Who Know Why was really good Dianna:)

 

And thanks Marisa:nice:

Who Knows Why was so sad and cute and adorable and i loved it. :wacky:

 

katieeeeee! i'm excited to see what happens when they finally meet up with Guy :dance:

I'm pretty excited to write it as well. Well, actually I've writtne it. I just have to type it.

oh, i was supposed to say something bad about it! :P

well....

 

 

 

 

... oh! i believe at one point you said "at all" twice in one sentence.

you should fix that. :P

:D

Katie- Chapter 9 was funny and I enjoyed it very much.

How dare you make me smile!!

 

Brooke-Where is my critique? Don't you love me anymore?

Di! Who Knows Why was so sweet :wacky:. Argh, I hate this constructive critisism business. :\ Can't I just say I loved it? 'Cause I did! :smug:

This is a long-winded reply. Scroll down if tl;dr.

 

 

 

A reply to Emma:

 

We're just afraid of offending each other, I think.

 

Guh, this is actually a forum-wide problem which I detest... never mind about that.

 

But if Sara does have a problem with the way we act/write, I would appreciate it if she would tell us outright instead of being "satirical" and putting her "amusing satire" into our thread. We don't bother anyone outside the thread, so I don't see why anyone feels the need to bother us.

 

Like the sites you gave us, Emma (I actually have seen those before, they're great)...those are helpful. Sara's story? Not so much. And it is disrespectful, actually. To everyone here. Not just the band.

 

Eh. I guess satire isn't meant to be flattering. I shouldn't say much more behind her back though, I promised myself to cut out a bit a while back.

 

thank you, emma.

do you actually read our stories?

not meant to sound bitter or anything, i was just thinking that you could make some critical comments on specific ones to help us out. if you want. :P

 

Now and then, if something catches my eye. I'm too busy with schoolwork and I probably couldn't CC until the end of next week since I'm in so much danger of failing the year (behind on work).

 

I have a few things to say regarding this fanfiction thing.

I don't know about the rest of you but I do it as a fun way to pass the time.

If someone doesn't like what I write, I expect them to say so.

When I like a story that someone writes, I say so.

And I don't say so unless I mean it.

I don't expect to get famous writing fan fiction.

And anything that required research, I have always done it. There are some very intelligent people on this thread and some of them would not put up with unresearched material. (Most especially, Kyra). And that is a good thing.

 

And this is specifically to Cobalt---I don't know you or anything about you. I am sure you are an intelligent and well-meaning person. But I do not appreciate the fact that you come to this thread and proceed to lecture us on what is wrong with our writing.

I can't speak for the rest of the writers but there is a huge difference between slash (which I happen to write alot) and trash. It is a rare occasion when one of us writes a story that concerns "cheating." We rarely ever use any real family members (except for Simon) in stories. You must have us mixed up with that "other" thread.

 

No need to get your knickers in a twist, if you have... I don't really appreciate you coming to this forum seemingly just to post fanfiction and not join in in any sort of discussion apart from ones pertaining to fanfics, but that's beside the point here.

I'm not saying everyone's writing is BAD, I'm pointing out a few little habits that are very easy to get into, and some sites that contain a bit of help.

 

I was gonna reply to the rest but that would just make more offtopic arguments.

 

Quick Question, does ye be from LJ? It would explain a fair bit.

 

Oh, and saying you like something is fine. You don't HAVE to give CC if you don't have any to think of. Saying what you thought were the good points and maybe what you could improve on is pretty much it, it's not all what's bad I guess.

I understand everything you said. I am sorry that I don't know what LJ is so I can't say if I am from there are not.

As for coming here to post fanfics and not joining any discussions, that won't be a problem any more.:)

LJ, LiveJournal.

I didn't specifically demand you to join discussions, you know.

Katie- Chapter 9 was funny and I enjoyed it very much.

How dare you make me smile!!

 

Brooke-Where is my critique? Don't you love me anymore?

 

 

hmm...

 

*pulls a Katie*

it wasn't long enough. :wacky:

Who Knows Why: :heart::heart::heart::heart:

 

Perfectnessss. :wacky:

So, guys. I'm about halfway through the next chapter of my story and I've developed a nasty case of...writers block. *dramatic chord*

 

It's extremely difficult writing romance; I don't know how you people do it. :mad:

You're going to have to be patient with me, since it's my first time writing a story like this. Angst I can do, no problem. But this...:uhoh2:

it's OK, kyra, i understand completely.

Okay, thanks. I hate posting chapters late like Thalia...

:bigcry: But at least I'm not as bad as she is.

 

 

:P

oh, i was supposed to say something bad about it! :P

well....

 

 

 

 

... oh! i believe at one point you said "at all" twice in one sentence.

you should fix that. :P

:D

Haha. OK, I'll fix it then!:D

Katie- Chapter 9 was funny and I enjoyed it very much.

How dare you make me smile!!

Thanks so much:hug:

That's my evil plan:evilgrin::P

hmm...

 

*pulls a Katie*

it wasn't long enough. :wacky:

"laugh3:

So, guys. I'm about halfway through the next chapter of my story and I've developed a nasty case of...writers block. *dramatic chord*

 

It's extremely difficult writing romance; I don't know how you people do it. :mad:

You're going to have to be patient with me, since it's my first time writing a story like this. Angst I can do, no problem. But this...:uhoh2:

It is difficult. I completely understand that Kyra. I once spent 5 hours writing one chapter of my story:uhoh:

 

I'm sure you'll get through it though:hug:

Brooke I can't find that mistake:uhoh:

:escaping:

 

 

:escaping2:

 

"he didn't at all enjoy the lovely harmonies of Chris and Jonny at all."

Take all the time you need, Kyra.

 

NO PRESSURE. :whip:

 

 

:P!

:escaping:

 

 

:escaping2:

 

"he didn't at all enjoy the lovely harmonies of Chris and Jonny at all."

 

Thanks:)

*edits*

you're welcome! :nice:

I think I'll write another chapter of How Long Before I Get In coz I'm bored

That's okay, you don't have to.

"The lowering sun was casting golden rays through the canopy of leaves, and it looked heavenly. I decided that I would write about it when I got home."

 

WHAT A DORK!! :P i love it. :wacky:

 

aww, poor Chris. :(

Well, he's a lyricist, right? :shrug: :P