ColdMike Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!!!! BE CAREFUL!!!! EXTREM STATE OF MADNESS.... This is a special one for a special guy.... Enjoy it... Called The Spell When I first see your eyes I think I didn't realize That I was hypnotized By your wide bright eyes Into them I could dive Can't size how much they're wide Don't know how much they make me smile When I see them I think about an azur sky I hear your voice going through me It sounds both low and high It seems to come from the underground, I see Your lips moving when I hear you sing Everyone falls under your spell You're like a blue-eyed angel Thinking about you makes everyone gets on well Cos we 've got you in our heads You're someone I want to look like You're someone I belive in, like If you're God, and you strike My heart, yeah! You strike me! Blue eyes, blue eyes, blue eyes Guess about who it is.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 If someone is interested in making songs with my poems, tell me!!! I'd like to be your lyric writer!!yeah, i will:nice: i luv your poems,mike:wink3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 ^thx!!! Did u guess who is the topic of my last one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reg Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 ^thx!!! Did u guess who is the topic of my last one?:nice: that girl that u like?:P :sneaky: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bijeli_Miš Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Damn, don't chit chat this topic!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 The last one I've post is a S***...so I work on it again to have a better one... this one is called Blue-eyed angel...It deals with our lovely Chris Martin... God bless you beautiful Chris!!!! When I'm looking at your blue eyes They're so wide, deep and bright I could dive into them like into a love night When I stare you, you hypnotize me You are a blue-eyed angel You make me feel so well I'm under your truth spell Lies are not what I want you to tell Your voice is so beautiful, you make me dream It enters me, travels in me, and invades me You're everywhere in my whole body I can see your lips moving when I hear you sing Your blue eyes make me stare at you I can see innocence, strengh, joy and truth You never hide your feelings, and you Could read everything in my eyes too I can feel your crooning voice in me It carries loads of feelings and you see You play with my heart's strings I love the sound of your voice, I love hear you sing You're someone I want to look like You're someone I belive in, like If you were God, and you strike me Yeah! You strike me so hard and so true... And an other one here, called Fog Mountains are closer and closer I'm losing my breath forever Now they hide the sunlight My face turns to white I'm dying under this hidden sun It's like threaten me with a gun My heart runs really too fast I wonder how long it will last I can feel the blow of the fear It blows on my neck, and I'm afraid Clouds make my day darker I've nothing, no clue, no answer Will the sun be back at least once? Around me, everywhere, I glance But what an I looking for? Please tell me where is the north! My heart runs really too fast I wonder how long it will last I can feel the blow of the fear It blows on my neck, and I'm afraid I'm lost, lost in this fog I need a light, guide me Guide me out of this fog And tell me you love me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oenona Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 Mike: ueee, you've posted it but to be honest I dunno about who you're talking about in this poem :P but I will only say "this blue eyes have captivated me too" :blush: Anyway, I think this poem could be much longer, I think there're more things for mentioning about this person although it's still good, like all of yours. :) EDIT: all that I wrote is refered to your first poem. I've read your second one and I find it much deeper. I think its title is just perfect! I know we don't really know him, but besides this, we can talk about the feelings this person causes to us, and this is what makes more personal and beautiful a poem, in my opinion. Really, that one is great! :wings: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 wow...written at the speed of light!!! Called Hard I can see it coming The night is light By lightnings I'm hypnotized... The speed of light Is freezing me And makes me so free A dark sky now Is angry and it blows It sounds so strong Scary, intense and long I see the dark side Angry, evil and pride Earth talks to us But we ignore her The speed of light Is freezing me And makes me so free! I'm staring At those lightnings I can't turn off my eyes Cos it's so nice Pearls are crashing on my face I feel your power and your strengh Love me, kill me with your light bullets And give me a heaven ticket The speed of light Is freezing me And makes me so free You touch me in my heart I can feel it hard You get my dark side And I'm hypnotized... See ya for a next one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 back with an other one...mmmh...this is not my best one... Called Limit Standing on the bridge My mind is frozen I stare at the ground I jump, and I hear the sound The sound of my mad thoughts The ground is closer now I hear the wind, it blows I'm going through it And I reach the limit I'm underground now Falling in the infinite Carrying on going through it And my fears grow Grow again and I know I'm scared about that I doubt everyday and what What could I do Cos I really don't know Lost, lost again, I'm a chained prisoner who is free I want me back, me, me, me... See you soon 4 an other one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 An other one...called Another Me Sitting near the lake and staring at it Everything begins to disappear The only thing I could still see Was this bridge to another me This dark water feels in me The fears and want to keep me All those feelings I just can't fight They try to make me die in the night They want to hide me from the daylight They don't want me to carry on They know something I couldn't know I'm lost in the swirl of my thoughts I will sink soon, and I don't have any boat I try to swim against but I just can't The whirlpools to which I'm chained Try to drown myself, I want to fight I really want to find out my lane All those feelings I just can't fight They try to make me die in the night They want to hide me from the daylight They don't want me to carry on They know something I couldn't know Please release me, please set me free Oh! Don't shut me down, and just let me Let me leave this sea, just let me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 heh, whoa. I had no idea anyone was posting in this thread... awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted July 2, 2006 Author Share Posted July 2, 2006 she always sits right next to me stress agony worry jitters love sequentially degrade me into your slave your torture burdens down on my shoulders I hope we're better when we're older every new face makes us colder but every new face is yours turn around so I can see everyone is you when their hair is curly protestors smash against the fence of every similar countenance once broken it cannot be saved my spirit, eternally your slave I take my love into my grave let me be your radioactivity make a course through your veins living blood, a completely insane amount of it amount of it amount of it when I sat behind you I had peace forever the amount of release forever the amount of love is real turn around so I can see everyone is you when their hair is curly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ondes Martenot Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 my first try to write a poem in german lol it might contain mistakes, since i'm not a native speaker :/ hysterie wenn ich krank und einsam bin, nur deine wörter machen für mich sinn, die ganze welt erscheint mir widerlich, du, nur du hilfst mir plötzlich quelle meines lichtes, die mir die neuen tagen bringt, anfang meines tages, der mir in meiner dunkelheit hilft bist du, nur du... wenn meine wunden bluten, und meiner geist krepiert, bitte, lege deinen kopf an meine schultern ich will nur küssen dich nur dich will ich... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 my first try to write a poem in german lol it might contain mistakes, since i'm not a native speaker :/ hysterie wenn ich krank und einsam bin, nur deine wörter machen für mich sinn, die ganze welt erscheint mir widerlich, du, nur du hilfst mir plötzlich quelle meines lichtes, die mir die neuen tagen bringt, anfang meines tages, der mir in meiner dunkelheit hilft bist du, nur du... wenn meine wunden bluten, und meiner geist krepiert, bitte, lege deinen kopf an meine schultern ich will nur küssen dich nur dich will ich... Awwww....Nik there are maybe a few grammar mistakes...but all in all it's really good! I really like it:wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ondes Martenot Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 danke Julia :nice: glad someone liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gitta Rensolo Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Hehe no problem...I seriously like it....because somehow I can find myself in this at the moment.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 so what does it say? Is there an english version, Nik?:wink3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ondes Martenot Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 haha Josce, it's not that hard to translate it but i'm not going to do it. i just don't like to translate the original texts because it always ends up a mess :stunned: it's about THE girl that i need, miss. she's the onliest to me, i can't live without her, she's the onliest who inspires me. and i'm just telling her how much does she mean to me, i'm actually more begging "please, put your face onto my shoulders i only want to kiss you you, only you... " for me it looks more like a hysteria...and i think this poem is about me. i felt exactly the same 1 year ago, exactly in June-July ;) P.S and Jo could you please lock this one? http://www.coldplaying.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31997 thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdMike Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 yeah!everyone...a other poem is here... Called Mirror I went to the lake It's the mirror of my thoughts Here, there's no truth, no lies and no fake It gives me back my questions, and it shows It shows my deepest mind and what I am It scares me so much and I can't No! I can't climb the mountain But I've tried again and again My fears are locking me The lake blows my name everytime I'm screaming at the sky My pains and my thoughts, My life and my hopes I'm falling from the clouds I'm too shy but I shout My fears are gonna kill me I want to break this wall here And set me free from it Fighting against my fears And release all my tears Is all I just need I'll fight 'til I'll bleed The lake blows my name everytime I'm screaming at the sky My pains and my thoughts, My life and my hopes Breaking the chains which keep me I'm going to do it, just to see To see the world, the truth And to know what it's about If I could see it now The way the sky glows When my heart is racing When my mind is burning When the truth is coming The lake blows my name everytime I'm screaming at the sky My pains and my thoughts, My life and my hopes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 haha Josce, it's not that hard to translate it but i'm not going to do it. i just don't like to translate the original texts because it always ends up a mess :stunned: it's about THE girl that i need, miss. she's the onliest to me, i can't live without her, she's the onliest who inspires me. and i'm just telling her how much does she mean to me, i'm actually more begging "please, put your face onto my shoulders i only want to kiss you you, only you... " for me it looks more like a hysteria...and i think this poem is about me. i felt exactly the same 1 year ago, exactly in June-July ;) P.S and Jo could you please lock this one? http://www.coldplaying.com/forum/showthread.php?t=31997 thanks :D Sounds like it's a good poem..........:P and got it :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted July 12, 2006 Author Share Posted July 12, 2006 thanks for sharing pplz a short poem about a person oh, that falling free was the method melody beautiful description of thee truly harmonically your body truly living lives eternally written words writ a boy cannot forget her memory on the mantle a box of tears tears through my soul Long Day today I have opened my book into an empty page your soul beckons for each line to be filled with love I'm sorry that today I could not carry you into a feild of it but now I promise you you are, you always have been an angel you will, you will always know where you belong and baby your eyes are destined for heaven and every day you've given heaven to me but now I promise you you are, you always have been an angel and now I promise you that today, I find another page filled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alyssa Posted July 12, 2006 Share Posted July 12, 2006 :blush: :nice: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted July 14, 2006 Author Share Posted July 14, 2006 music intelligent sinners conduct the betrayal that dogs wish they knew how beg your forgiveness or watch your bodies churdned into doggy chow forget your love forget you hell idealize idolotry don't die on top of me for those of us in wisdom say eat, drink, be merry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted July 16, 2006 Author Share Posted July 16, 2006 please everyone be nice on me I worked really hard on these two poems and I would appreciate anyone leaving out the hard criticism for these because of how hard I worked on them. Thank you for a girl you rock my white cotton socks in a box poem the sky is blue and I love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ClearAsCrystal Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 wow Eric :stunned: just WOW some one deserves a pulitzer or whatever they give out for AMAZING poems :wacky: ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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