i want to write more of my fanfic, but i have to go to bed soon. :(

night Brooke(soon):hug:

bah, i couldn't resist! :sneaky:

 

How Infinite is Space?

 

Part 14 (holy snot, 14 chapters already??!?!?!?)

 

 

"Oh no, Retaw, I don't know if I'm ready for this!" Chris and Retaw were back in the training room again, but this time there was a giant obstacle course that Retaw had set up.

 

"You'll be fine, Chris Martin! You've been training very hard this past week, and you will be able to clear this course in no time."

 

"I don't really believe you, but OK. Well, here I go, I guess..." Chris started the obstacle course, running to the first cardboard cutout of an alien monster and then proceeding to punch it until it broke in half. He repeated this method three more times, then stopped.

 

"Why are you stopping, Chris Martin? You've only got four of the fifty!"

 

"FIFTY?!?!?! Retaw, I can't do this, I'm already tired!"

 

"That's because you're only punching them. Try some of the other moves you've been practicing!"

 

"Ugghhhhh! OK." Chris sighed, then ran over to the next cardboard cutout and kicked it. Surprised that it immediately broke in two, he sprinted to the following one and kicked it. After about ten minutes, he'd gone through all fifty of the cardboard alien monsters. Once he was finished, he went back to the start where Retaw was standing. "How'd I do?"

 

"Not bad. You finished in thirteen minutes."

 

"All right!"

 

"Yes, but I must warn you that these are merely cardboard cutouts. The real things will be much more difficult to defeat."

 

"Yeah, but with more training I should be able to kick their asses, right?"

 

"That's the spirit! I'm so glad that you are finally in a good and happy mood again, Chris Martin! You certainly deserve it."

 

"Yeah, well, I still wish Jonny was here. This whole thing would be a lot easier with his help."

 

"It would be," Retaw agreed, nodding his head. "Unfortunately, he is not here right now, so you must do this on your own. Now, try again, and this time try to beat ten minutes!"

 

Chris completed the obstacle course a second time, finishing in just under nine minutes. Retaw told him that he was dismissed for the rest of the day. Chris thanked him and then went back to his room, first stopping at the cafeteria to grab some dinner. Retaw, on the other hand, went to a room located on the floor above the training room to visit a certain passenger on the spaceship.

 

"Retaw! Hey, how's it going? Is Chris doing all right training by himself?"

 

"Yes, Jonathan, he has shown a great improvement over the past few days. His skills are not yet at the high level that yours are, but he is getting there. I suspect that in another few days he will be just as good as you are. Although, by then you might be even better."

 

"Is that even possible?" Jonny laughed.

 

"Improvement is always possible, Jonathan. Which reminds me, Chris is finished with his training for the day, so now it is your turn. I've set up the cardboard cutouts for him, but if you like you can try something a bit harder."

 

"Uh, I think I'm good with the cardboard for today. I'm kinda tired. Plus, I don't want you to have to go through the trouble of changing them."

 

"Nonsense, it would only take a few minutes. But if you insist on the cardboard, I will not argue with you."

 

"Do you think we should tell Chris that I didn't leave?"

 

"That depends. Have you made your decision yet?"

 

"Yeah, I think so."

 

"Is it positive or negative?"

 

"Well... you'll just have to wait and see, won't you?"

 

"I don't know, Jonathan. What if the suspense kills me?"

 

"Then you won't be around to see, I guess. If there's some sort of afterlife you can find out from there."

 

"And if there isn't?"

 

"Then you're screwed." Jonny stood up and walked over to Retaw, who was standing in the doorway of the room Jonny was staying in. "Come on, I'm ready to go train now."

 

"As you wish." Retaw and Jonny left the room and headed towards the elevator to go to the floor below.

 

"I'm thinking tomorrow we tell Chris?"

 

"Tomorrow sounds all right to me."

 

"Actually, we shouldn't tell him anything. But, um, I'll let him know... uh, 'somehow'..."

 

 

 

Sorry I havent been posting! I had to leave, I am trying to work on chapter 7 now, and I will hopefully have it done for tomorrow! :D

SO---Will there be a Fanfic Lounge thread? Does one already exist?

I missed a lot and I'm very confused.

 

I think it's a good idea. To make it easier to find stories, we should probably review them and talk about them in another thread.

 

Oh--but great new stories peoples! :nice:

 

Kyra, that's an excellent suggestion and would make it easier for updating the fanfics archive but you'd have to quote what you're talking about all the time, it might get confusing, so I'm not sure it's entirely feasible; but otherwise it's a good idea.

 

Also to ohmystarisfading, not sure if you're aware of this, but your first post in the Coldplay Archive is dated "18 april 2029". Might have some gremlins to smack.

 

Last note, yes, I am going to try and update the archive to bring it up to speed. I'm thinking going to need some secondary help for it, but I must warn you, it's VERY behind, a month or two at the least.

Also, I think I'm going to eventually have to look for alternative places to host the archive.

The amount of growth I've seen in this thread tells me soon I'm going to run out of space to fit it all in three posts. The only option I can think of at the moment is that I find a free forum hosting service to put it in so it's still in a familiar format for everyone, because

a) I don't have the money to use a paid for one and

b) quite frankly I don't think I'd be able to survive on donations, would be unstable and a pain.

 

I'm not doing LiveJournal either, that thing's limited.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

20 pages of fics in a day is ridiculous. What are you guys on?

"let's do it!... i heard that" :lol:

i actually have the perfect pic to go with this fanfic...

:P

i have one thing to say to this chapter, which is this:

OOH, BABY, YOU WANNA GET FROSTY WITH MEEEEEEHHH?? :dance: :lol:

 

:lol:

 

thanks Brooke! love part 14!

 

@coldspot...well...my friends DO say i'm on crack...but if i am i don't realize it :P :laugh3:

:lol:

 

thanks Brooke! love part 14!

 

@coldspot...well...my friends DO say i'm on crack...but if i am i don't realize it :P :laugh3:

 

:nice: thanks!

for some reason i had made that a few years ago... :shrug:

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

20 pages of fics in a day is ridiculous. What are you guys on?

 

Exactly, I'm not starting on this until I get a second hand of help because otherwise you guys are gonna power ahead and spam the crap out of the thread. Then I won't be able to update :shame:

so many pages. so many fanfics. so much to catch up with!!! :uhoh:!!!

Now the thread is slow.

 

:blank:

slow as in....?

Chapters are few and far between.

 

 

Sort of. :/

heey guys im bk from school

:D been catching up on the fics

all good xx

SUPER COLDPLAY

part 5

 

 

Over the next month, Super Coldplay became an international sensation. The crime rate dropped, and the band's music climbed to the top of the charts. One day, while the boys were working on some new material in the bakery, the door flew open.

 

"Boys!" Brian stepped forward, an enormous smile frozen on his face.

 

"More botox?" Chris joked, glancing at Jonny who laughed back.

 

Brian still smiled. "Acutally yes...but I want to congradulate you on a job well done, and with the new album coming out soon, I'm sure you'll be a n even bigger hit than ever before."

 

Will grinned. "I like the sound of that!"

 

Guy's cell phone rang, and he flipped it open. "Hello? Oh, hey!"

 

Jonny sighed and rolled his eyes at Chris, who laughed and winked at Will.

 

"Yeah...got it...see ya in a few!" Guy closed his phone.

 

"It was Lyric," Jon spoke for him. "She says someone's holding up a bank on 42nd street."

 

Guy frowned, "Yeah...what he said."

 

"Well, let's go!" The boys jumped up and ran outside, making their way into the city.

 

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MEANWHILE

 

Brian closed the door behind him and sat down in his comfy office chair. "Please, take a seat."

 

A man sat down in the seat opposite Brian. "You wanted to talk to me?"

 

"Yes...um...." Brian was still smiling, the botox hadn't worn off yet. "We...we're going to have to let you go."

 

"But...but why?!"

 

"Phil..." Brian sighed. "You're a great manager but...well...we decided that you can't be part of the band without superpowers."

 

"So, what are you suggesting?!" He got out of his seat, his face red. "That I go get attacked by some mutant cow?!"

 

"Well, if you want to be a part of the band, then yes."

 

Phil stomped out of the room, and an anger burning inside him.

 

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SOMEWHERE IN THE CITY WHERE THE BAKERY IS-IDK WHERE THAT IS CUZ I'M STUPID

 

Police cars were surrounding the bank as the boys walked towards the door. They stopped to take a deep breath.

 

"Be careful!" Lyric called from behind the police barracade.

 

Guy waved back, but grimaced when Will hit him in the stomach. The group opened the doors to the bank...

 

 

DUH DUH DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:lol:

:shocked3:!

 

wow!!

 

 

i think we all know who the villian is going to be now. :uhoh:.

 

 

great job!!! :dance:!!!

Jesus I missed like half of Super Coldplay!

*Goes back to find them*

:escaping:

*dramatic chord* :stunned:!

:drummer: *drumm roll*

Jesus I missed like half of Super Coldplay!

*Goes back to find them*

:escaping:

 

:lol:

 

yeah...i have nothing better to do so i just keep writing...the last part REALLY sucked though :P

^^ NO IT DIDNT! I love Super Coldplay, is soo funny!

it didn't!! it really didn't!!!

:blush:

 

you guys are sooo nice...i'm going to start writing part 6 :D

yay!! :dance:!!