Thanks Gail.the one I wrote yesterday was my best.or one of my best.I've got many good german too!

if you want to post something in german that would be cool :D

 

But nobody would understand it! :huh:

Thanks Gail.the one I wrote yesterday was my best.or one of my best.I've got many good german too!

if you want to post something in german that would be cool :D

 

But nobody would understand it! :huh:

I could try... since I am trying to learn :P

Hmmm...I have to find the good ones..............I'll have a look!

Ok here is the first one I've ever written (serious one)

 

Sternenzauber

 

Wie der Stern am Abendhimmel

schaust du mich nun an

und höre ich in deiner Stimme,

dass 's nichts schönres geben kann.

 

Deine Worte klingen wie Lieder

musst du auch jetzt gehn

und ich denke immer wieder

Die zeit sie war so schön.

 

Bist du bald auch weg ganz weit

muss ich immer an dich denken

ich weiß,dass Zeit die Wunden heilt

es wird mich trotzdem kränken!

Invention

 

Your leaden legs

Are unsteady on your feet

From a distance

Nameless faces appear

You look at me with dead eyes

They never seem to move

A ghost you are

Who casts no shadow

But I know better,

For you are mine.

[i live in]

 

 

A Country Called Paranoia

 

 

My name is Paranoia

Fears spread through me like bacteria

My people like math and science

And all those political nonsense

They say they like me

They would do anything to keep me free.

 

See how they talk in muted whispers

Lock the doors, silence the watchers

Trust no one, make the antis disperse

Kill all those “pedagogical” leaders

They say they like me

How come they’re cutting me a tree?

 

“Life is hard in a country called Paranoia

Where instability results into hysteria,”

Said the people from other lands

Who all trouble me with clean hands

They say they like me

Why don’t they let me be?

 

They follow me like hungry lions

Who ravage me along with their minions

From the one-way glass they look

In utter prejudice, I am in shock

They say they like me

Why don’t they set me free?

Human

 

He is a pseudo-scientist

A new age transformist

The world is his playground

He travels at the speed of sound.

 

He is a nuclear-reactor

A renowned violence creator

He makes the planet stop and spin

In every which way, he wins.

 

He is a cloud-gatherer

A well-rounded storm-catcher

He creates the worst of disasters

To the shame of all the pretenders.

 

He is a human cannonball

A hater of all things small

He loves to conquer everything

Until all is reduced to nothing.

 

He is your worst nightmare

A human who likes to dare

Is it really in his nature to devastate

All the lives he didn't create?

 

 

A really pessimistic take on humans..well i'm in a bad mood

= Yesterday A Bird Told Me=

 

Yesterday, a bird told me

to fly where there is no love,

where dreams don't suffer

and passion never dies...

 

Behind heaven

angels see us cry,

hidding in smocking moon

and rain of acid falls

slowly hissing our night...

 

Yesterday, a bird told me

to open my eyes,

to hug the fear with your dreams,

to be a blooded warrior

for you...

 

Angels have forgiven

knees that were forgotten

knees of the unforgiven pigs..

 

Yesterday, a bird told me

to fly to the infinite,

to take you under my wings,

and to open my heart to you..

 

Because if I hug the fear

with your dreams

I'll be a blooded warrior of stealth

and no one can hurt us..

so that no one can hurt you....

[just drive]

 

all you need to do

is see the way

the lifeline

intersects

the loveline

to see there is a faultline

but we wrapped ourselves

in its coats

spring leaves

now dewy

they meld to our form

in the fall they crumble

and i will drive the wrong way

in the wrong direction

against the lifeline

i never had a licence

Unexplained Anger

 

My wrath spreads like an infernal haze

Against the heavens, I watch it ablaze

See the venom bleed from my mouth

In uncontrollable fury I begin to shout.

Do you want to see my pure vitriol?

You shall then see me as without soul

See that my alabaster arms are no longer

For the deepest slash I leave will linger.

Just

 

when a second is a day,

when the only word you say

is "wait," I stumble;

when I saw you yesterday,

at that moment I prayed,

that I wouldn't crumble.

 

but the truth is that God made this world just an echo of him,

and I knew it would all come back to me, my sin

 

even though I can't fix this, all I will do is hope

that I don't hurt anyone else

 

_______________________

 

Happy Halloween

 

red puddles on halloween,

cover your ears from this scream,

will they discover the head,

or their girl chopped up in bed,

goodbye christine...

[just drive]

 

all you need to do

is see the way

the lifeline

intersects

the loveline

to see there is a faultline

but we wrapped ourselves

in its coats

spring leaves

now dewy

they meld to our form

in the fall they crumble

and i will drive the wrong way

in the wrong direction

against the lifeline

i never had a licence

yes! i am so glad to see you posting here :D

hey sara

Just

 

when a second is a day,

when the only word you say

is "wait," I stumble;

when I saw you yesterday,

at that moment I prayed,

that I wouldn't crumble.

 

but the truth is that God made this world just an echo of him,

and I knew it would all come back to me, my sin

 

even though I can't fix this, all I will do is hope

that I don't hurt anyone else

 

_______________________

 

Happy Halloween

 

red puddles on halloween,

cover your ears from this scream,

will they discover the head,

or their girl chopped up in bed,

goodbye christine...

 

^great, the last one scared me a bit....

[just drive]

 

all you need to do

is see the way

the lifeline

intersects

the loveline

to see there is a faultline

but we wrapped ourselves

in its coats

spring leaves

now dewy

they meld to our form

in the fall they crumble

and i will drive the wrong way

in the wrong direction

against the lifeline

i never had a licence

yes! i am so glad to see you posting here :D

hey sara

 

hey eric!

 

yeah, this place is so great. :D i have been mostly writing challenges for my LJ communities (i took on a House challenge, a CSI challenge, and a CSI: Miami challenge) so my writing fae is a little sleepy. ;)

What Happened When I Saw the Girl With the Wolfhound Dalmation Mix

 

ooh, I just lost my breath

you stopped and said

i need you to hear this

but i looked at the ground

stained black cherry

where fall leaves had already

melded with the ground

and aimlessly kicked acorns

at eye level

i can not see anyones face

but i knew you were upset

at what you felt was ignorance

and what i knew was real life

I STUFF MY FACE

WITH BARBECUE CHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPS

I DRINK SOME MILK

I DRINK SOME MILK

I DRINK SOME MILK

 

mm, want the fairy lime

moca toca poka broka

mm, want the pretty pink

moca poka poison drink!!!

 

i want a cookie

i want a cookie

I Want A Cookie

I Want A Cookie

I WANT A COOKIIIIEEEEEEEEEE

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

 

RREEEAAAAA

YEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA

 

mosh pit

 

mosh pit

 

mosh pit

 

mosh pit

 

mosh pit... mosh pit... mosh pit... moshpit.......

 

MOSH PIT,

MOSH PIT,

MOSH PIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!!!

 

=Today spins=

 

Today

the world gives another spin,

but no one told me..

 

Today

time has forgotten me..

with a towel on my face

laying in bed

with nothing to want

 

Today

the world spins once again,

but no one asked me..

 

Today

I am untruthful...

 

Today

I am of death,

with a broken soul..

 

Today

I've lighten up candles

 

Today

I sat down on fire

to wait for Sky..

 

Summer that hasn't come..

it's hasn't come..

 

Today

the world spins once again,

but I'm still laying down

dreaming of time to move forward

dreaming of Sky..

 

Today

I woke up cautious

 

Today

I woke up once again

 

Today

life has slapped me in the face

 

Today

I am for no one..

 

Today

spins

it spins

it's spinning once again..

 

Today

I'm back for nothing

 

Today

I'm back for everything

 

So young and

spinning..

 

Today

I'm back to everything..

 

Summer that hasn't come,

Sky that won't come...

Summer that will come...

but it hasn't come..

it hasn't come..

I'm still waiting for Sky to come..

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I have good news.... my english teacher told me that they've published some poems i gave them in the online eoi journal.

 

The poems are :Game over and No time

^You can read them in this link above.

Superman

 

imperical, impermiable

and most of all spiritual

my physical mind makes this rhyme

become rhythmical

 

but there's no

beat beat beat

that is moving my feet

so, that I see

what'll make me happy

i've gone back to writing on paper only, and then typing it out online. i realized how much i missed the actual process of writing. the only thing that i actually write from my computer now are my challenges on my LiveJournal.

Violation

 

Sorry but that would be a TOS violation if i have ever seen one in my life.

I've only written a couple of poems directly to the computer. I don't remember which ones they were but 95% of the time I write it on paper first.

[pinched hallway]

 

i walk on eggshells

in multi colored sling back

and forth on they tell me

but they have never worn

nor fallen in these shoes

i never write epics

because it is a battle

not a fight

and i have not the words

to say more much more than

yes no

anything more would be trite

and i suppose i have already spit in his face

to know the weave of his shirt so well

as it falls into certain folds

as i curl up into certain contortions

likened to the area which is removed

all is shadows through film

connect the dots to make a fake sign that says "happy"

 

black blot filling space

altering blots erase

evil is easy to see

the other takes finding

(maybe maybe

there isn't any)

to change the world

we hurt something

 

something, isn't good

perfection, requires God

 

ignorance is bliss

he makes it, happiness

so an animal breathes

and knows it is fake

it wants to connect the dots

and forget