Best u Can Posted November 2, 2009 Author Share Posted November 2, 2009 *coldplay lyrics, duh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
мaямellata Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 Words I was hoping like a child whose eyes were shut from day I was dead, like the foliage that rests on soiled earth I was screaming like the wind It howls to me when no one does I was bleeding like desert sand sweeping across my skin I was heartless, and had given up on love I asked for the sting of death. If I wanted anything, it was your truth You are more than hope You are more than life You have two lives Both of us needed you You have two hearts beating in you You have two souls which depend on your breath You have what no one else has. You are the music I hear when I'm in the sky an explosion of air I waited in line just to see if you care* marching through hell, I'm sure I would march again again again You have two marching beats which depend on your breath You have two eyes in which there is now life and hope. You waited for me You waited You carried us through night You hid us in the safe chambers. I have no name for you yet except these words You are the marching beat to my beaten and bruised, injured travail You are the north star to my emancipation You are the realization to my seeking heart and the words to my silence. These words are more true than life and if not, God will strike me down There's a spirit that has poured on my head Words and feelings I don't understand like the other heart you hold, which doesn't know your meaning nor comprehends your worth which was valued through Christ's death and God strike me if I don't love you like him. I was hoping like a child whose eyes were shut from day. But now there are two hearts beating in your chest. *tear* I.LOVE.YOU. ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 2, 2009 Author Share Posted November 2, 2009 *tear* I.LOVE.YOU. ♥ :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crests Posted November 2, 2009 Share Posted November 2, 2009 That is beautiful Eric :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
мaямellata Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 BUMPY :heart: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted November 18, 2009 Author Share Posted November 18, 2009 awwwwww :shy: thanks everyone! you are too sweet! ........ I came here because Cresty made a poem and she's too shy to post it, so I will do that for her :smiley: If you like it, post it in the poets thread for me :P Poetry. Something that simply can not be done. Like those things you said, that sounded better in your head. You said them anyways, because you're crazy. Go home, I'll eat you up. Steak the inspiration within youm the foldiers in your coffee cup. Give to some to make it happen. One thing where, why are you telling me your dream? I have a different kind of dream. To tell you, settle down and consume. What is it? You know what it is, do I? Do you really? Does it even know? Does anything know? What is it? It is what it is, time for a crash landing. Where is the logic, the storyline? Is it too fragile to even think about? And what is time? I feel in seconds, think in minutes, haven't talked to you in hours. One, two three. Stop it. Rewind, fast forward, snap off the pause and be here now Screaming out love is it good enough for you? Move in hours, I haven't moved in ours. Scrawl out your nightmares, I've been you for years. Don't you know? me, you, we, us. I am you, and who are you? Wake up. Why are you walking around with one eye closed? This is irrelevent, please come see me immediately. Please don't see me. Fuss me not, love me not, want me not. I don't care, we are all creatures. You are the sun, let's go for a swim. Sharks need love. Love them, but remember to love me more. The cartoons you drew, they were all to love me. Surface love, diamond love, cold, hard. Do you sparkle in the sun? THIS POEM MAKES NO SENSE TO ME :bigcry: But in a way it does. it's so beautiful :surprised: I especially like... "Like those things you said, that sounded better in your head." "Screaming out love is it good enough for you?" "You are the sun, let's go for a swim." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crests Posted November 18, 2009 Share Posted November 18, 2009 Omg :blush: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingV Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 whenever my grandad comes to visit from 400kms away him and i go for a bush walk in the australian outback along some track put there designed to trap tourists into venturing out into the smelly bush... any ways we came to a hut, and in the hut was a book that people who have stayed in the hut write in too pass the time.... about ten pages past the last entry was an untitled poem written that looked like it had been written in a hurry, anyways id like to share it with you... Somewhere, two unwanted children burn an old lady to death in her oven Somewhere, the queen dances in heated iron shoes till she drops dead Somewhere, a women marries the man who molested her in her sleep Somewhere, someone wishes for a fairytale ending even though shes never read a god damned fairy tale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crests Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 That's........good. I wish we knew who wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyingV Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 there was a scribbled initial at the bottom that resembled an M Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 W theory. It's actually an upside-down M. ;) The Magic of human imagination and the beauty of Nature there for all to see, for all to see and feel. The woven tapestry of life, love, of Medieval England all held in a single cup of sweet wine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
мaямellata Posted November 29, 2009 Share Posted November 29, 2009 chuck, i love it ♥ delirio sentimental. a veces me encuentro buscando respuestas en el aroma de las velas, o detrás de ilusiones creadas por un escritor, no se por donde esconderme pensando que mis sentimientos son tan obvios a los ojos de los demás, cuando en realidad el mundo en su locura esta demasiado distraído como para fijarse. y me pregunto porque la simplicidad de una melodía pueda llegar a tocarme el alma, transformando todo lo que habita en mi mente en colores, confundiéndose con pensamientos hasta llegar a explotar en una confusión inmensa. ay, realmente no tengo la mínima idea de cual sea la motivación detrás de mis palabras pueda que este día de nubes blancas y egoístas con su única motivación de esconder el cielo me ponga de un humor indescriptible, forzándome a pensar demasiado. me pregunto.. si solamente todo tuviera sentido en este instante, dejaría que memorias ya olvidadas por el tiempo me lastimen? no son mis recuerdos, no pertenecen a mi vida, yo no los viví.. por eso mismo sigo insistiendo que no tendrían porque hacerme sangran por dentro, no hay razón alguna. si solo aprendiera a despegarme de la rutina en la cual me e perdido donde invento pasados y futuros que no existentes ya no tendría la urgencia de ahogarme en palabras que de alguna forma aprendieron a expresarse solas, un día lograre por fin a liberarme y cuando ese día llegue aprenderé a no odiar tanto a mi misma y seré capaz de ver el mundo en ojos mas sencillos. it probably doesn't make much sense :disappointed: it sort of came to me & i had to write it down before i forgot it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imke Posted November 29, 2009 Share Posted November 29, 2009 I'm not going to pretend that I completely understood it, but I still think it's lovely. Especially the last sentence made me think. :kiss: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 Isabella, about all I could say is that I wish I understood Spanish! :sombrero: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LiquidSky Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 This one wasn't really a poem or anything like that but I made it a thread when I wrote it and some people thought it was a poem and others liked it..so I'm posting it here! :snobby: Sometimes I feel like I don't know Sometimes I feel like I'm a dream Sometimes I feel like I don't exist Sometimes I hurt so much that I forget how to feel Sometimes I am comfortably numb Sometimes I get so distant and cold but lately I've been aggressive without a reason Sometimes I want a lover who I don't want to know at all I don't know if it the weather changing but I'm definitely feeling the blues tonight... Sometimes I just want a sincere friend it's called 'sometimes' :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
мaямellata Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 imke & chuck :hug: ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tnspieler1012 Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 This one wasn't really a poem or anything like that but I made it a thread when I wrote it and some people thought it was a poem and others liked it..so I'm posting it here! :snobby: it's called 'sometimes' :lol: after the first line I thought it was gonna be a rip-off of U2's Ultraviolet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck kottke Posted December 1, 2009 Share Posted December 1, 2009 imke & chuck :hug: ♥ Aww gee, thanks Isabella! Now, give us your best poem (in English please!)!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
мaямellata Posted December 1, 2009 Share Posted December 1, 2009 haha, when i get ispired again i will for sure. :hug: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eff-exx Posted December 31, 2009 Share Posted December 31, 2009 Somewhere, someone wishes for a fairytale ending even though shes never read a god damned fairy tale wow. i keep my poems filed up. :thinking: is there a cheesy short story thread somewhere here? :thinking: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ivet Posted January 4, 2010 Share Posted January 4, 2010 chuck, i love it ♥ delirio sentimental. a veces me encuentro buscando respuestas en el aroma de las velas, o detrás de ilusiones creadas por un escritor, no se por donde esconderme pensando que mis sentimientos son tan obvios a los ojos de los demás, cuando en realidad el mundo en su locura esta demasiado distraído como para fijarse. y me pregunto porque la simplicidad de una melodía pueda llegar a tocarme el alma, transformando todo lo que habita en mi mente en colores, confundiéndose con pensamientos hasta llegar a explotar en una confusión inmensa. ay, realmente no tengo la mínima idea de cual sea la motivación detrás de mis palabras pueda que este día de nubes blancas y egoístas con su única motivación de esconder el cielo me ponga de un humor indescriptible, forzándome a pensar demasiado. me pregunto.. si solamente todo tuviera sentido en este instante, dejaría que memorias ya olvidadas por el tiempo me lastimen? no son mis recuerdos, no pertenecen a mi vida, yo no los viví.. por eso mismo sigo insistiendo que no tendrían porque hacerme sangran por dentro, no hay razón alguna. si solo aprendiera a despegarme de la rutina en la cual me e perdido donde invento pasados y futuros que no existentes ya no tendría la urgencia de ahogarme en palabras que de alguna forma aprendieron a expresarse solas, un día lograre por fin a liberarme y cuando ese día llegue aprenderé a no odiar tanto a mi misma y seré capaz de ver el mundo en ojos mas sencillos. it probably doesn't make much sense :disappointed: it sort of came to me & i had to write it down before i forgot it. :heart: me gusta, Iz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted January 11, 2010 Author Share Posted January 11, 2010 The Starbucks Sleeve Said, Replied like authentic dialog- between an inanimate object and objectified thinker Make your Spirits Bright. Wish. Make your Spirit's Darkest wish. The paper sleeve speaks a white truth that my truthful cynicism corrects My depressed neglecting, reflecting my cynical inflection my repressed regrets repeat internal aggressions fighting fear with light- the lie stays limp like my blood's flow in a drunken stupor Magnified by this caffeinated hot chocolate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted January 20, 2010 Author Share Posted January 20, 2010 Rebuilding Something I need to write while this depression is fresh in my head like a dream I don't believe in rhyme, I don't believe in taking the time to be happy mixing voices and names, samely waning through and through this river-wading, waters wash across my face mixing sounds like scrapes on a plate the clank of one neuron repeats like a rhythm but no one believes that it has been beloved or beknown ignoring that shore of glorious adoration betwixt in the bits of brittle rocks shocked by waves' crashes on the black shore, restored to an effervescent thought shining with the mild glow of stages, long ago: a round repetition it sounds like I've found my splatter on the floor you fumigate this house with rage one, two, three four, five, six, seve... must sever the ever depressant waver of my ill-savored... ill-completed sense the sentences tense, so muscle-like the sweat tears in your arms I have captured them in my hands I have grasped your sweat tears sometimes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Best u Can Posted February 2, 2010 Author Share Posted February 2, 2010 Voices Voices whither around me like a dying waterfall Droplets slipping into the netherworld of everything The everything is our world. The everything is yours. The netherworld is theirs. Voices tell me to wait for the warmth of sunrise. Flowers surrounding me, feeling you, raise the hairs on my neck. Raised like light against falling water. Raised like a musical mist. The constant pounding cannot compare to the pounding of this heart. The one that waits for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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