Naww, thanks Brooke! :heart: It's gonna be a long one! Get excited...

 

 

oooh, excitement!

 

i am trying my best to get one of my fics finished so that i can start posting within the next few weeks...

:dance:

 

And I will post the next chapter of Fight for Every Dream as soon as I've finished it... :tongue:

The Yard: Oh my. Oh my. The detail in just the first chapter is mind blowing! I feel like you took a movie camera and had it roll across the scene as it played out, because I was able to really visualize the entire thing. I'm greatly excited to see where this train is going to take us, can I sit up front?

 

Fight for every dream: I was confused for a second upon reading the first paragraph, but then as I continued it made sense, that was pretty clever. Interesting plot so far, I'm kind of curious as to how the title is going to play in, so I look forward to more!

Right just so y'all know, Dianna is back and is writing with fire! I urge, no I demand that y'all read her latest stories, they are wonderful! The Yard is a passion filled Chris and Jonny story and Frozen, frozen is like my own personal therapy session, it has the mysterious Guy, but he is not so mysterious as he let's us into his thoughts. But y'all need NEED to read them both! Kay? Good, now chop chop and then write up some reviews! :P

i loved frozen it s so nice and the mysterious Guy really is so :wacky:

and dianna u always make him so human in ur stories, he sounds like a normal guy with insecurities

 

and im just going to read the yard now

Frozen, is like totally fantastic ! I loved it !

The story is so well written that you can almost feel what he feels (?!)

I just wrote a fanfic, called The Right People, two chapters are up!!!

Sara---THE RIGHT PEOPLE---I love the way this is written.

That totally cracked me up when he said their music is shit!

Looking forward to more!

:D Chapter 3 coming right up... :lol:

So.......

How's it going, everyone?

 

I read The Story Dianna and Brooke Wrote, but i never reviewed it: Seriously. This is hilarious. :laugh3:

Fight for Every Dream: This is quite good. Is there more to read???

The Right People: "You see, I liked to carry around notebooks with me so that anytime I thought of good song lyrics I could jot them down and think about them later." <--- I actually do this. :lol:

The Measure of a Man: I needed the parts with sappiness. No one is ever sappy anymore, and I thought is was very sweet.

Frozen: I, too, really like the narrative parts in this!

Oh it's so good to see people coming back, I feel like we have all been in hibernation! :P

 

The Right People: Good Job for this being your first! I remember that feeling oh so very well. It's a fun, creative approach at telling this story! Keep up the good work! :)

The Right People: i like this story very much. and yay for new writers! :cheesy:

The Right People: Hi Sara! I'm April. And I love your story! It's really good to see new writers, and it's great for a first fic! :heart:

The Yard: this is lovely Dianna! :wacky: I love a bit of Buckin love.... :jbcm:

what on earth chloe :P

dont u love my dreams

Chapter 16

Chloe and Chris went for a walk and Chris could see that something was troubling her and driving her crazy so he begged to know what was going on Chloe didn’t know what to say or anything but she told him the truth “I’m pregnant” she said nervously Chris was shocked he knew something was up but he didn’t know that it was going to be that serious he jumped for joy and gave her the biggest hug. He was so happy that he started to cry Chloe wiped the tears away and said “let’s go home” so they did and Chloe made Chris a hot chocolate, Chloe made the best hot chocolates in the world she would put whipped cream on top and sprinkles but never gave away the special ingredient. Chloe was going to be a great mum and Chris still couldn’t believe it he was going to be a dad everything was running through his mind, changing dirty nappies, bedtime stories, cubby houses Chris couldn’t wait. Chloe and Chris had prepared everything and they were so excited they couldn’t wait to be parents, they both came to an agreement because they were so in love and they wanted to spend the rest of their lives together in each other’s arms, then they should get married but because they were very famous they didn’t want the paparazzi onto them so Chris made the decision of just signing the papers, this did make Chloe upset when you’re a little girl you think as yourself as the princess meeting the prince having a magical wedding and happily ever after but in the end it didn’t matter because she was spending the rest of her life with her Chrissy Bear. Chris insisted that he would go to the hospital with Chloe for a checkup the nurse looked down at Chloe with a concerned look the nurse went out if the room and brought another doctor in, the doctor looked down at Chloe and said “maim I am so sorry but you aren’t pregnant”………shock she didn’t say anything everything just paused for a minute Chris picked Chloe up from the hospital bed and said “let’s go home” so they did, the whole way home Chloe looked out the window she didn’t know what to say or think everything was completely blank her skin was covered in goose bumps. They got home and Chloe sat on the lounge her face was motionless Chris sat next to her and gave her a hug saying that everything will be alright when he kissed her forehead that was the end of it she busted into tears.

Chapter 17

*7 years later*

Chloe and Chris were the most famous couple in the whole world they had paparazzi randomly jump over their fence and into their backyard to see what was going on inside the Martin household. It had been a long and stressful 7 years but they got through it together thick and thin nothing could break them apart. On the 5th of December 2003 Chloe and Chris got married in a small chapel only containing both of their parents and all siblings after the ceremony they had a massive party, on the 14th of May 2004 Chloe gave birth to a little baby girl named Apple Louise Martin it was the most magical thing in the world, on the 8th of April in New York City Chloe gave birth to her second child and it was a beautiful baby boy named Moses Anthony Martin. It was a cozy little family and when Chloe & Chris thought about it they weren’t done with their family duties they still wanted to change nappies and things like that so Chloe fell pregnant again and they both got the shock of their lives when they found out but Chloe wasn’t only pregnant with one baby it was three, after this I’m sure they were completely done with their baby duties, so on the 25th of June Chloe gave birth to two baby girls Lhuna Alison Martin, Sharlice Elizabeth Martin and one boy named James Maxwell Martin. Chloe and Chris really were living in a fairytale they had five beautiful healthy children and a amazing career but most importantly they had each other, the couple grew old together and then died together from purely old age they had an amazing life and it is true if you just believe like Chloe your dreams will magically come true.

 

 

THE END!!!

LOL im an idiot wrong thread

Nawwwwwwwwwwwwww Chloe, your story was so sweet! :wacky:

Well done for a first fic, and I sure glad it finished so happily :dance:

 

We can all dream can't we? *coughs* Guy Berryman *coughs* :awesome:

Is it ok for a first fan fic

The Right People: "You see, I liked to carry around notebooks with me so that anytime I thought of good song lyrics I could jot them down and think about them later." <--- I actually do this. :lol:

 

The Right People: Good Job for this being your first! I remember that feeling oh so very well. It's a fun, creative approach at telling this story! Keep up the good work! :)

 

The Right People: i like this story very much. and yay for new writers! :cheesy:

 

The Right People: Hi Sara! I'm April. And I love your story! It's really good to see new writers, and it's great for a first fic! :heart:

 

YAY PEOPLE LOVE MY STORY :cheesy: It's a first!!

 

I love reading Coldplay fanfics :D 99% of them are great, I love them they are like JUST THAT AWESOME :D

Fight for Every Dream: :wideeyed:

 

The Right People: yay for the band forming! :blush:

 

Look After You:

"Well Jonny, I'll tell you what... I think we are home now."

awwwww :wacky::wacky:

 

@Chloe: nice ending :awesome:

The Right People: Well done for finishing your first fic!! :dance: And I think we all know that the nuclear bomb thing applies to two certain members of the band...

 

:shifty: :lol:

 

Look After You: :wacky: that was simply lovely. I loved how itwas so simple, but.... nawwwww Buckin love! :jbcm: :heart:

You people are all amazing :lol: If it weren't for you guys I never would've had the heart to ever try writing a fanfic :D Thanks guys!!!!

I decided to read How Infinite Is Space again, and I didn't even see the alternative ending the first time I read it!

 

And I just want you to know that I much prefer the first ending :lol: I can't deal with lack of Buckin. It's simply too distressing for my brain.

:freak: