do it, i'm sure it will be good! :)

 

song coming up today

do it, i'm sure it will be good! :)

 

song coming up today

awesome :dance:

I hope mine is any good

Oh, wow. I really love this poem.

 

 

 

thanks, i do like it too:smug:

 

 

 

those are amazing Eric, so descriptive, and good atmosphere-creating.:thumbsup:

okay so here is one of my song lyrics that i wrote this year! tell me what you think! :)

 

 

Rear-View Mirror

 

This comes

Through my rotten soul

The hardness

To my blackened core

 

But I come alive

Washed away

I can’t seek

An honest other day

 

Look at everything passing behind you

See the faces and landscapes change

In my rear-view mirror I see

The colours of the things I didn’t know

The truth behind the things I didn’t know

I finally know the way I should go

 

I’m moving out

In the right direction now

Though my compass is wrong

I’m not going back

 

But I come alive

Washed away

I can’t seek

An honest other day

 

Look at everything passing behind you

See the faces and landscapes change

In my rear-view mirror I see

The colours of the things I didn’t know

The truth behind the things I didn’t know

I finally know the way I should go

 

I won’t look behind me

I won’t look behind me

I won’t look behind me

I won’t look behind me

See the things that I should see

Be the person that I really need

 

But I come alive

Washed away

I can’t seek

An honest other day

 

Look at everything passing behind you

See the faces and landscapes change

In my rear-view mirror I see

The colours of the things I didn’t know

The truth behind the things I didn’t know

I finally know the way I should go

 

I won’t look behind me

I won’t look behind me

so what did everyone think?

EDIT: Double post

So heres mine i thought i'll contribute it was an english project so i had to take the first line from the brilliant shakespeare :) anyway

Hope you like :) x

 

From you i have been absent. Absent in the spring

Although we're apart now it doesn't change a thing

hath put a spirit on you of your youth and everything

That the guards of hell laughed and jumped along with him

How should i compare thee?

Thee and all the guilt

When we are apart

Our love is unbuilt x

wow, very good!

I liked it! :)

 

and what did you think of my lyric?

your such a good poet i could never write like that long :O

whats ur name ? :) x

My name is William.

 

That's just one lyric! I have over 100 of those!

I have a sonnet to post next!

it is a Shakespearean Sonnet :)

 

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Lover’s Eulogy

 

I sit in stupor and praise

that amidst the summer shine,

my fidelity will withstand these difficult days.

Strange it may be to heed how she confides,

with or without my infatuated memory.

I expel myself under a new shadow,

meanwhile I should partake in ceremony.

Reminisce about what you were, my auxiliary fellow,

consequently I never leer at the glass.

Tinted yes, but luminous all the same.

As I once used to hunker during mass,

querying my savior to purge my blame.

It was my negligence leading to your slip,

but your memory I will eternally bind, clenched within my grip.

aww william i love ur poems

cant wait for the sonnet

Im emma thanks for the add :) ! x

post back on the personal message! :)

 

and the sonnet is in the edit! :)

okay :)

wait is the sonnet

lovers eulogy ? x

yes it is, it's about a lover at the funeral of his deceased lover.

yhh aww its sad :( x

i tend to write things that are sad!

here is another one!

 

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Again (What You Took)

 

You’re a lucky one

Things keep on coming back

You’re a lucky one

I keep on coming back

 

Washed far away

Just for today

Disappearing

In and out

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

 

Rushing to my head

I think of you

Rushing to my head

I won’t forget you

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

 

Move me

Trapped all night

Hit me

Held all night

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

Omg ! :cry: will its really good

I love the part

' The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains '

:) x

i like that too, that's the part i wrote first!

want another?

i tend to write things that are sad!

here is another one!

 

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Again (What You Took)

 

You’re a lucky one

Things keep on coming back

You’re a lucky one

I keep on coming back

 

Washed far away

Just for today

Disappearing

In and out

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

 

Rushing to my head

I think of you

Rushing to my head

I won’t forget you

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

 

Move me

Trapped all night

Hit me

Held all night

 

The pulsing cords in my veins

Break the bonds

And tear the chains

Keep me up

Then back again

Back again

 

I LOVE THIS ONE! seriously, grab a guitar and paste some chords in there! :P

 

 

 

 

and after some rubbish, here's the first decent lyric i've written in many, many days :disappointed:

 

FIRST TRIES NEVER MAKE SENSE

 

Same pretty faces

than ten miuntes before

singing loud to a love song

in a drunken singalong

Tied to the wrists

around her evil waist

Wondering what may i say

not to awake the beast

in a room full of animals around

 

I'm not a target

and you're not nineteen

but you look so beautiful

inside your skin

 

failing to escape

then giving up to try

tongue-tied and surprised

but laying on a cloud

Sweaty perfect bodies

swimming in champagne

wondering what may i say

not to awake the beast

in a room full of animals around

 

I'm not a target

and you're not nineteen

but you look so beautiful

inside your skin

 

in a room full of animals around

in a room full of animals around

in a room full of animals around

really?

 

thanks so much, I have put my voice to a couple songs, but i need to learn an instrument.

I really want to do something to my music! :D

don't you have a guitar? it would be the easy way

I do have an acoustic and a bass, however i need to get around to learning how to play! :P

 

I have two new ones I want to post, it's about losing someone you love, obviously :)

Jonny, broken smile

see how this turns out into autumn

and, if i can

i'll be flying with the leafs so far

cry, cry.

 

Boiling ancient house

ghosts are coming like strangers

i don't mean to fight

wondering if i might try

try, try

 

I am wasted time

don't even try to rescue me

no, don't rescue me

I've done what i had to do

I've done what i had to do

on this monday afternoon

 

Jonny, love of mine

see me vanish like the sand through your hands

keep my shadow

we can stroll in endless ways

ways, ways

 

I am wasted time

don't even try to rescue me

no, don't rescue me

I've done what i had to do

I've done what i had to do

on this monday afternoon

 

I'll be fine

where sunflowers meet the sun

meet me on the sun

meet me on the sun

meet me under the sun

 

 

 

 

 

very cheesy :cheesy:

cheesy, but i like it.

songs and writing like that tend to be the best writing! :)

 

I have another, hang on a sec....

 

Falling From The Seams

 

we've said goodbye for now

it won't be long my dear

your beauty waits my company

the pain i take for this love

 

i guess you should read

and try to see

without you here

I'm falling from the seams

just hold me close

i'll follow through

and try to see

without you here

my lovely dear

i'm saddened yes,

and falling from the seams

 

this distance is simply killing me

i wish you'd try and reach out

your soul waits its partner

the things i'd do for you

 

i guess you should read

and try to see

without you here

I'm falling from the seams

just hold me close

i'll follow through

and try to see

without you here

my lovely dear

i'm saddened yes,

and falling from the seams

 

it's like nothing else matters

you're the only one

know that forever

this life of mine is yours

 

i guess you should read

and try to see

without you here

I'm falling from the seams

just hold me close

i'll follow through

and try to see

without you here

my lovely dear

i'm saddened yes,

and falling from the seams