'll be not paying attention, Because no one can get out of the mansion Alive, that would mean the end of their mission. I'll be driven to my own loss Chosen and away I'll be tossed. My home is left empty, vacant Overtaken by deads and ghosts, By devils who scare me, who want Me to be one of their hosts. All the exits have been blocked The armed patrol made them locked. With the hungry guilt of darkness hiding into light, They'll tell me everything will be alright, Not to look into the mirror, Not to discover what's behind the door. I'm only curious and nothing's more human Than opening the door and there I stand. I try to avoid eye contact with the shadows The stream of the river has already stolen what I know. It grabbed who I was, my soul's gone, And that's how are born those odd clones. There's an army of them out there, Looking for pushing me from the top of the stairs. In every street I walk, I can feel their eyes Fixed on me, they're all in disguise They hide wherever they can, they're all spies They'll stalk me down until the sunrise. I'll find a way of escaping, a bit of freedom Away from the clones living in my kingdom. They know I'm anti-security, their perfect danger, I wait for the ballistic collision of the sunset in the center. That may not really be the right answer, But they'll stop while I'll be getting on further. I move out of the broken branches I can't give in the keys of my chances. Finally, those copies ended up being nothing. There will be no point in remembering That there will be no recovery. Any of the roads can end so quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 13, 2007 Author Share Posted November 13, 2007 if love were phlegm if love was phlegm and you were a tissue I would throw through pneumonia's sputum all over your goo-gluey thin paper layers you'd be drowning disintegrated by clear gelly I would go to smoke to choke til I spat in many chunk colored layers of clear hack, greenish-rusty crusty, brown-gray grainèd love-hot-snot all over you, so you'll smile and no one could touch you but my coated pus and cilia and crusty blooded smothered covered hands you thin paper layer handkerchief Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Here is something I wrote; I wait 'till midnight Just to talk to you, Just to joke with you, Just to see your face, I wait 'till midnight. Although I am tired, My eyelids heavier than winter snow, Although I have no reason to stay awake, I wait 'till midnight. And yet I can not see you. You can not see the smile on my face, When I see your name. Your laugh I can not hear, as we talk about the day. Although daily commitments come my way. Although reality snaps me back home. Even when your name never appears, I wait 'till midnight. I smile when I say your name, when I hear it, when I write it. But is it the same for you? I tell my friends of our conversations, but they fail to understand. The sorrow I feel, because, you are never truely here. As I toil my life away, Waiting for that someone, Who I beleive could be you, My life here brings me back, and still, for you, I wait 'till midnight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janhaw Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 Emma Beatrice; i adore the poem. Especially this part: Although I am tired, My eyelids heavier than winter snow, Although I have no reason to stay awake, I wait 'till midnight. Reminds me of a cold, winter night. City covered with snow, and everything is quite. Somewhere, some girl plays Mondschein on her piano. One candle is lighten on the window. Ok. better stop now. :) :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted November 17, 2007 Share Posted November 17, 2007 Hey nice poems everyone, really. Even if I don't post as much as I did before, I still read what everyone posts. My last one has been inspired by the "Hail to the thief" CD sleeve where I picked some words to make weird sentences... It doesn't have a title... It could be called Paranoiac It's an entry, it's just a test To check out if players are ready to give their best. The red carpet is a sweet illusion So they'll be not paying attention, Because no one can get out of the mansion Alive, that would mean the end of their mission. I'll be driven to my own loss Chosen and away I'll be tossed. My home is left empty, vacant Overtaken by deads and ghosts, By devils who scare me, who want Me to be one of their hosts. All the exits have been blocked The armed patrol made them locked. With the hungry guilt of darkness hiding into light, They'll tell me everything will be alright, Not to look into the mirror, Not to discover what's behind the door. I'm only curious and nothing's more human Than opening the door and there I stand. I try to avoid eye contact with the shadows The stream of the river has already stolen what I know. It grabbed who I was, my soul's gone, And that's how are born those odd clones. There's an army of them out there, Looking for pushing me from the top of the stairs. In every street I walk, I can feel their eyes Fixed on me, they're all in disguise They hide wherever they can, they're all spies They'll stalk me down until the sunrise. I'll find a way of escaping, a bit of freedom Away from the clones living in my kingdom. They know I'm anti-security, their perfect danger, I wait for the ballistic collision of the sunset in the center. That may not really be the right answer, But they'll stop while I'll be getting on further. I move out of the broken branches I can't give in the keys of my chances. Finally, those copies ended up being nothing. There will be no point in remembering That there will be no recovery. Any of the roads can end so quickly. omg, your poem is so touching. :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grids Posted November 25, 2007 Share Posted November 25, 2007 stabbed back at the corner thinking about you i hope this is not a chance for me its nothing to be about it and realize that you are the trouble sometimes i feel like no one notice me dont have anything to do with it and everytime i think about it it always lose on my mind i ever said that i cant do it this time the right thing that i want to say is suddenly i fall down before something is hurting me and killing me inside i cant decide between all these things i even cant consider anything to it because you're the only one i need yes you are the only one i need because you're the only one i see yes you are the only one i see because you're the only one i pain yes you are the only one i pain 'cause you know until the end until you know the end of the world i didnt realize when i wrote these, it was like it hadn't no relation between each paragraph, i think its kinda like a lyric though:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted November 25, 2007 Share Posted November 25, 2007 Run Run, run like the wind Run, run like the beast Sprint, sprint into the distance Sprint, sprint to the sun Smile, smile for a million Smile, smile for the sunrise Laugh, laugh at the stars Laugh, laugh at the rain Look, look to the better Look, look at the poor Cry, cry out in hardship Cry, cry out in joy Love, love those who need it Love, love those who care Hate, hate not a single soul Hate, hate doesn't care Run, run like the wind Run, run like the beast Sprint, sprint into the the distance Sprint, sprint to the sun By the way, thankyou very much for your lovely comment, janhaw! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 Here is a bit of a novelty Poem; I really like glue The way it sticks to you The magnicifect adhesive stuff I cannot get enough You can glue your fingers together You can do as you watch the weather You can glue you cat to a chair And then point and laugh and stare (at the cat) I really like Glue The way it sticks to you Oh fruitcake! I glued my mouth shut (read this line quickly)Now all I can do is type on this forum until the paramedics arrive with that stuff the unglues glue and hope that one day I will be able to talk and comunticate with my friends and family because not being able to talk sucks and is really boring, I just realised this is a shit (excuse my lagnuage) poem and that anyone reading it will point laugh and stare but not because I glued a cat to a chair, just because this poem is lame. *dies* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 27, 2007 Author Share Posted November 27, 2007 Here is a bit of a novelty Poem; I really like glue The way it sticks to you The magnicifect adhesive stuff I cannot get enough You can glue your fingers together You can do as you watch the weather You can glue you cat to a chair And then point and laugh and stare (at the cat) I really like Glue The way it sticks to you Oh fruitcake! I glued my mouth shut (read this line quickly)Now all I can do is type on this forum until the paramedics arrive with that stuff the unglues glue and hope that one day I will be able to talk and comunticate with my friends and family because not being able to talk sucks and is really boring, I just realised this is a shit (excuse my lagnuage) poem and that anyone reading it will point laugh and stare but not because I glued a cat to a chair, just because this poem is lame. *dies* :laugh3::laugh3::laugh3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Red, orange, yellow ,green ,blue etc. Sing a song, of a rainbow But not one you've heard before Think of the colours diferently Red isn't so bright anymore Orange gets on your nerves Yellow can send you blind Green makes you feel unsure Blue will just leave you behind Indigo is deceitful You thinks she's beauty all round Same with Little Miss Violet They both will run you into the ground So Red, yellow, orange, green, blue Can be the end of you Don't forget Indigo and Violet Loving these things, you will regret. Dont ask where that came from, since I have no idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lore Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Here is a bit of a novelty Poem; I really like glue The way it sticks to you The magnicifect adhesive stuff I cannot get enough You can glue your fingers together You can do as you watch the weather You can glue you cat to a chair And then point and laugh and stare (at the cat) I really like Glue The way it sticks to you Oh fruitcake! I glued my mouth shut (read this line quickly)Now all I can do is type on this forum until the paramedics arrive with that stuff the unglues glue and hope that one day I will be able to talk and comunticate with my friends and family because not being able to talk sucks and is really boring, I just realised this is a shit (excuse my lagnuage) poem and that anyone reading it will point laugh and stare but not because I glued a cat to a chair, just because this poem is lame. *dies* masterpiece :wacky:! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miss capa Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 My Ipod My ipod if full Of crap My ipod it basically A brick The headphones suck and my Ears hurt The batteries die alot That sucks too Its one of those old ones that is....old Appariently it worth lots Yeah right I still love music but not my ipod I need a smaller ipod right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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