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We had to join in groups and write a dramatic poem in literature today... and I went on and wrote this, and my group didn't use it, heh.

 

A dramatic poem is when one or more people are speaking that clearly isn't the author or sum'n, right? So... this is all I could come up with, heh.

 

 

unjust

 

wrongly accused

I thought I was

appealing constantly

for an empty cause

 

this penalty

wasn't mine to pay

with every minute

i dreaded that day

 

someone else should

have been in my place

this punishment

was theirs to face

 

but I instead

was put through this pain

I hoped to escape it

but it was all in vain

 

on that day

my life was taken

by judges who

were so surely mistaken

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I wrote this two ways, I liked the first way better but I was told the second is better... here they are

 

glass human

I walk through walls

to follow you

I magically wander

but am seen right through

happenstance of glance will transform my chance

of happiness with her, my opaque wonder

_________________

 

glass human

 

I walk through walls

to follow you

I magically wander

but am seen right through

 

one glance

will be my chance

of happiness with her

my opaque wonder

 

your eyes are seen

by an invisible being

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uh, i don't know why I wrote this... :uhoh:

 

go ahead

 

let's write a song

i'll sing along

go ahead

what can go wrong?

 

pluck a string

start to sing

go ahead

i'll be listening

 

set me ablaze

with your firey gaze

go ahead

it makes me craze

 

look up above

all things we're free of

go ahead

i've fallen in love

 

let's sail the blue

just us two

go ahead

i'll be loving you

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some people

 

some people

are too hypocritical

some people

love to be adored

 

some people

are too sentimental

some people

hate it when they're bored

 

some people

like to bask in spotlight

some people

always shy away

 

some people

wear their clothes too tight

some people

sing and dance all day

 

some people

are lazy and ignorant

some people

like to drink green tea

 

some people

are harmless and innocent

some people

are just like me

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uh, i don't know why I wrote this... :uhoh:

 

go ahead

 

let's write a song

i'll sing along

go ahead

what can go wrong?

 

pluck a string

start to sing

go ahead

i'll be listening

 

set me ablaze

with your firey gaze

go ahead

it makes me craze

 

look up above

all things we're free of

go ahead

i've fallen in love

 

let's sail the blue

just us two

go ahead

i'll be loving you

I really like this one

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tragic lie

 

I insist upon joy

I insist that at the present I exist

in happiness

a wonderous love resounds

you were found to repress my sadness

romanticizing self

praises of me

I insist that I am

perfect poetry

 

without impressing tragedy

why should I ask pity?

a glowing spectacle of youth she is to me

the angelic creature, her symmetry

inspired by writings of Shakespeare

Edgar Allan Poe men and women alike

who have worshipped their creation

a repetition for you

my heroine injection

my inexpressible expression

to her angelic majesty

to the worshipped symmetry

I secretly cry to live with her

wondering upon my perfect wonder

 

bubu

 

hollow head bumps my leg

heavenly purring sounds in it

an incessant reprocussion attempt on discussion

meow me love

meow me love

and hit me up

baby love

kitty food pretty mix

leave it for me... prick

kiss kiss hiss

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finals

 

go to class

you are 10 minutes late

hurry up and eat breakfast

hold on--don't go too fast

now, go put down your plate

and your glass

 

oh, take these

you will need them, I bet

good luck on your final tests

look at you, you are a mess

oh yeah, and don't forget

your car keys

 

make sure you don't get caught

and if he asks, "I just studied a lot"

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finals

 

go to class

you are 10 minutes late

hurry up and eat breakfast

hold on--don't go too fast

now, go put down your plate

and your glass

 

oh, take these

you will need them, I bet

good luck on your final tests

look at you, you are a mess

oh yeah, and don't forget

your car keys

 

make sure you don't get caught

and if he asks, "I just studied a lot"

I think it's funny. but I think that's a good thing

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viking

 

HAR! HAIL

without avail, make sail

for the leader of all

 

future tense has promise for us

what we cannot see we can still trust

if there is a doubt

what lives within

let us go back to them

 

question

 

how can I grasp your beauty

and put it in a glass jar

hold the lid on it tightly

and not lose the air

and from my mind

what I truly perceive

at an instant in time

let you know you are lovely

 

so my angelic curly hair girl

do you believe, when it's said you are the light of this world

can a man put the sun into a lense

but know that God has put in my eyes the heavens

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Black Pen Writes

 

I'm a pen

I write for this guy

guess what

I'm writing again

oh yea

wasn't that what I did yesterday

if I was in control I would tell you

or would I just sit there

pens don't make jokes

or sing songs

or dance or read

or say "that's all folks"

I'm just a pen

I sit there

sometimes I am

the greatest invention

 

something redundant

 

wookie woo for you

strangled at an angle

dead on April 31st on planet tatu

a princess is a princess but she was hairy oowew

beautiful curly hair all over her body

 

lala

 

I'm bored

like a board that is bored

sitting on a deck with a bunch of other boards

that are bored

and playing tic tac toe

because tic tac toe is a game for bored... people

if boards could play games they would play tic tac toe all day cuz it's boring

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the first i've done...i'm a beginner in english poetries...:D .all your poetries are soooo good...

this one is called Ring

 

I was flying so high

Just thinking about you

I'm wondering why

Near me, I don't see you

 

Then my head starts to ring

Oh no! I'm awaking

Reality begins to sing

The end of this bad dream

 

At the corner of the street

I see you, so far, turning,

I try to call you, you're not hearing

And again you disappear

 

Then my head starts to ring

Oh no! I'm awaking

Reality begins to sing

The end of this bad dream

 

I awake during the night

Looking besides me

Seeing you're not near me

Oh no! My nightmare is true...

 

i've got an other one but i still write it...

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2 others...

 

This one is Sunset

 

My head is lost

And my senses so frost

When I think about you

I want to see you

'Cos i don't want to be hold

In a jail so cold

 

I want to see the sunset

And see you next to me

I'm thinking about you, honey

 

Everytime I see ghosts

They make me so frost

The touch of your cheeks

The taste of your lips

Me in your arms

Will make us so warm

 

I want to see the sunset

And see you next to me

I'm thinking about you, honey

 

And this one is Be mine

 

A thought about you

And everything is rumbled

My senses are paralysed

Then I'm losing my head too

 

I want you to be mine

As long as the sun'll shine

 

A thought about you

And everything is rumbled

When I get lost too

Hopefully by you I'm loved

 

I want you to be mine

As long as the sun'll shine

 

And all what I need

Is you next to me

'Coz I want you to be mine

As long as the sun'll shine...

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flapper

 

I opened up a safe

I'm gonna take

some cash

for feathas

and wigs

and skinny kids

the police

are comin after me

aknockin down my door

cash is short mister officer

it ain't worth a revolver

so let me run

'fo I let out my machine gun

don't be too rash

'fo you get my blast

I just want some cash

fo' feathas

and wigs

and skinny kids

 

this is a shootout

chief, I'll bail out

but you's dead

your men are blushing

no reason for a rushing

I'll bail you out free

if ya let me be

'fo tragedy

fo' feathas

and wigs

and skinny kids

fo' 1920s

fo' readin the funnies on sunday mornin

with a mug

and a lady

and you know me hunnie

this is a shootout

chief, I'll bail out

but you's dead

 

________________

 

The Fox

 

running around

lightly prancing

some might say

she is dancing

trotting, trotting,

trotting along

she dances to the beat

of her own song

 

came upon

the edge of the wood

don't know what to do

for her own good

 

dancing, dancing,

dancing along

she dances to the beat

of her own song

 

she fell off the world

into ours

wondering what to do

with all the hours

she scared the livestock

off a farm

don't know what to do

she heard an alarm

something's coming

it is tall

it spoke with

a threatening call

she goes next door

and hides in the trees

"alas, it hurts

a trap has caught me"

after hours of howling

she almost dies

but another man

heard the cries

 

he takes her away

to live another day

lucky she's here

a while longer to stay

so they take her back

to live in the wood

they know what to do

for her own good

and she's dancing, dancing,

dancing along

she dances to the beat

of her own song

 

I just read this thread from the beginning and I like these two very muchie

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the last I've done...

called light

 

Under my hands your skin

Is shivering of pleasure

Like you do through the wind

I know you love it for sure

 

I see everyday

The light in your eyes

It makes me realize

Forever you will stay

 

Your lips against mines

Yeah! It's so fine!

I lean next to you

You know I love it too!

 

I see everyday

The light in your eyes

It makes me realize

Forever you will stay

 

When the sun comes out

I see it touching your face

You are lighting the place

Peaceful, beautiful, yeah, that's you!

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the last I've done...

called light

 

Under my hands your skin

Is shivering of pleasure

Like you do through the wind

I know you love it for sure

 

I see everyday

The light in your eyes

It makes me realize

Forever you will stay

 

Your lips against mines

Yeah! It's so fine!

I lean next to you

You know I love it too!

 

 

I see everyday

The light in your eyes

It makes me realize

Forever you will stay

 

When the sun comes out

I see it touching your face

You are lighting the place

Peaceful, beautiful, yeah, that's you!

 

 

this is my favorite so far :nice: well done!

 

specially the last stanza

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i just wrote this poem that's like a poem some depressed emo kid/wannabe poet would write..

 

blind

 

standing here, in front of this barrier

brick by brick, it towers above

i cannot see past it's impressive height

the bricks offer no mercy for passage

 

defeated, i turn around

in silence, i stare at the ground

 

but an unfailing curiosity strikes me

"what's beyond this barrier, this wall?"

my defeat no longer emcompasses me

i give in to curiosity's beck and call

 

i turn around to face my barrier so tall

instead, I look down at a fence so small

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Thanks clearascrystal!! :D :kiss:

 

Well i've got 2 others...Coldplay is a great source of insipiration...

called in my arms

 

It's a bright day

The summer sun warms us

Both are far away

Leaning in a field of flowers.

 

I hold you in my arms here

Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams.

 

I awake in the night

Seeing you breathing peacefully

I kiss you tenderly

As we met at the first sight!

 

I hold you in my arms here

Looking at the sky, thinking about our dreams.

 

The only thing I want

Is to be with you

I'll tell I can't

Help me to think about you!

 

 

And this one is called The one

 

I think about green spaces

You, sitting in front where the sun faces

Me, coming from the darkest shadows

I see you, I just want to know

How you feel, now, here,

With me, in front of you when you look at me?

 

I want to be the one

The only one who loves you

I want to put my hands in yours

But love isn't a race I used to win

 

Then our lips meet tenderly

What a soft, deep kiss, and slowly

My arms around you, yours around me

Now your tasted lips are missing

You're so cute darling, enjoying

That you tell me you love me

 

I want to be the one

The only one who loves you

I want to put my hands in yours

But love isn't a race I used to win

 

Today you're always here

I won't lose you I swear

'Cos I love you my dear...

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