hey urs is gonna be good brooke :) x

...

@low- IT'S OVER?? :cry:

see, you can write great fanfics!

 

you're as bad as caitlyn getting me addicted to the chrissy thread! :lol:

 

now i'll go think of a new fanfic idea...:inquisitive: :thinking: x 100000000000000000000001

wowzahh, it's the next part!

 

How Infinite is Space?

Part 15

 

 

 

"Then he tried to take my chocolate pudding! And you know how I get when people try to take chocolate away from me. I mean, I had to give it to him because he was huge and scary, but still." Chris was lying on his bed in the dark, staring at the ceiling and describing the details of his day. "So, how was your day?" He turned his head to face the empty bed next to his. Chris had talked to Jonny every night since he had left, even though he knew he wouldn't get a response.

 

He stared at the nonexistent Jonny for a few minutes, then decided that it was time to sleep. He sighed and turned to face the wall, then closed his eyes and fell asleep.

 

It was the same dream he'd had for the past week. He and Jonny were the only two people on this extremely long stretch of highway- Chris on one side, Jonny on the other. Chris tried to walk over to Jonny, but as soon as he did a sudden mass of cars drove in between them. Eventually Chris would give up, and the cars would disappear. Then he would try again, only to be blocked. He'd never reach Jonny, and he knew it, yet he couldn't stop the dream. He couldn't stop trying to get to Jonny.

 

Chris woke up to the sound of someone knocking very loudly on his door. He got out of bed and opened the door to see some alien worker.

 

"Hello, Mr. Martin. Um, I'm sorry to bother you, but Retaw told me to inform you that you can have the day off because you've been working extra hard."

 

"Oh, OK. Well, thanks."

 

"No problem. Enjoy your day!"

 

"Yeah, you too." The alien worker left, and Chris stood in his doorway for a little while. He was up now, and although he was still tired he didn't want to go back to sleep and have that dream again. He finally decided that today might be a good day to explore the spaceship. He walked to the elevator and pressed the button. While waiting, he thought he saw a tall, green-capped man walking around the corner nearby, but he decided that it must have been his imagination.

 

The elevator opened and Chris walked inside. He looked at all the buttons on the wall of the elevator, trying to decide which floor to start with. For some reason he couldn't explain, he chose to start with the top floor. It just seemed like the right choice. When the elevator reached the floor, Chris walked out into the empty hallway. He had no idea where to go from here. The spaceship was completely unfamiliar to him, apart from the floor where his room was. He wasn't even sure how big the spaceship was.

 

He wandered down the hallway and saw a door that was slightly open. He could see a light coming from the room. A light that looked as though it was coming from a television. Then he heard a woman's voice. It sounded so familiar. Where had he heard it before?

 

"Homeboy wore combat boots to the beach. I know you don’t want to call that your boyfriend. I know you don’t," the woman said. Chris still couldn't figure out where he knew the voice from. He walked into the room and saw an alien worker sitting, surely enough, in front of a television set... watching The Hills.

 

"Of course! How could I be so stupid?" Chris' outburst startled the alien, who had been so wrapped up in watching the show that he hadn't even noticed Chris had entered the room.

 

"Oh my! When did you get here?"

 

"About two seconds ago."

 

"Who... wait... are you Chris Martin? The one who will save us?"

 

"Um, yeah. So, why are you watching The Hills?"

 

"Retaw commanded me to study this show. He said you had a strange fascination with it."

 

"Yeah, it's my favorite show. See that girl right there?" Chris pointed to the screen. "That's Heidi. She's my favorite."

 

"Really? She doesn't appear to be very intelligent. Actually, none of them do."

 

"Well, no, they're not very intelligent. But that's what makes it so great, you know? You can watch this and think 'Wow, there really are people who are dumber than I am'. It makes me feel smart. But so does brushing my teeth, so what do I know, right?"

 

"Would you care to join me? I think watching this show might be more tolerable if I have someone here to watch with me."

 

"Yeah, absolutely!" Chris sat down next to the alien worker and stared at the television set. They must have watched about a dozen episodes, because by the time they were finished it was dinner time. Chris was starting to feel very hungry, so he went down to the cafeteria to eat. He stood in the line for about ten minutes before being able to order. When he finally did order, they were out of almost everything he had wanted, except the one thing that he wanted most- chocolate pudding.

 

There was only one cup of chocolate pudding left, so Chris ran towards it and grabbed it before anyone else even had a chance to look at it. He picked up the tray with the rest of his food on it, and walked over to the condiment table. He grabbed the ketchup and poured it all over the chicken he had on his tray so that the chicken itself was hardly visible. Then he felt a tap on his shoulder.

 

"Listen, if you want my pudding, you're gon-" He turned around, and Jonny pressed his lips against Chris'.

 

"Hmm... I guess that wasn't so bad," Jonny said, smiling.

 

"Jonny! You're back! You came back!" Chris threw himself at Jonny, wrapping his arms tightly around his neck. Jonny hugged him back, resting his hands on Chris' lower back.

 

"Actually, I never left."

 

"What?" Chris slightly pulled away from Jonny, but he kept his arms resting on his shoulders.

 

"I was here the whole time."

 

"But Retaw told me... how could you do that to me?"

 

"I wish I hadn't needed to, but Retaw thought that it would be a good idea for me to watch you 'from afar' while you... uh, broke down, I guess. I'm sorry!" Jonny could see the pain in Chris' eyes. "But the thing is, it worked!"

 

"It did?"

 

"Yeah. I guess it's... well, I mean, I was a bit freaked out at first, I think mostly because I didn't see it coming at all. It was... strange and weird, you know? But then I realised how much I hurt you, and how much you didn't deserve it. And I've heard everything you've said, you know. When you were in the bathroom with Retaw, I heard that. And all those nights you asked me how my day was. You're so sweet, Chris. And I'm sorry that I couldn't see it before." Chris stared into Jonny's brilliantly green eyes, completely speechless.

 

"Jonny, I..."

 

"Yeah, I love you too." Chris smiled, and tears began rolling down his face. For the first time, however, they were tears of happiness.

 

"Oh, God, now I'm turning into a woman," Chris laughed as he wiped his cheeks dry.

 

"Well, I am more into women than men, you know. So it can't be all bad."

 

"Oh, OK. Well as long as you like it. Hey, whaddya say we go eat now?"

 

"Hells to the yeah! I'm starving. I haven't eaten anything all day, I was so busy talking to Retaw." Chris and Jonny walked towards the nearest empty table.

 

"What were you talking about?"

 

"Uh, you."

 

"Oh... I was watching The Hills."

 

"Oh, Chris," Jonny said, rolling his eyes. "We never change, do we?"

 

 

YAY BROOKE! I wuv it! :hug:

SUPER COLDPLAY[/color][/u]

part what? 9? :lol:

 

 

The robot came crashing down to the ground. Guy clutched onto the arm for dear life, the last thing he heard, a woman's scream.

 

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Jonny helped Chris out of the robot's fallen foot, the two watching as it landed, sparks flying from the crumbling metal. Will ran first. "Guy and Lyric!" He exclaimed.

 

The other two followed him, rushing to the robot. Chris lifted the entire robot over his head, tossing it towards the setting sun. "Guy!" He yelled, finding his friend.

 

Guy was still a walking flame, but soon the fire faded away. "What the bloody hell..." He opened his eyes, looking around him. A hazy smoke surrounded where he lay, and he slowly sat up.

 

"You okay, Guy?" Jon smiled down at his friend.

 

The smoke slowly disappeared, and Guy could see the outline of a limp body ahead of him. "Lyric!" Guy stumbled to get up, realizing he had a slight wound on his head. He made his way to her, sitting by her and holding her hand.

 

Will set his hand on Guy's shoulder, "Guy..." Chris looked at Jonny and frowned.

 

Guy sighed. "It's my fault..." He looked back at Lyric, her eyes opening slowly.

 

"You guys are so gullable!" she laughed. Carefully, she sat up. "Did you win?"

 

At that moment, the police drove by, Phil sitting in the back seat of the car.

 

"I'll take that as a yes." Lyric leaned towards Guy to give him a kiss. :blush:

 

And, well, they all lived happily ever after...continuing to fight crime together, as SUPER COLDPLAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

FIN

 

 

 

:D

:stunned:its over????:bigcry::bigcry:

This story is it cant be over!!!!:sad:

But I told you you were a great writer!!!!!:smug:

:lol:

^:laugh3:

 

thanks! i'm just going to try to think of a new topic...and i think i've got one...:sneaky:

:sneaky:

that smiley tells me I'll love it:wink3:

 

:lol:cant wait!!!!:dance:

i prolly won't post it for awhile tho:\...I'M BUILDING THE SUSPENSE!

wowzahh, it's the next part!

 

How Infinite is Space?

Part 15

 

 

 

"Then he tried to take my chocolate pudding! And you know how I get when people try to take chocolate away from me. I mean, I had to give it to him because he was huge and scary, but still." Chris was lying on his bed in the dark, staring at the ceiling and describing the details of his day. "So, how was your day?" He turned his head to face the empty bed next to his. Chris had talked to Jonny every night since he had left, even though he knew he wouldn't get a response.

 

He stared at the nonexistent Jonny for a few minutes, then decided that it was time to sleep. He sighed and turned to face the wall, then closed his eyes and fell asleep.

 

It was the same dream he'd had for the past week. He and Jonny were the only two people on this extremely long stretch of highway- Chris on one side, Jonny on the other. Chris tried to walk over to Jonny, but as soon as he did a sudden mass of cars drove in between them. Eventually Chris would give up, and the cars would disappear. Then he would try again, only to be blocked. He'd never reach Jonny, and he knew it, yet he couldn't stop the dream. He couldn't stop trying to get to Jonny.

 

Chris woke up to the sound of someone knocking very loudly on his door. He got out of bed and opened the door to see some alien worker.

 

"Hello, Mr. Martin. Um, I'm sorry to bother you, but Retaw told me to inform you that you can have the day off because you've been working extra hard."

 

"Oh, OK. Well, thanks."

 

"No problem. Enjoy your day!"

 

"Yeah, you too." The alien worker left, and Chris stood in his doorway for a little while. He was up now, and although he was still tired he didn't want to go back to sleep and have that dream again. He finally decided that today might be a good day to explore the spaceship. He walked to the elevator and pressed the button. While waiting, he thought he saw a tall, green-capped man walking around the corner nearby, but he decided that it must have been his imagination.

 

The elevator opened and Chris walked inside. He looked at all the buttons on the wall of the elevator, trying to decide which floor to start with. For some reason he couldn't explain, he chose to start with the top floor. It just seemed like the right choice. When the elevator reached the floor, Chris walked out into the empty hallway. He had no idea where to go from here. The spaceship was completely unfamiliar to him, apart from the floor where his room was. He wasn't even sure how big the spaceship was.

 

He wandered down the hallway and saw a door that was slightly open. He could see a light coming from the room. A light that looked as though it was coming from a television. Then he heard a woman's voice. It sounded so familiar. Where had he heard it before?

 

"Homeboy wore combat boots to the beach. I know you don’t want to call that your boyfriend. I know you don’t," the woman said. Chris still couldn't figure out where he knew the voice from. He walked into the room and saw an alien worker sitting, surely enough, in front of a television set... watching The Hills.

 

"Of course! How could I be so stupid?" Chris' outburst startled the alien, who had been so wrapped up in watching the show that he hadn't even noticed Chris had entered the room.

 

"Oh my! When did you get here?"

 

"About two seconds ago."

 

"Who... wait... are you Chris Martin? The one who will save us?"

 

"Um, yeah. So, why are you watching The Hills?"

 

"Retaw commanded me to study this show. He said you had a strange fascination with it."

 

"Yeah, it's my favorite show. See that girl right there?" Chris pointed to the screen. "That's Heidi. She's my favorite."

 

"Really? She doesn't appear to be very intelligent. Actually, none of them do."

 

"Well, no, they're not very intelligent. But that's what makes it so great, you know? You can watch this and think 'Wow, there really are people who are dumber than I am'. It makes me feel smart. But so does brushing my teeth, so what do I know, right?"

 

"Would you care to join me? I think watching this show might be more tolerable if I have someone here to watch with me."

 

"Yeah, absolutely!" Chris sat down next to the alien worker and stared at the television set. They must have watched about a dozen episodes, because by the time they were finished it was dinner time. Chris was starting to feel very hungry, so he went down to the cafeteria to eat. He stood in the line for about ten minutes before being able to order. When he finally did order, they were out of almost everything he had wanted, except the one thing that he wanted most- chocolate pudding.

 

There was only one cup of chocolate pudding left, so Chris ran towards it and grabbed it before anyone else even had a chance to look at it. He picked up the tray with the rest of his food on it, and walked over to the condiment table. He grabbed the ketchup and poured it all over the chicken he had on his tray so that the chicken itself was hardly visible. Then he felt a tap on his shoulder.

 

"Listen, if you want my pudding, you're gon-" He turned around, and Jonny pressed his lips against Chris'.

 

"Hmm... I guess that wasn't so bad," Jonny said, smiling.

 

"Jonny! You're back! You came back!" Chris threw himself at Jonny, wrapping his arms tightly around his neck. Jonny hugged him back, resting his hands on Chris' lower back.

 

"Actually, I never left."

 

"What?" Chris slightly pulled away from Jonny, but he kept his arms resting on his shoulders.

 

"I was here the whole time."

 

"But Retaw told me... how could you do that to me?"

 

"I wish I hadn't needed to, but Retaw thought that it would be a good idea for me to watch you 'from afar' while you... uh, broke down, I guess. I'm sorry!" Jonny could see the pain in Chris' eyes. "But the thing is, it worked!"

 

"It did?"

 

"Yeah. I guess it's... well, I mean, I was a bit freaked out at first, I think mostly because I didn't see it coming at all. It was... strange and weird, you know? But then I realised how much I hurt you, and how much you didn't deserve it. And I've heard everything you've said, you know. When you were in the bathroom with Retaw, I heard that. And all those nights you asked me how my day was. You're so sweet, Chris. And I'm sorry that I couldn't see it before." Chris stared into Jonny's brilliantly green eyes, completely speechless.

 

"Jonny, I..."

 

"Yeah, I love you too." Chris smiled, and tears began rolling down his face. For the first time, however, they were tears of happiness.

 

"Oh, God, now I'm turning into a woman," Chris laughed as he wiped his cheeks dry.

 

"Well, I am more into women than men, you know. So it can't be all bad."

 

"Oh, OK. Well as long as you like it. Hey, whaddya say we go eat now?"

 

"Hells to the yeah! I'm starving. I haven't eaten anything all day, I was so busy talking to Retaw." Chris and Jonny walked towards the nearest empty table.

 

"What were you talking about?"

 

"Uh, you."

 

"Oh... I was watching The Hills."

 

"Oh, Chris," Jonny said, rolling his eyes. "We never change, do we?"

 

 

Awwww! :blush: That was so delightful!

:cheesy: :nice:

Thanks :nice: I had initially dated it that way so the post would remain at the top but for some reason in communities it doesn't work like it would in a regular journal so I just left it that way.

 

 

For me the livejournal is easier to use because it's free, stories can be tagged in a number of ways (author, rating, band member and whether they are completed or not), there are separate posts for chapters where people can comment plus there is already one set up. I'm not sure what other features we would really need.

 

Either way we do need to organize everything since there have been so many updates recently. If you need help updating the thread let me know and I'll give you a hand.

 

Hm. After I update the archive, I could post all the old entries there with links to them, if you want.

Now attempting an update, stand by, do not post any new fanfics while I'm doing this. I must warn you in the interest of space the sort by author and sort by title list WILL be going, use Control+F to bring up the search function on your browser and use that. Also there will no longer be **UPDATED** and **NEW** tags so you have to check the latest update post to know.

Updated up to 4th April. Continuez.

 

Also, JulNoWriMo thread link for you all:

 

http://www.coldplaying.com/forum/showthread.php?p=3152432#post3152432

 

I'm doing my first 50k of See Free for it.

i will NOT let this thread die! somebody post a fic!! :cry:

No one is posting anymore!

Now I'm going into fanfic withdrawal....:mad:

i'll try to write more of mine.

i have writers block right now. :(

 

 

i'll try to get through it!! :D

well, i'm writing as we speak but it sucks...:( trust me...it really does this time! super coldplay was just a lucky break!

i prolly won't post it for awhile tho:\...I'M BUILDING THE SUSPENSE!

 

suspense my ass :whip:

 

 

:lol:

:D

heeey amy !!

Emma!!!!Hey:hug:

hows your story coming:whip:

 

 

:lol:

eerrrmm going good :P x

 

well sorta

:lol:good;)

 

so how are you?:D

im gr8 thanks u x